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SharkoonMan

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Oct 21, 2018
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Nice concept, now remake it without the realporn and maybe it's gonna be playable.
At least use AI for the art if you ain't gonna make your own or if you are not capable of making your own, I sure can't make my own either.
AI ain't gonna look too good and it's certainly going to be some uncanny valley cgs but hey it's still better than real porn.
Ai was also my first thought, but 40 min for a good pic and its also very likely that the pic wont fit my ideas, so im forced to use real porn. IN the future, i think of buying drawn art
 

SharkoonMan

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Game Developer
Oct 21, 2018
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Yea, I enjoy these games, but it's not a great sign when my malwarebytes starts flipping out when external sites pop up. How am I supposed to trust any links in the game to keep my pc safe? I'm really not sure about this one now..
Im sorry, i thought the link to a porn site would be funny, cause she is looking at his history. But Im removing it for the next update
 

Oliz82

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Mar 15, 2021
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Hello.

The summary and samples made me come. But the result is too short and confusing.

The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and different. Their description could be better.
The plot seems interesting and could lead everywhere.
The photos/gifs are well chosen.

The idea is good : you watch a specific category of porn, your girlfriend/boyfriend becomes aware of it one way or another and the couple decides to explore that fetish together.
But what you did is really repetitive at the start until the events take place (based on what? because normal activities making you horny so you masturbate before going to work and do that many days isn't very appealing).
The writing is confusing : most of the time, I don't know who I am (the man or the woman; even if I know my gender, I don't know if I am Logan, Ethan or John or even Chrissy or Olivia).
I think the presentation should be more original (for now, it's a little impersonal and generic). The dialogs and thoughts should be separated from the rest of the sentences to be more visible (with colors if you're ok with it).
The description when you check yourself is very reduced (the color of the eyes, of the hair... maybe with images to show it better; many would like a character creation but do it only if you like it and can do it completely). Some actions could have variations (always turtle, always the same porn image to watch...).
There's no way to know that the days go by. Watching porn or searching porn doesn't make us horny. Doing something not sexual even make the stat negative ( 1685212152081.png ).

There are some spelling errors left.

What's the difference in term of game play between "Go to work" and "Next day"?

I don't know if it's intended but even with the normal route, there are BBC images/gifs in it.
I found an error with the name variable : 1685213651688.png

In the dev notes, you say you want variety and freedom for players but there are kinks you set aside so you should also include those that won't be available (for example gay, bi, lesbian, trans, urination, blood, hypnosis, horror...).

Thanks for the default name. And thanks a lot for including a BWC route and not just the usual BBC one.

Edit :
Forgot to say that some links are hard to see (particularly the one with the wikipedia page).

Good continuation.
 
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SharkoonMan

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Oct 21, 2018
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Hello.

The summary and samples made me come. But the result is too short and confusing.

The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and different. Their description could be better.
The plot seems interesting and could lead everywhere.
The photos/gifs are well chosen.

The idea is good : you watch a specific category of porn, your girlfriend/boyfriend becomes aware of it one way or another and the couple decides to explore that fetish together.
But what you did is really repetitive at the start until the events take place (based on what? because normal activities making you horny so you masturbate before going to work and do that many days isn't very appealing).
The writing is confusing : most of the time, I don't know who I am (the man or the woman; even if I know my gender, I don't know if I am Logan, Ethan or John or even Chrissy or Olivia).
I think the presentation should be more original (for now, it's a little impersonal and generic). The dialogs and thoughts should be separated from the rest of the sentences to be more visible (with colors if you're ok with it).
The description when you check yourself is very reduced (the color of the eyes, of the hair... maybe with images to show it better; many would like a character creation but do it only if you like it and can do it completely). Some actions could have variations (always turtle, always the same porn image to watch...).
There's no way to know that the days go by. Watching porn or searching porn doesn't make us horny. Doing something not sexual even make the stat negative ( View attachment 2654335 ).

There are some spelling errors left.

What's the difference in term of game play between "Go to work" and "Next day"?

I don't know if it's intended but even with the normal route, there are BBC images/gifs in it.
I found an error with the name variable : View attachment 2654402

In the dev notes, you say you want variety and freedom for players but there are kinks you set aside so you should also include those that won't be available (for example gay, bi, lesbian, trans, urination, blood, hypnosis, horror...).

Thanks for the default name. And thanks a lot for including a BWC route and not just the usual BBC one.

Edit :
Forgot to say that some links are hard to see (particularly the one with the wikipedia page).

Good continuation.
Thank you very much for your detailed review :D you are the reason why I uploaded the game, so I can see what I can improve, because this is my first game and story ever written. I will try to improve with each update thanks to your kind words :D
 

Snoopy_H

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May 30, 2018
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decent demo, story is told from two pov's, maybe you could make that more clear. tie up some loose ends and please do not do a branching game, keep it linear or sandbox
 

Zulfiqar

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Sep 16, 2019
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Nice concept, now remake it without the realporn and maybe it's gonna be playable.
At least use AI for the art if you ain't gonna make your own or if you are not capable of making your own, I sure can't make my own either.
AI ain't gonna look too good and it's certainly going to be some uncanny valley cgs but hey it's still better than real porn.
You say this, meanwhile Lobsterman is still raking in more than 2k per month when he hasn't updated his main real porn html game in 7 months :WaitWhat:
 
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shizzlenizzle

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Aug 21, 2018
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you should take a look at other games with ai generated content before considering that. uncanny valley is not good wanking material.
 
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bluerubber

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Im sorry, i thought the link to a porn site would be funny, cause she is looking at his history. But Im removing it for the next update
I did think it was unique and funny in a way. I just didn't like the MWB ping and it made me second guess is all.
 

ElJefe1995

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Aug 28, 2020
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Im sorry, i thought the link to a porn site would be funny, cause she is looking at his history. But Im removing it for the next update
NGL i actually liked it lol and started reading some of the facts hahaha had to put away the meat for a bit while i educated myself.
 
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AnHorse

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Aug 2, 2018
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Nice concept, now remake it without the realporn and maybe it's gonna be playable.
At least use AI for the art if you ain't gonna make your own or if you are not capable of making your own, I sure can't make my own either.
AI ain't gonna look too good and it's certainly going to be some uncanny valley cgs but hey it's still better than real porn.
Yeah please make it look like absolute shit. That will really make me want to play it way more than using porn for your images.
 
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TheHonet

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Jan 25, 2019
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Kinda skimmed through it a bit.

Besides the obvious dead ends
and also loading breaking Character names.

It didn't look too bad.
Might even be the first "Real Porn" HTML game I would give a real chance.

Would love to really see the Swinging path developed.
Especially if it is real swinging and not just NTR with swinging attached.

Keep it up and hope you source more amateur or unknown stuff instead of what HTML games always do and take the same 4 or 5 Pornstars, even if the People might change in looks.
 

demidemon

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Aug 31, 2016
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Ai was also my first thought, but 40 min for a good pic and its also very likely that the pic wont fit my ideas, so im forced to use real porn. IN the future, i think of buying drawn art
just to let you know, that guy hate real porn so it is not related to the quality of the images/vid you included in the game
 
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SoberSphagghett

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Will this have Femdom, Humiliation, or Sissification tags in the future?

Asking for a friend :whistle:
If you're willing to let your GF find them in your browser history, maybe.
Mine will be planting invertebrate parasites on the back of her head to fuck a vagina growing out of her brain.
Take "Parasite infection" for example E:3
 
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