VN Ren'Py No Big Deal [v0.1.0] [ModestDL]

[LinkBox88]

Thank you for your feedback.
Kim and MC have a shared past, which will be revealed later in the story. She is a lawyer, and as such, she may have some professional characteristics such as cynicism and a thick skin. Dana treats everyone like dirt if they are lower in social status than her. Mercy can sometimes be rude, but deep down, she has the same little rebellious side that her sister Rosy has now. It seems that everyone LI else treats MC quite well.

Regarding the first impression, it is based on appearance rather than character. Please take the time to read through this topic carefully. I have tried to portray Tasha as sweet and calm, but some people have already commented that she looks ugly. Her sweet personality will not change that impression.

Additionally, I do not include MC's inner thoughts about whether he likes or dislikes a particular LI, as the player will make that decision. It would be confusing to write that the MC likes one LI, only for the player not to agree with that choice.

Tasha was the only character I vibed with because she was the only one that seemed to want to get along with the MC at all.

Kim really rubbed me the wrong way. It felt like when she kept bringing up the MC wanting to ogle strippers or how he just needs to stop swallow his pride and make some money that it was meant to be playful banter with someone that cares about you but it didn't come off that way. She just seemed to have a very low opinion of him. I needed flashes of affection or laughter or fond familiarity to tell me this is their dynamic rather than her being a bitch.

 

[Hamsunman]

Very good start. As far as first impressions go I think you've nailed it with this. I will check out the patreon

I liked all the ladies and liked a lot of the dialogue parts as well. There is enough there to create something storywise too. Can't wait for more content with Kim, Dana and Mercy in particular.

 

[goulet1995]

Thank you for your understanding. Even if I were to include lesbian content in the harem ending, it would be optional. I have planned five individual endings for the main LIs, and I am considering a harem ending as well. As a game developer, I have a lot of work to do, and this is a significant amount of work in my opinion. To be honest, the harem ending is still something that is early and naive to think about at this point.

when you say optional do you mean a choice that will stop any lesbian/bi action from happening at all. Or just the choice to not see those scenes but they still happened.

 

[ModestDL]

when you say optional do you mean a choice that will stop any lesbian/bi action from happening at all. Or just the choice to not see those scenes but they still happened.

FAQ
Will there be NTR in the game?
The LI's won't be in relationships with any other male characters, or in lesbian relationships either. They also won't have sex behind the MC's back, and they won't talk about anyone else's penis or how many lovers they've had.

If the question is about the harem ending, I would like to reiterate that I have not given it much thought yet, as it is still a long way off from this point in the story.

 

[goulet1995]

FAQ
Will there be NTR in the game?
The LI's won't be in relationships with any other male characters, or in lesbian relationships either. They also won't have sex behind the MC's back, and they won't talk about anyone else's penis or how many lovers they've had.

If the question is about the harem ending, I would like to reiterate that I have not given it much thought yet, as it is still a long way off from this point in the story.

yes was specific to the harem end alot of devs force lesbian/bi stuff to make a harem work i personally dont view that as any different than sharing the LI with another man. Also If i am only really interested in a harem ending ami better off waiting playing i have no interest in multiple playthroughs/ routes

 

[moovigym]

Tasha is goddess