loikl
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- Feb 14, 2018
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It's not bad, but certainly this with a male protagonists (not tadano), would be more striking, something like "the MC transfers to that school and corrupts komi-san" something like that could work.
BUT it's just my opinion... still good luck.
BUT it's just my opinion... still good luck.