VN Ren'Py No Fap Island [Ch. 5] [FapYeah]

[ytfninefive]

No, only played this current build. I can try to repro and/or debug it if it would help.

Totally get it being hard to see some of this stuff when you're in the weeds. I think Angel was the one that really stood out, so if that's something you feel like addressing in this game that might be the place to focus on.

Yeah, people definitely have strong opinions on this stuff, that's mine, do what works for you!

Good luck!

 

[MiltonPowers]

Hey ytfninefive, thanks for the in-depth feedback.

Regarding the bug where you get too many dates on the second day, did you load a save from a previous build? I think the variables I've used get bugged out sometimes with a new update.

Now that I look at it, I think you are valid in your observation that the level of teasing could be ramped up from the dates. My initial intention was to focus on building the relationship between the characters before having too much lewd scenes, but I think I could have balanced that better. It might be a thing I revisit later or bring these lessons into my next project. Sometimes development work feels like you're building the tracks as the train is speeding along so while I'm in the thick of writing, I don't always have the foresight to see these details.

I've also come to learn that having scenes of women playing with each other is a tricky subject and can be a bit divisive for some players. When I first added that FF scene some players didn't like that the LIs were doing stuff with other characters while some really enjoyed it. So this is the dilemma of do; I add scenes like this and piss off some fans or just exclude them? This is something I haven't fully decided yet, but I may find a way to add them and make them optional.

Thanks again for the detailed feedback and the kind words.

The way you have it now works for that scene. People that want to see it, can go and see it. Those that don't can go to bed.

 

[Bob69]

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[DanVam]

I played the current version and really enjoyed the game. Some minor nitpicks:

- at the end, when you are sms-ing with Tatiana at night the game seems to be missing some images (of the smses) and the player receives errors
- on the 2nd day, apparently randomly, I ended up in challenge after 2,3 or 4 dates, depending on the chocies
- imho, from the story perspective, it would be better to swap challenges, start with volleyball and escalate the next day to nurses roleplay. I guess you wanted to give players some spicy content early on, but now when there is more of it I would reconsider swapping it to keep better pacing
- I found it strange that a really tame volleyball game caused far more reaction from the MC than skinny-dipping with Tatiana (when he doesn't aknowledge her nudity at all throughout the scene in a stark contrast to the often excessive thoughts of the character you present in other scenes)

 

[FapYeah]

I played the current version and really enjoyed the game. Some minor nitpicks:

- at the end, when you are sms-ing with Tatiana at night the game seems to be missing some images (of the smses) and the player receives errors
- on the 2nd day, apparently randomly, I ended up in challenge after 2,3 or 4 dates, depending on the chocies
- imho, from the story perspective, it would be better to swap challenges, start with volleyball and escalate the next day to nurses roleplay. I guess you wanted to give players some spicy content early on, but now when there is more of it I would reconsider swapping it to keep better pacing
- I found it strange that a really tame volleyball game caused far more reaction from the MC than skinny-dipping with Tatiana (when he doesn't aknowledge her nudity at all throughout the scene in a stark contrast to the often excessive thoughts of the character you present in other scenes)

Thanks, glad to hear you're enjoying the game.

With the Tatiana sms-ing part, I checked the scene again and found that the phone accidentally hides for one line of dialogue. Is that what you meant? The selfies she sends to MC seems to be working too. Or are you referring to the emojis?

Is your 2nd day experience that you sometimes have 2-4 dates before moving on to the challenge? I think that'll mean something in my variables isn't adding up. If I can't find it I don't think it'll break the game going forward as things will work differently from day 3 onwards.

I understand what you mean about the challenges should be in order of scaling spiciness and I agree. Swapping the order of the challenges may not be so simple though as I believe there are dialogues that reference these events scattered about in different order. Could be something I'll look into but it'll be low priority.

That's a good point about the skinny dipping scene. I could add in a few lines of acknowledgment there but I think I should also look to trim down the excessive thought narration as well since someone else has brought that up too.

 

[DanVam]

With the Tatiana sms-ing part, I checked the scene again and found that the phone accidentally hides for one line of dialogue. Is that what you meant? The selfies she sends to MC seems to be working too. Or are you referring to the emojis?

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I think I also received an error once about lacking a flag for having/returning her shirt to the monkey

Is your 2nd day experience that you sometimes have 2-4 dates before moving on to the challenge? I think that'll mean something in my variables isn't adding up. If I can't find it I don't think it'll break the game going forward as things will work differently from day 3 onwards.

What I found repeatable is when I dated Michelle, Tatiana and Angel on the first day, if I date any 2 of them on the 2nd day it immediately skips to challenge. But I also can do something like Tatiana 2nd date -> Kiko 1st -> Julie 1st -> and another 2nd with Michelle or Angel before the challenge begins.

 

[FapYeah]

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Ah, it looks like I've got 2 typos that's throwing things off. Thanks for pinpointing that.

 

[ryg88]

What I found repeatable is when I dated Michelle, Tatiana and Angel on the first day, if I date any 2 of them on the 2nd day it immediately skips to challenge. But I also can do something like Tatiana 2nd date -> Kiko 1st -> Julie 1st -> and another 2nd with Michelle or Angel before the challenge begins.

Sounds like the same error I got:

Day 1 -> Michelle 1st -> Kiko 1st -> Tatiana 1st -> Nurse challenge
Day 2 -> Julie 1st -> Angel 1st -> Michelle 2nd -> Kiko 2nd -> Volleyball challenge

I was able to do a 4th date even though the game should only allow 3. But when I went back to an earlier save and switched things up, I didn't get the error:

Day 1 -> Angel 1st -> Julie 1st -> Michelle 1st -> Nurse challenge
Day 2 -> Angel 2nd -> Julie 2nd -> Michelle 2nd -> Volleyball challenge

In addition, it seems that I also got a continuity error when I got a dialogue about the camera building after talking w/ Angel for the 1st time.

 

[FapYeah]

In addition, it seems that I also got a continuity error when I got a dialogue about the camera building after talking w/ Angel for the 1st time.

What was the continuity error? Angel should be the only character that doesn't give you a clue about the camera building. The first time you talk to one of the other girls you should get a dialogue about it.

 

[ryg88]

What was the continuity error? Angel should be the only character that doesn't give you a clue about the camera building.

Player gets this line of dialogue after choosing Angel as the very first date for Day 1 and it assumes that the MC did get a clue from interacting with Angel:


Just to add... as for Day 2, after having 3 dates already, the game still allows for a 4th date even though the limit is 3 per day:


Already dated Angel, Julie and Michelle for Day 1 and dated Kiko, Tatiana and Michelle again for Day 2 and still Day 2 allows for a 4th date.