Dogorti

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Jan 23, 2021
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I don't want to be rude but doing this and believing that it's a good idea to publish it here seems a bit dumb to me, it's fine that you want to develop a game but there's hardly any content, it's bugged, and there's nothing special about it. there is no point in publishing this in the state it is in, there is nothing to see
 

worldknower

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Jun 11, 2018
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Thank you for posting your game here, but it needs alot of work and polish. Dont let the negative comments stop you from developing the game you want.
I will say though, having someone playtest, or doing it yourself before uploading is probably gonna be helpful.
There are many possible changes/improvements that people have already suggested in here already.
 
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terirheken

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Jan 7, 2019
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so as usual with many of these *cough* games ...
Images found on the internet crudely injected into a sort of WYSIWYG editor and still manages to put so many broken links and code into the resulting mess.
It's almost like it's done on purpose^^

But at least patreon works fine. :D

And seriously why does it feel like each of these devs has shitty hardware that just breaks while developing their respective games?

I have seen stuff like this on too many of those patreon pages:

" Last post I made I explained how the upcoming version was going to be released soon. Unfortunately, my computer broke and I have yet to acquire a new one. It's now been a few months, but I have been able to start again on my phone. It's a lot more difficult, especially with the imaging, but I'm trying to figure it all out. I will be releasing a crude version today with some imaging. Please await for more updates. "
 

Dalbert33

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Dec 21, 2020
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I know its 0.1 but half of stuff is missing....I normally love these types of games but...cooommmee oooonnnn,man
 

Nota Bao

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May 14, 2020
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I loved reading all of these! Alright, so quick rundown. Yes, the game is very bad, and a lot of the images are crazy sizes. I will be trying to scale them correctly as soon as I can! I will keep you posted here. Would it be a good idea to re-upload later at a more.. respectable time? When the game is a bit more developed?
 

Bill Temple

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Overview:
You are a young and beautiful 18 year old girl from Riverton Heights, woken up unbeknownst to where she is. Can you survive with no recollection of your past?​

Thread Updated: 2023-05-01
Release Date: 2023-05-01
Developer: Nota Bao -
Censored: No
Version: 0.1
You are a young and beautiful 18 year old girl from Riverton Heights, woken up in a location unbeknownst to where she is you.
That's not how "unbeknownst" is used.
POV shouldn't change mid-sentence. If it starts with 2nd-person pronouns, the sentence shouldn't refer to the same person/character later with 3rd-person pronouns.
I suspect that "woken" should be "waking", but I'm not going to play to find out.
 
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Centar

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the images the ones in are all on the html, but still there is a lot of images missing and the text is plain, really green

electronics, dildo and buttplug are pretty useless, with the laptop you can only "watch" porn and masturbate, you also live for free, you never get asked (or have the option) to pay
 
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Philjd

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Jan 1, 2018
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Has potential, but that is all currently, needs a lot of TLC even for what is presented now.
 

kino4ka

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Aug 6, 2018
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sadly a lot of pics missing

but good luck with your project, I hope it's getting completed.
 

CutieLvr

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Jun 3, 2020
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Just like the guy above me just said, a lot of pics were missing. Good luck with building on your game. The girl looks hot and the concept is exciting. Is it possible to add those missing pics with a mod of some sort, before the next actual update? Is she in a totally different realm or dimension? It would be nice to find her parents and then you can include a little incest, most of us like that.
 
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