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SpyderArachnid

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This wasn't awful, but holy smokes you need to work on the writing. Get a proofreader please.

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Yeah, once the writing is fixed, this could be pretty decent. But it needs a lot of work. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
 

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Along with lesbian focused, I hope it is also spanking focused as well. As in, the relationship with the two leading ladies where they delve into BDSM and just spanking as a whole itself :)
 
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OpenSky Games

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No animation tag, therefore a pass.
I'll add the animation tag, there is one animation in the 0.1 version and as in version 0.2 I'll add more animation and as I get better at making animations I'll plan to add more way more.
Is this gonna be lesbian focused or there will be hetero sex too?
It's gonna be hetero focused with lesbian content too.
Nice start, could have been longer, also thoughts of the characters chould be made clearer, also a mentioning of the fact that the game ends so you can save it, and not go straight to the main screen
My apologies and thank you for pointing it out, I'll make sure to fix it in the next update.
Lesbian only possible?
Most of the sex scenes are avoidable but some can't as they're story core plus you'll lose a lot of content so I guess not, sorry.
This wasn't awful, but holy smokes you need to work on the writing. Get a proofreader please.

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Yeah, once the writing is fixed, this could be pretty decent. But it needs a lot of work. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
Thank you for your sincere and accurate feedback. You're right and I do my best to correct those mistakes and put extra time on dialogue part. See, English is not my native language but that's not an excuse and I'll make sure it's been sorted out from version 0.2 on.
Along with lesbian focused, I hope it is also spanking focused as well. As in, the relationship with the two leading ladies where they delve into BDSM and just spanking as a whole itself :)
It will have lots and lots of spanking. but it wasn't my plan for it to be lesbian focused, but if enough people like to see lesbian content i'll add more lesbian content.
 

SpyderArachnid

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Most of the sex scenes are avoidable but some can't as they're story core plus you'll lose a lot of content so I guess not, sorry.
Well damn, that's a nope for me then. I don't like forced stuff. Prefer having choices on all of that. Not a fan of being forced into sex scenes, even if it is "for the plot" (hate when sex scenes are forced for plot reasons).
 

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It's gonna be hetero focused with lesbian content too.
As this initial start would give a different impression, I think you should quickly revamp the OP and the sample pics. Because you now have have a lot of the lesbian lovers here. When the rest of the story will be more hetero centered this could lead to some disappointment and in the end no one is really satisfied or happy which will cause a lot of unnecessary wars of all kind.

So maybe do a little more expectation management than just that Q&A part above.

Don´t get me wrong please, this start was pretty amazing and I am more than ready for another lesbian BDSM VN.

Cheers to you for a good start and thank you very much for the hard work you already put into this!
 
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OpenSky Games

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As this initial start would give a different impression, I think you should quickly revamp the OP and the sample pics. Because you now have have a lot of the lesbian lovers here. When the rest of the story will be more hetero centered this could lead to some disappointment and in the end no one is really satisfied or happy which will cause a lot of unnecessary wars of all kind.

So maybe do a little more expectation management than just that Q&A part above.

Don´t get me wrong please, this start was pretty amazing and I am more than ready for another lesbian BDSM VN.

Cheers to you for a good start and thank you very much for the hard work you already put into this!
Stupid me but I don't know what you mean by the OP, I've changed the sample pictures tho, thank you for the guide. I've actually might've added some pictures from version 0.2 so the moderator deleted those and added the samples himself, he thought it might of been lesbian centered or something lol.
Well damn, that's a nope for me then. I don't like forced stuff. Prefer having choices on all of that. Not a fan of being forced into sex scenes, even if it is "for the plot" (hate when sex scenes are forced for plot reasons).
I understand what you're saying completely and I have no intentions of forcing sex scenes on players it's just that some scenarios must of happen as in they're the plot and eventually it's the players choice to fully give in to that scenarios or resist and reject them but like our own lives although we have free will somethings are forced upon us that is out of our control we can only decide how to deal with them, if we could call them destiny there is some things in our MC's destiny that is out of our control lol.

Imagine telling someone there is some forced sex in your destiny:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
any way for the mc to be the dom?
well actually that was intended and I kinda made that route but later I saw it had some conflictions with the story so I decided after everything MC goes through through chapter 1, it will be the backbone for mc to become dominant in the chapter 2, but in the first chapter no not as a route sorry.

Here is some of the deleted scenes:
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