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Which is your favorite character?

  • Ada

    Votes: 180 22.0%
  • Ursula

    Votes: 153 18.7%
  • Rachel

    Votes: 54 6.6%
  • Lana

    Votes: 350 42.8%
  • Other

    Votes: 80 9.8%

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Soul_Devour

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I didn't even see her on the train, nor did I see her ass. Saw her at the beach, which moved me to the restaurant, then saw her again at the beach, and fucked her...
That's honestly kinda odd since I went from the restaurant to the beach, then saw her at the beach and fucked her. Your game's Nikki story seems to be completely out of order. I don't even know how to replicate that to offer you a possible solution based on that.
 
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That's honestly kinda odd since I went from the restaurant to the beach, then saw her at the beach and fucked her. Your game's Nikki story seems to be completely out of order. I don't even know how to replicate that to offer you a possible solution based on that.
I remember just spamming the "Go to the Beach" Button cuz I was bored and I expected nothing to happen, and then it said that I craved sugar, ie the restaurant scene. Right now, I just went and tried doing something before it, since I saved, and I did some of the Rachel story, where I convinced her that I could be discrete more than she could, and it did the same thing, it sent me to the restaurant, saying like "The Homeless Girl" as if I'd have seen her before, despite not doing so. Then I spammed the beach again, and it sent me to the scene of me fucking her
 

nikraria435

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Would be nice to

Maybe like a one night stand or something. Meeting the women of the first part or second part again during a story line.
I understand now, thanks. I'll keep that idea in mind, but for this game I'm already working in just the final scenes and I want to move on to other projects. In the next project I think I could use that, thanks again.

ok i dont know what to do at the powell storyline after meeting her daughter for the first time. i tell her her daughter is a "wayward" then i go to the beach to meet lana, then back to the beach to meet her brother. after that i cant find anyone anywhere else. i dont see powell anywhere. is ther some kind of oute i need to go to?
Did you start the game or are you using old savefiles, saddly that could be the problem.

I also feel like the game needs a standard gallery because I don't know if I'm missing a scene or not.
If you are using old savefiles could be that the explanation of that jump, because I changed things.
Nikki story works for visits, I mean, if you are stuck at some point, and you need to visit a lot of times places for nothing, Nikki have a +1point and when you get +50nikkipoints (just to call that something) Nikki appears, and the rest of the story it's the same, you unlock Nikki visiting places in the game.
Somebody told here that one thing he didn't like is get stuck and lost time to find something, and then I thought in that idea.
By the way, Gloria works with the same system, but you need to watch all the news before she appears.
Ok, with that in mind, the save file could have some "nikkipoints" and then jump to a different part of the story instead of the next part of the story.
Have this any sense? Maybe I could try to explain it in another way.

Also, I'm talking with a programmer to commission a new gallery, so I'll keep the repeat option, and I'll add one with only the pictures for the final version of the game.

After making a completely fresh run and going through everything all over again, I managed to get Nikki's ending finally (which left me confused and hoping to see more of her hopefully in a future game as her ass truly was tremendous), and most of the other side content in the game. I just can't get Albert's no matter what I do. I feel like Albert's content is truly bugged as I have no way to get into it, no matter what I try. Shame, as I wanted to get some revenge on that big booty femboy for fucking with the MC's girls so many times. Also for Ada's NTR scene, I wish there wasn't a blackout moment during the insertion. Their reaction during the insertion is one of the best moments, and it's kinda disappointing looking back at it that it was cut out to skip to her being penetrated. So I can agree with someone who mentioned before that the NTR being mostly playback videos in this case being somewhat unsatisfying, as it feels a lot more personal and better in real time.
My final comment is about the
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Either way, as I said before, great update! I hope to see a patch for the Albert scene, and I can't wait to see the final battle the MC goes through at the Mansion. I hope MC can get some sort of happy ending, even in death if that may end up happening to him in this H.P. Lovecraftian story!
I guess I have a mess in this update, In my mind all of this was so clear, this is one of the things why I'm so happy to make a thread here, because with more people playing the game it's easy to change things for the best.
Firstly, thanks again for all the time you take to reply with a lot of details.
Albert thing should appear in Rachel's story, but every story is mixed, so I know is confused. I did that at purpose, but maybe I should change it.
At one moment, you are talking with Albert in the arcade about Rachel. He tells you look so tired and you should rest.
The option with a heart tells something like "where is Rachel?" so you should avoid that and tell him "you are right"
Then Albert offer you to go with you to your apartment, and you can say ok. In the apartment he looks at the window and then you can choose if 2take revenge" or not.
Let me know if this works, because I think other people watch the Albert's scene.

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We will see if the Mc have a good end or not, thanks for playing and comment!
I didn't even see her on the train, nor did I see her ass. Saw her at the beach, which moved me to the restaurant, then saw her again at the beach, and fucked her...
I think that the way it should be, no?

I remember just spamming the "Go to the Beach" Button cuz I was bored and I expected nothing to happen, and then it said that I craved sugar, ie the restaurant scene. Right now, I just went and tried doing something before it, since I saved, and I did some of the Rachel story, where I convinced her that I could be discrete more than she could, and it did the same thing, it sent me to the restaurant, saying like "The Homeless Girl" as if I'd have seen her before, despite not doing so. Then I spammed the beach again, and it sent me to the scene of me fucking her
I explained Nikki system in this comment, please check it out. The first explanation I have in mind is you are using old savefiles, but if that's not the case maybe erasing the persistent data from the folder could work, make a backup of the file just in case.
Let me know if you have more doubts or questions.

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Thanks again for your comments, I'll make some notes to add the disclaimer, probably add a menu to play each story separated, revise better the Lana story, and I'll let you know how it's going on with the gallery commission!
 
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The first explanation I have in mind is you are using old savefiles, but if that's not the case maybe erasing the persistent data from the folder could work, make a backup of the file just in case.
Well, this is my very first time playing this game ever, so I doubt it's a save file issue, and I've never messed with the persistent file, so I'm not sure why it'd be an issue...


I think that the way it should be, no?
Well, I wouldn't know honestly. As I said, I've never played this game before, but I hear things people are saying about seeing her ass and meeting her in the subway, and as I said with the gallery, I don't know if I missed anything for sure. From the dialogue, it felt like I missed something or some things before the scenes, but I'm not sure if that's a writing thing, or a bug thing, you know?

This game would also greatly benefit from a guide, especially with things like Nikki, or saying if that's the end of a path in that Act and that it'll pick up in Act 2 so I'm not going to the Arcade blindly to see if Lana is back...


Also, I'm talking with a programmer to commission a new gallery, so I'll keep the repeat option, and I'll add one with only the pictures for the final version of the game.
The current gallery you have is, in my opinion, halfway to good. You can do what you believe is best, but I feel like it'd be better if it were more like another game I've played that I think has the best gallery I've seen, Superhuman. When you choose the Gallery option, you see the entire gallery, which has categories. First by All, then by each individual girl. You are able to see every scene in the game, ordered by the time you can see them in-game, but the ones that you haven't seen in-game are blurred. When you choose one, you are able to go through the scene, not just the images, much like yours. I feel like the main things to focus on are categorizing the scenes per girl, and maybe per Act if you want to. And to show all available scenes but blurry and unable to be seen until you see them in-game. I feel like this would make it so players are more willing to experiment with choices in future playthroughs, or at least, go back and make different choices in old saves. For example, me. I wanted to try to make more Non-Heart choices for some girls, like Ada and Rachel, but because the gallery couldn't justify my experimentation, I decided against it, since there was a chance I was not gonna get anything and just waste my time. If I see that there is still an unseen scene with one of the girls, I could go and try things to try to get it. If I don't get it, I could just ask online. This brings me to my next point, it could lessen the need for a guide. Not completely, but a fair bit. For example, if I see a scene missing, I could come here and ask what it is, and how to get it, if I can't get it myself, instead of doing what we've been doing and being all "There may or may not be something here I missed, I'm not sure, it feels like there is." If there is no scene missing in the gallery, then we probably didn't miss anything, and if we did, it probably wasn't something major. Hopefully something I said helped.
 
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Well, this is my very first time playing this game ever, so I doubt it's a save file issue, and I've never messed with the persistent file, so I'm not sure why it'd be an issue...



Well, I wouldn't know honestly. As I said, I've never played this game before, but I hear things people are saying about seeing her ass and meeting her in the subway, and as I said with the gallery, I don't know if I missed anything for sure. From the dialogue, it felt like I missed something or some things before the scenes, but I'm not sure if that's a writing thing, or a bug thing, you know?

This game would also greatly benefit from a guide, especially with things like Nikki, or saying if that's the end of a path in that Act and that it'll pick up in Act 2 so I'm not going to the Arcade blindly to see if Lana is back...



The current gallery you have is, in my opinion, halfway to good. You can do what you believe is best, but I feel like it'd be better if it were more like another game I've played that I think has the best gallery I've seen, Superhuman. When you choose the Gallery option, you see the entire gallery, which has categories. First by All, then by each individual girl. You are able to see every scene in the game, ordered by the time you can see them in-game, but the ones that you haven't seen in-game are blurred. When you choose one, you are able to go through the scene, not just the images, much like yours. I feel like the main things to focus on are categorizing the scenes per girl, and maybe per Act if you want to. And to show all available scenes but blurry and unable to be seen until you see them in-game. I feel like this would make it so players are more willing to experiment with choices in future playthroughs, or at least, go back and make different choices in old saves. For example, me. I wanted to try to make more Non-Heart choices for some girls, like Ada and Rachel, but because the gallery couldn't justify my experimentation, I decided against it, since there was a chance I was not gonna get anything and just waste my time. If I see that there is still an unseen scene with one of the girls, I could go and try things to try to get it. If I don't get it, I could just ask online. This brings me to my next point, it could lessen the need for a guide. Not completely, but a fair bit. For example, if I see a scene missing, I could come here and ask what it is, and how to get it, if I can't get it myself, instead of doing what we've been doing and being all "There may or may not be something here I missed, I'm not sure, it feels like there is." If there is no scene missing in the gallery, then we probably didn't miss anything, and if we did, it probably wasn't something major. Hopefully something I said helped.
Yes, you help a lot. I don't think to add all of that, but one thing is so cool for the amount of content of the game, the blur pictures marking how many pictures are in the game.
About Nikki, she has only two pictures, one only showing her panties and the other one in the apartment.
The story is short and confuse at purpose ( I mean the story has a mistery at purpose, like who is Nikki, why he felt for the MC, etc...) because it was a character of mine (I think you could find a very old picture of her in my hentaifoundry, but it is a spoiler, so maybe you don't want to search about it.)

But even with that, I'll revise the nikki story to see if it's something wrong.

I'll make a playthroughs for this update as soon as possible, also I want to share some character sheet I have.

Thank you for your tips, I have a mess in my head and read that kind of things is always helpful to clarify my ideas.

Thanks for your patience!
 

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I guess I have a mess in this update, In my mind all of this was so clear, this is one of the things why I'm so happy to make a thread here, because with more people playing the game it's easy to change things for the best.
Firstly, thanks again for all the time you take to reply with a lot of details.
Albert thing should appear in Rachel's story, but every story is mixed, so I know is confused. I did that at purpose, but maybe I should change it.
At one moment, you are talking with Albert in the arcade about Rachel. He tells you look so tired and you should rest.
The option with a heart tells something like "where is Rachel?" so you should avoid that and tell him "you are right"
Then Albert offer you to go with you to your apartment, and you can say ok. In the apartment he looks at the window and then you can choose if 2take revenge" or not.
Let me know if this works, because I think other people watch the Albert's scene.

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We will see if the Mc have a good end or not, thanks for playing and comment!

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Thanks again for your comments, I'll make some notes to add the disclaimer, probably add a menu to play each story separated, revise better the Lana story, and I'll let you know how it's going on with the gallery commission!
Oh my gosh, I never thought to click the alternate option to go into the Albert scene, since it was the start of Rachel's route, it'd make people think it'd be for the best to click the heart option. I didn't think If you chose the alternate option you could get a scene with Albert. It's a good idea in premiss, but without some sort of hint ingame that choosing that option could lead towards something else, no one would ever realize it. It's kind of like finding a secret Easter Egg, but It makes me worried that since I chose that option, I may well have ruined Rachel's Storyline to be Lust only from then on. With how you explained it to me before too, I thought the Albert scene was at the end of Rachel's Storyline, not at the very beginning. I'm glad to have found it now though, thank you!

Also, I'm glad to have been able to help somewhat is all the feedback I've been giving. I'm not lying when I say you're one of my favorite lewd game developers and Artists, probably my number one at the moment. If I had the spare money to support you, I would and sometimes I've almost tempted myself into doing so, but I just can't spare it right now, I apologize. Being able to help on the sidelines as I am here alongside others, and seeing your amazing work makes me happy. I've loved all your characters throughout all your games, even the Abandoned game. I can't wait to see your next project as well.

Also, one last thing now that everything is cleared up, and I've found all the scenes finally, I noticed throughout playing there is some missing dialogue, mainly on MC's side. Where the person he's talking to would say or ask something, and MC's side would just be left completely blank, name and all. I just wanted to report on that as well. Thank you for your hard work, Nikraria!

Edit 1: I played the Albert scene finally, and honestly I didn't think I'd care for it as much, but it's pretty good for what it is. I think this is the first time I've seen in any of Nikraria's work a man-on-man scene and... it was pretty hot. I think one thing I appreciate about Nikraria's work is the consistency of characters, like everyone's proportions stay the same throughout the story. The MC isn't some small cock cuck, even with love scenes he can rival most of the other male characters since most of them are the same size. I didn't expect Albert to be so open sexually, but I think because this I have grown to appreciate his character a little more. He doesn't dislike the MC (he might even like him after this), but Albert is just a sexually open character, who even invites the MC to join in sexual bouts if I remember correctly, it's just the MC denies it if I remember. So it's not like Albert is trying to take the girls from him, it's just the girls care more about cock after their encounters with him and his group. So Albert seems like a good guy, I like that Nikraria seems to leave it open for there to possibly be more sexual encounters in the future with Albert (if MC survives), though you have to sacrifice Rachel if you want Albert. (Just to let people know, you do not get Albert as a romanceable choice in the end. Rachel just get's forced into the Lust route so she no longer is romanceable.)
 
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Oh my gosh, I never thought to click the alternate option to go into the Albert scene, since it was the start of Rachel's route, it'd make people think it'd be for the best to click the heart option. I didn't think If you chose the alternate option you could get a scene with Albert. It's a good idea in premiss, but without some sort of hint ingame that choosing that option could lead towards something else, no one would ever realize it. It's kind of like finding a secret Easter Egg, but It makes me worried that since I chose that option, I may well have ruined Rachel's Storyline to be Lust only from then on. With how you explained it to me before too, I thought the Albert scene was at the end of Rachel's Storyline, not at the very beginning. I'm glad to have found it now though, thank you!

Also, I'm glad to have been able to help somewhat is all the feedback I've been giving. I'm not lying when I say you're one of my favorite lewd game developers and Artists, probably my number one at the moment. If I had the spare money to support you, I would and sometimes I've almost tempted myself into doing so, but I just can't spare it right now, I apologize. Being able to help on the sidelines as I am here alongside others, and seeing your amazing work makes me happy. I've loved all your characters throughout all your games, even the Abandoned game. I can't wait to see your next project as well.

Also, one last thing now that everything is cleared up, and I've found all the scenes finally, I noticed throughout playing there is some missing dialogue, mainly on MC's side. Where the person he's talking to would say or ask something, and MC's side would just be left completely blank, name and all. I just wanted to report on that as well. Thank you for your hard work, Nikraria!

Edit 1: I played the Albert scene finally, and honestly I didn't think I'd care for it as much, but it's pretty good for what it is. I think this is the first time I've seen in any of Nikraria's work a man-on-man scene and... it was pretty hot. I think one thing I appreciate about Nikraria's work is the consistency of characters, like everyone's proportions stay the same throughout the story. The MC isn't some small cock cuck, even with love scenes he can rival most of the other male characters since most of them are the same size. I didn't expect Albert to be so open sexually, but I think because this I have grown to appreciate his character a little more. He doesn't dislike the MC (he might even like him after this), but Albert is just a sexually open character, who even invites the MC to join in sexual bouts if I remember correctly, it's just the MC denies it if I remember. So it's not like Albert is trying to take the girls from him, it's just the girls care more about cock after their encounters with him and his group. So Albert seems like a good guy, I like that Nikraria seems to leave it open for there to possibly be more sexual encounters in the future with Albert (if MC survives), though you have to sacrifice Rachel if you want Albert. (Just to let people know, you do not get Albert as a romanceable choice in the end. Rachel just get's forced into the Lust route so she no longer is romanceable.)
You are right, I think I said it in other recent post, but I'll add a mark in the menus that goes to some hentai scene, diferent from the heart to make diference between romance and just a happy night.
Also, probably I'll change the "all-girls-at-once", looks like the most part of people like the thigns separated.
Don't worry about the support, I forget some time ago to get a lot of money with this, a lot of great artist , just a few bucks ( I know life is shit for a lot of people and spend money on this kind of things is hard) is hard to choose one. I'm very happy with people who support me, maybe they are not a big crew, but for sure they are amazing! Always with kindly words, patience and caring about the project, I think that is gold. Don't missunderstand me , I'd love to make more money, but looking at the world right now I think I should be grateful.
Aside that, spent the time in play and report the mistakes in a polite way is a huge support too, so thanks again man!
I'm really glad you can enoy the project, I hope not dissapoint you with the end of the story.

By the way, you are right, Albert scene is the first yaoi thing I did in my life, I'm glad you like it ^^
 
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You are right, I think I said it in other recent post, but I'll add a mark in the menus that goes to some hentai scene, diferent from the heart to make diference between romance and just a happy night.
Also, probably I'll change the "all-girls-at-once", looks like the most part of people like the thigns separated.
Don't worry about the support, I forget some time ago to get a lot of money with this, a lot of great artist , just a few bucks ( I know life is shit for a lot of people and spend money on this kind of things is hard) is hard to choose one. I'm very happy with people who support me, maybe they are not a big crew, but for sure they are amazing! Always with kindly words, patience and caring about the project, I think that is gold. Don't missunderstand me , I'd love to make more money, but looking at the world right now I think I should be grateful.
Aside that, spent the time in play and report the mistakes in a polite way is a huge support too, so thanks again man!
I'm really glad you can enoy the project, I hope not dissapoint you with the end of the story.

By the way, you are right, Albert scene is the first yaoi thing I did in my life, I'm glad you like it ^^
I remember you mentioning that before to someone else's post. That would be a helpful addition to the game as it would also reveal that there may be an alternate scene you can get with someone else.
I'm a bit confused by what you mean there with the "All-girls-at-once", and keeping things separate. Do you mean the harem's bad-end scenes?
I appreciate that you don't take it to heart that some of us can't contribute like others can, and still treat us like valuable members all the same. You deserve all the support you can get, as you contribute just as much as others do with your work, helping people have enjoyable nights with your content.
I'm sure I'll enjoy it, no matter what way you take it since I just enjoy your content as it is. It's your story, and I hope you're able to take it in whatever way you want it to go!
 

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The game has a really god art desing, really, but the "short histories" each with a girl that you can't see again is not a good idea, the characters doesn't have any develop, and the MC neither...
I hope the Dev make at least a poll where the patreons can choise a girl that already had appeared and make a conclusion for her
 

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Yes it is, after check the virtual assistant, where you should ask all her questions with yes, you can find Lana at the arcade and then take her to the apartment with a new hentai scene.
The problem could be old save files, or maybe you didn't play the love route of Lana or you don't reach the act3.
Also, you can find the pictures in the CG at the first page of this same thread.
from Lana after not delivering the file for the "virtual assistant" I get stuck on a question that is "can you make plans...." and after that only the same question continues to appear and I can't exit the computer once I put the disk in..... is that... a bug or is that how it's supposed to be?
 

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One more thing above one commented a lot about the "bad ending of Harem" the truth although...... I must say in part what he says is true because...... I mean the "MC" does so much for the girls and if it sucks to have been "unfaithful" to them but...... after everything he did for them and that they basically let themselves be handled by others in front of him and Rachel for example who has participated in Gandbang they simply leave him..... with so much simplicity (although the threesome scene was good) I don't know if it feels good...... even for me it makes sense that the 3 could stay with the "MC" as his partners..... considering that the three girls have things in common and that the three were helped by the "MC"
 
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I wanted to ask if there is a bug with anyone else in the part where you need to talk to the artificial intelligence for lana,

(When I go to the last dialogue that asks about creating a plan, nothing happens and it still stays on the screen for me to use the dialogue)
. I'll try to continue the other routes and leave this one for last, I don't know if I need to finish them first

edit: a screenshot of the dialog that is not working for me Screenshot_20240813_203615_Ren'Py Plugin for JoiPlay.png
 

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from Lana after not delivering the file for the "virtual assistant" I get stuck on a question that is "can you make plans...." and after that only the same question continues to appear and I can't exit the computer once I put the disk in..... is that... a bug or is that how it's supposed to be?
Im with same problem
 
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