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SharkoonMan

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Thank you very much for your reply, I understand when it's crunch time and I can't wait for more updates.
please always tell me when something is not working or something is not right, its my first time doing anything like that. I've never programmed in my life before hahah So if something is wrong please tell me :D
 

1Teddy1

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At the last day when u masturbate it should appear. It works for me fine...
Then it should have been explained how to get to it instead relying on the player to do something they have only done like twice in when the story(when to horny to go to work/looking up new porn) demanded them to.
 
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SharkoonMan

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Then it should have been explained how to get to it instead relying on the player to do something they have only done like twice in when the story(when to horny to go to work/looking up new porn) demanded them to.
Yes you are right, I will specify the new things better next time. Thanks for you lr feedback
 
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SharkoonMan If possible, next time you release a hotfix, perhaps try to release a hotfix only (meaning just the .html file if that's the only thing that needs fixing) instead of having to download the whole thing again.
 

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please always tell me when something is not working or something is not right, its my first time doing anything like that. I've never programmed in my life before hahah So if something is wrong please tell me :D
No problem.

So some quick bug reports:

-Currently there's no actual link to Home5 block, where it should be, line 2573 for me "Next day" on home4 goes to "Ending"; unless your intention was to not have the barbeque stuff be included in 0.4, then I apologize, disregard this note.

home4.jpg
this screenshot is after i modified it, as shipped it's [[Next day|Home4]] Thus, there's no way to get to day 5 and see the Barbeque scenes, etc.

-At the actual barbeque, the $visitedK3a flag is only set for one of the two "get dressed inside" blocks, it should be for both, whether she puts on hoodie or miniskirt with luke or with the three of you.

-Finally, probably the biggest thing to fix and most annoying - the "masturbate" link while on computer will rapidly flash being very difficult to click on, I dont know much about html or javascript but I assume this is related to the "check-horny" function depicted here:
checkhorny.jpg
(please note the line numbers wont be the same - this is a copy of the html file with symbols translated)
 
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Oliz82

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Hello.

This update was very short but interesting. Including hypnosis could be fun depending on how it's done. By the way, do you intend to restrict it to chastity or will it include other possibilities?

Some remarks :
The masturbate button is still annoying : it can work immediately or I can get horny further than 60 and nothing. Plus, we can continue to cum infinitely, even if horny is at 0.

What I said previously on the BBW path should also apply for the BBC path (for example, the BBW choice for Logan and Jenny shouldn't appear there).

When the corruption isn't high enough to trigger a choice, the right number should appear between () after the warning message, making another playthrough more rewarding.

On the last day, even the days before maybe, having the same event repeat infinitely is useless and counter productive (for example, we go to the gym, see the event, go home and if we go to the gym again, the same event happens, which is unnecessary and a waste fo time; it would be more logic for a message like "You already went to the gym", "You already triggered today's event there" or "Nothing new to see", well something you like that can do the job).

On a side note, did you write the story separately or was it done specially for the game?

Good continuation.
 

SharkoonMan

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No problem.

So some quick bug reports:

-Currently there's no actual link to Home5 block, where it should be, line 2573 for me "Next day" on home4 goes to "Ending"; unless your intention was to not have the barbeque stuff be included in 0.4, then I apologize, disregard this note.

View attachment 2745449
this screenshot is after i modified it, as shipped it's [[Next day|Home4]] Thus, there's no way to get to day 5 and see the Barbeque scenes, etc.

-At the actual barbeque, the $visitedK3a flag is only set for one of the two "get dressed inside" blocks, it should be for both, whether she puts on hoodie or miniskirt with luke or with the three of you.

-Finally, probably the biggest thing to fix and most annoying - the "masturbate" link while on computer will rapidly flash being very difficult to click on, I dont know much about html or javascript but I assume this is related to the "check-horny" function depicted here:
View attachment 2745455
(please note the line numbers wont be the same - this is a copy of the html file with symbols translated)
Thank u sooo much!! Yea the Barbeque was intentional hahah Bit thanks anywas for also looking at it and twlling me what to improve.
Yes i know tje problem with the masturbating link, currently im using a clock to check the $horny variable every second. But I will think of something better, i know how annoying it can get hahah.
Thank you sooo mich for your kind feedback :)
 
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SharkoonMan

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Hello.

This update was very short but interesting. Including hypnosis could be fun depending on how it's done. By the way, do you intend to restrict it to chastity or will it include other possibilities?

Some remarks :
The masturbate button is still annoying : it can work immediately or I can get horny further than 60 and nothing. Plus, we can continue to cum infinitely, even if horny is at 0.

What I said previously on the BBW path should also apply for the BBC path (for example, the BBW choice for Logan and Jenny shouldn't appear there).

When the corruption isn't high enough to trigger a choice, the right number should appear between () after the warning message, making another playthrough more rewarding.

On the last day, even the days before maybe, having the same event repeat infinitely is useless and counter productive (for example, we go to the gym, see the event, go home and if we go to the gym again, the same event happens, which is unnecessary and a waste fo time; it would be more logic for a message like "You already went to the gym", "You already triggered today's event there" or "Nothing new to see", well something you like that can do the job).

On a side note, did you write the story separately or was it done specially for the game?

Good continuation.
Im still brainstorming for the hypnosis path, so I cant say it for now. Should I include more fetishes with the hypnosis?
Yes i will fix the masturbating button after my Exams :)
Ahh im sorry I thought I fixed it for both paths, thanks for letting me know.
Yea I will write better changelogs and mark new stuff better.its always obvious for me, because i make it hahaha
Yes I will restrict the events more.
Thank u very much vor your kind feedback :)
 
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SharkoonMan

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I assume you meant bwc, no fatties in this game :LOL:


Did you visit the in-game literotica-type-site post?
What do u mean by literotica type site post?

Ah sorry I overread that question haha
Well I wrote the story specificly for the game.
I have a similiar story on chyoa, but i wrote it after the game and have not writtwn a lot.
On of my inspiration was Neighbor chronicles, but I only took the laptop part haha
 
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Pr0GamerJohnny

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What do u mean by literotica type site post?

Ah sorry I overread that question haha
Well I wrote the story specificly for the game.
I have a similiar story on chyoa, but i wrote it after the game and have not writtwn a lot.
On of my inspiration was Neighbor chronicles, but I only took the laptop part haha
yah I was referring to the story referenced on there.

but yeah itll also reminded me of a few other stories I know of, stuff like

Aside from my bug reports, I commend you for the future direction - I liked the video choice inclusion of a standard hotwife path vs sissy or caged, im sure other players will like those choices too.
 
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SharkoonMan

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yah I was referring to the story referenced on there.

but yeah itll also reminded me of a few other stories I know of, stuff like

Aside from my bug reports, I commend you for the future direction - I liked the video choice inclusion of a standard hotwife path vs sissy or caged, im sure other players will like those choices too.
Dont remember reading this one, but i think you can find many references hahah I read many Stories.
Yes My End goal is to have something for almost anyone. And that you can always decide the path u want to take and not be forced :)
 

Oliz82

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Hello.

Thanks for the answers again.

Im still brainstorming for the hypnosis path, so I cant say it for now. Should I include more fetishes with the hypnosis?
Personally, I'm interested in hypnosis (in the process to be precise) but not in chastity so I would say yes.
Then, it depends on what your intentions are about it.
Do you want hypnosis to be a full fledged fetish? If so, you shouldn't link it to one kink only. It could even be a kink in itself.
Do you want hypnosis to be the fetish of the anonymous man? Meaning we loose control of the situation and it becomes more or less kinetic with his intentions (good or bad).
Do you want hypnosis to be a medium used to facilitate/accelerate the occurrence of the principal fetish?
There may be other ways to use hypnosis (even exploit him and make him do things he isn't interested, doesn't like and even hate). And as a bi man, I could be interested in kinks not fit for your game. But, in the end, the choice is yours.

Also, does hypnosis concern only himself or the couple as a whole?

Speaking of fetishes, you've changed the selection of the last day (order and designation) and you've left 1/3/4 which is strange.

Yea I will write better changelogs and mark new stuff better.its always obvious for me, because i make it hahaha
Maybe I expressed myself badly like Pr0Gamer Johnny has shown (at least, he didn't think that BBW was big black and white :eek:) but I wasn't talking about the changelog but the in game different paths like : "You are not corrupt enough to buy anything" at the sex shop on the Female Slave Porn path or "You are not corrupt enough to invade their privacy like that" on the BBC swinger path. Having the corruption needed between () after the warning sentence could make it easier to reach that choice if we know how to unlock it.
Hope I'm more clear like that.

Good continuation.
 

DarkDaemonX

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No meaningful amount of content yet, I expected it to go somewhere already, or that there was more content, how small are these updates?
 
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