FalconLover420
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It was nice AND hot (Miho is just 
), but my only gripe with this was the Miho plot. The MC keeps telling Miho to watch out about that guy and she keeps shrugging it off like its nothing. When he finally got proof and tells her, she goes to a conference with the guy the MC been talking about like wtf
I can understand Asuna due to MC being complicated but Miho? She trusted the shady dude more than the MC
), but my only gripe with this was the Miho plot. The MC keeps telling Miho to watch out about that guy and she keeps shrugging it off like its nothing. When he finally got proof and tells her, she goes to a conference with the guy the MC been talking about like wtf I can understand Asuna due to MC being complicated but Miho? She trusted the shady dude more than the MC
this game is horrendous, i gave it a 1 star review, and it got deleted, anyone know why?
bro, are you really wasting your time commenting and asking that when you find this game bad? i played games that i taught are horrendous too, i ignore the thread and move on.
Because if your criticism is not objective, it will most likely be deleted.
Juerhullycin
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yeah, the story writing is lazy af and we can accurately predict how the story for both of MCs sisters will go. Which is an absolute waste of talent if the Lis characterisation is anything to go by. IF dev, on the other hand, just ripped off some ntr doujinshi, it would explain why the plot is how it is. MC had all he needed to shut down that shit with Miho on day two.
Peanut, please add cowgirl and reverse cowgirl scenes for Miho in the new update. I love your game and we'd love to see Miho's ass bounce in those positions, haha. Please make it happen.
SirLecherous
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Aren't these games primarily for sex/sexual scenes, how we get there is often inconsequential .In this indie nsfw gamer space all isn't allotted,as most individuals are solo hobbyist devoting their time.The story which unfolds is often from their own world view.
Here we have a dev with a small following dropping a game then follows up with an update containing sex/sexual animated scenes 3 months after.We literally got an entire arc. Meanwhile seasoned greedy devs earning the average(or close) yearly income of a US citizen .And cannot afford the time to release non mediocre updates in under 8 months .
It's the Milf I grew up with and her daughters tale which other characterization can their be? Do I think it's a good story NO lol but content > story any day.
If you want a good story go read a book.
KingPeanut carry on and also request a game dev badge from the mods. Btw are the renders blender?
Juerhullycin
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others are bad too, just consume. Thanks for this pearl of wisdom ohh, sage one.
I have some pearls of wisdom of my own: "if you want pure porn, go look some up on Pornhub."
The "games" are visual novels. No the way is not inconsequential or he would cut the crap and made a gallery were you can click on the animations without all the fluff, but that somehow doesn't seem like his motivation.
Dev is still wasting his potential.
Boardguy
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I would story less wasting potential and more that Miho's story and decent emotional bit but the the creeps account actively fucks things story wise and Miho going any where with him is bit stupid, even with her clearly being worried. The second Warachi hears she is your foster mother he shoulda deleted the account so the MC would have zero evidence at the time. Literally there is no way to spin the stuff he posted on Miho as jokes. Its sexual harassments at best and threats of sex intent at worst.
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Juerhullycin
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Exactly, it's lazy af storytelling. MC had everything he needed. Even if he had deleted the account, the police and the Social Media company can still look anything up regardless.
So, yes, suing him would still be on the table, it's another topic if there is anything to get from it, tho.
SirLecherous
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Boardguy Juerhullycin can you name a few games or 1 with the opposite of lazy af story telling. Idk maybe dev can be enlightened by Teh Wizdomz of you 2. Just saying as subjective as it is all stories are lackluster or I'm just playing lackluster story games.It's the typical story. The recommendation "Funny thing "is fantastic , but who here implements such a realistic narrative...no one.
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Boardguy
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Eh, I can see it being used as a gag at the start of a game or in a comedic one, but you are right. I ain't even calling it The Miho story lazy, it's just that the account still being up is an issue. No-eyes deleting the account woulda stopped protag from getting shit since most people dont know the info can be retrieved.
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Juerhullycin
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yeah, you listed shitty tropes and I criticise them in any other game they come up too. Also, tropes can be used good and they can be used bad. I can overlook if some bad tropes are used, but not if you use all of them paired with shity gameplay that only exists to pad the game.
Here, dev is using a linear sandbox, and we don't have to pretend it isn't half the time, we don't even get hints on what to do next, because it is not even a question in combination with weak ass tropes and NTR bait.
I can tell you now that the musician sister is being harassed by some dude at band practice, be it a supposed boyfriend of one of their bandmates or their manager. She acts distressed, and MC thinks she is on her period? really? come the fuck on.
also, not giving you other games because that's against site rules
I actually didn't mind the first 2 girls being NTR bait. Still, adding the greyed out NTR options is kinda weird if it's not being implemented? But I know another game that does that to troll so it's w/e. However, I hope not every girl's arc is just "oh this situation is kinda sus, is she being taken advantage of? Better save her last second and get some flashbacks to explain why she did this dumbass shit"
Juerhullycin
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The two sisters are reasonably positioned for exactly that already. Both exhibited sudden and unexplained shifts in their normal behaviour, which will later be used as a setup for more NTR bait.
Well, hopefully not.
Edit: I don't really care about the plot being NTR bait. My only 2 issues (that I can easily look past because I'm enjoying the game) are if every character's plot is the same (repetitiveness is boring, not the NTR bait) and that the main character has 0 common sense. He doesn't have to be a genius, but I hope he learns from being a dumbass so far and improves.
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SirLecherous
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yoo lmfao idk why I def can see it happening,zero chill .Idk man giving a pass it's buds first game , nice animations and an update with content .After being dealt with by all these sadist devs . I stand with KingPeanut and his first release.
I still think this is would be a great way to do the tone shift for the game while still having some sort of tension.
Specifically: Having him rizz up the sister/childhood friend/mom/etc of an antagonist would flip the trope on its head in a refreshing way. MC fucking over bad/shitty people would be a W and the viewer gets to enjoy some spice by making antagonists break instead of the same overused tropes.
Even if not that sort of plot, use these tiresome the NTR bait tropes early on as a pivot in the plot to end up fueling MC to get it together and take shit more seriously about his LIs. I don't think it would be a bad way to then do it. Give purpose to a part of the plot some don't like as a way for the MC to see some character growth.