Hello.
The summary and samples made me come. But the result is too short and confusing.
The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and different. Their description could be better.
The plot seems interesting and could lead everywhere.
The photos/gifs are well chosen.
The idea is good : you watch a specific category of porn, your girlfriend/boyfriend becomes aware of it one way or another and the couple decides to explore that fetish together.
But what you did is really repetitive at the start until the events take place (based on what? because normal activities making you horny so you masturbate before going to work and do that many days isn't very appealing).
The writing is confusing : most of the time, I don't know who I am (the man or the woman; even if I know my gender, I don't know if I am Logan, Ethan or John or even Chrissy or Olivia).
I think the presentation should be more original (for now, it's a little impersonal and generic). The dialogs and thoughts should be separated from the rest of the sentences to be more visible (with colors if you're ok with it).
The description when you check yourself is very reduced (the color of the eyes, of the hair... maybe with images to show it better; many would like a character creation but do it only if you like it and can do it completely). Some actions could have variations (always turtle, always the same porn image to watch...).
There's no way to know that the days go by. Watching porn or searching porn doesn't make us horny. Doing something not sexual even make the stat negative (
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There are some spelling errors left.
What's the difference in term of game play between "Go to work" and "Next day"?
I don't know if it's intended but even with the normal route, there are BBC images/gifs in it.
I found an error with the name variable :
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In the dev notes, you say you want variety and freedom for players but there are kinks you set aside so you should also include those that won't be available (for example gay, bi, lesbian, trans, urination, blood, hypnosis, horror...).
Thanks for the default name. And thanks a lot for including a BWC route and not just the usual BBC one.
Edit :
Forgot to say that some links are hard to see (particularly the one with the wikipedia page).
Good continuation.