Hello.
You focused on the technical side and it's really better organized now (there's still some issues but it's way better). The colors and hints are a good addition.
The cuckhold path is having more options with whom it could happen.
The female slave path, though I'm not into that kind of content, is well thought (having it being consensual isn't ordinary (that option is only centered on the male pleasure usually) and a soft option with just bdsm is a nice alternative).
Some remarks :
2 return here on the cuckhold path.
Don't eat the "e".
You forgot the color on the female slave path.
Be consistent with the names of NPC.
If we're taking that path, that shouldn't happen at the gym since Derek is a black man (there should only be the "Interrupt them" option).
When we are showering as Chrissy at the gym, the male options shouldn't appear (like Homer, Sponge Bob).
Some choices (gym, Next day) have an ending screen, some don't (Garden, Pet, Computer). Try to standardize the display.
Good continuation.
You focused on the technical side and it's really better organized now (there's still some issues but it's way better). The colors and hints are a good addition.
The cuckhold path is having more options with whom it could happen.
The female slave path, though I'm not into that kind of content, is well thought (having it being consensual isn't ordinary (that option is only centered on the male pleasure usually) and a soft option with just bdsm is a nice alternative).
Some remarks :
2 return here on the cuckhold path.
Don't eat the "e".
You forgot the color on the female slave path.
Be consistent with the names of NPC.
If we're taking that path, that shouldn't happen at the gym since Derek is a black man (there should only be the "Interrupt them" option).
When we are showering as Chrissy at the gym, the male options shouldn't appear (like Homer, Sponge Bob).
Some choices (gym, Next day) have an ending screen, some don't (Garden, Pet, Computer). Try to standardize the display.
Good continuation.