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I noticed at a few points it randomly shifts to referring to the MC & GF as "Ethan & Olivia", which aren't even the default names. What's up with that?
Damn i completly forgot to change them at the end, i just use them as filled names, because $gf and $ name looks weird for me when writingI noticed at a few points it randomly shifts to referring to the MC & GF as "Ethan & Olivia", which aren't even the default names. What's up with that?
Thanks again for taking your time and trying to help me <3 I will look into it and try to implement what u have written, but im still limited in what im able to "code".A suggestion for SharkoonMan
I know it's more work to change things, but from a dev standpoint I would strongly suggest NOT making unique passages for the same room/area for new days - some bugs are related to the way these are linked.
Note this is kinda pseudocode, I omitted some of the stuff twine puts in but you get the idea...HTML:<!-- Instead of having different blocks for different days like this: --> <tw-passagedata pid="n1" name="LivingRoom4"> <tw-passagedata pid="n2" name="LivingRoom6"> <!-- You should route everything through the same block, checking for conditions then sending to new blocks; i.e. --> <tw-passagedata pid="n3" name="LivingRoomMain"> <<if $day eq 4>> <<link "Do Gardening">> <<include GardenMeetLuke>> <</link>> <<elseif $day eq 6>> <<link "Do Gardening">> <<include GardenMeetSuntan>> <</link>> <</if>> </tw-passagedata>
Problem is now everytime you move to a new location or have a new day you need to create a new passage, and make sure all other events link to that new passage as well, very laborious.
I thought SharkoonMan was going to change that this version.Is there gonna be a swinging route where you don't have to cheat while helping your friend move? Cause if you go in with 0 horny, it still gives you no choice.
I would like to keep the cheating part with the moving, but im giving the player the option for your gf to stay faithful or not after the accident she has with Logan. I like the thought of them both making a "mistake" but then open up more and talk abou their feelings. Because the story up until now was a emotional rollercoaster for both of them and the final is the mistake they both make. Its like a finish to a chapter in their life ( does that make sense haha). But I added the option on Patreon to decide if your gf stays faithful or not after that. So you can decide again what u like. But right now theres only the faithful one. Nd with faithful i mean is that she doesnt do it behind his back and they talk what they likeI thought SharkoonMan was going to change that this version.
OKay I will test it on some mroe Browsers next Update, Chrome was working fine for me with the Ui hahaI had a quick look at it yesterday, I did not really play it or read it, but clicked and clicked to advance and see how thing were...
You improved some stuffs, the game has some quality, but the UI is still not very easy to use.
Some of the icons are outside of the box.
They're translucent and thus not easy to see.
The pool loop is no more, which is good, but if one is dumb enough (in real life whom would click on that link?!) to open the mysterious link and to talk to the dude, and ask for a brainwash (one again, whom would do that ?!), one can not close it and go back to the game... At one point the only way to get out of the internet was to click on : go to sleep, so MC basically woke up, turned is computer on and went back to sleep...
Since you can do whatever you want in whichever order, the description can be a bit messy.
If you want the players to have a turtle and to care for it, make it part of your story. You know: "if there's a gun in the first act, you must use it in the third one", make them let it wander in the garden, or play with it, then it could lead to dialogues with the neighbours, or they could use it to "transport" messages on its back, which could lead to a turtle web spy.
Last thing: it looks like you're going for a cheat them all, and a sub MC (once again I did not read all the text, so I might have missed some choices), if so be straightforward about it, then you'll find people whom enjoy that, and avoid disappointing others.
The moving route will have a cheating scene because i want to for character development and as a final for the "precucking route" but after that you can decide what happenes, if she cheats or does it with youIs there gonna be a swinging route where you don't have to cheat while helping your friend move? Cause if you go in with 0 horny, it still gives you no choice.
Im sorry i have written a lot for the cuck route until now, but I will try to continue the other route tooOh shit, is that why?!
Im sorry i have written a lot for the cuck route until now, but I will try to continue the other route tooDon't bother downloading if you aren't here for the cuck route. The female slave route is non-existent and ends the morning of day 2.
Yea u are probably right haha The Problem is or was that I thought I fixed it by making the backgroung more blurred, but it seems like I was wrong Its kinda hard for me to get a feel what the player likes, for me I thought the Ui looked great tbh hahah but I got alot of "hate" for it, so I will probably change it, but its a lot of work because right now I have no idea how and to what i want to change it. Its also a lot of work because every day is a unique passage. But I will try my bestView attachment 3271584
So I am not saying this UI is bad
But this UI is bad
Those transparent pictures are horrible
Big fat letters that say
Shower
Computer
Pet
Outside
aren't always a bad idea
Then you have the two options above them who for some reason aren't transparent pictures
"Check yourself" doesn't even need to be an option.
Just put the information of the current MC above stats.
Perhaps add a picture for that MC so it becomes easily identifyable as to who it currently is.
Name
Picture
Stats
Or
Picture
Name
Stats
Did you at least change the scene so it fits with their personalities, because when you added it it felt like different characters taking control over them.I would like to keep the cheating part with the moving, but im giving the player the option for your gf to stay faithful or not after the accident she has with Logan. I like the thought of them both making a "mistake" but then open up more and talk abou their feelings. Because the story up until now was a emotional rollercoaster for both of them and the final is the mistake they both make. Its like a finish to a chapter in their life ( does that make sense haha). But I added the option on Patreon to decide if your gf stays faithful or not after that. So you can decide again what u like. But right now theres only the faithful one. Nd with faithful i mean is that she doesnt do it behind his back and they talk what they like
As a serious question: are you licensing the RL pr0n pictures you're using, or just scraping them? i.e. some have various levels of masking, some are pulled from (much much) larger sets but without faces showing.Im sorry i have written a lot for the cuck route until now, but I will try to continue the other route too
huh? Most of the images in his game look like they come from mainstream porn.... while in a worst-case scenario that would open him up to liability from those companies, I really don't think that's likely. What's more likely is some holier-than-art-thou patreon admin comes across his page and makes an example of non-licensed images -which is still a low chance.As a serious question: are you licensing the RL pr0n pictures you're using, or just scraping them? i.e. some have various levels of masking, some are pulled from (much much) larger sets but without faces showing.
As a head's up, if you're doing this via scraping & making it HTML, I've some bad news for you.
Specifically, you're running on a US platform (You must be registered to see the links) and new Laws about "Revenge Porn" also cover a few of your images.You must be registered to see the links
Which, given how the Laws are written, translates to "You're Legally Liable" and also "You're fucked". Please don't be this dumb in public.
TL;DR
There's a really good reason PornHub removed like 60% of it's entire DB and using scraped images from before that purge, whelp. At the very least, don't be on Patreon, where you *are* legally accessible, since you've given them your fucking bank details to get subs.
you're describing ntr games not sharing games. The new tags are badly needed.Seriously what the fuck is with NTR games forcing the MC to get his dick wet his ass needs to be in a cage and humiliated not fucking anybody fucking is only reserved for the love interest to get dicked down by other bigger and better dicks.
I like the cuck route, but I despise actual cheating so I don't want that to be the avenue for progressing in the cuck route personally. If you see that as the proper path for your character development though, then it is what it is. I definitely think the cuck route should have an option where you don't cheat on your gf to get there though.The moving route will have a cheating scene because i want to for character development and as a final for the "precucking route" but after that you can decide what happenes, if she cheats or does it with you