I just want to say good job Shinita. Those artistic nudes are honestly some of the best stuff I've seen in a long time and the story has captured my attention. You manged to suck me into this world and can't wait for the next installment. I am however curious about a few thing though, you mentioned the choices not having major impacts at the moment which is good, but is there going to be any sign or hint to when a major choice is about to be made? Some devs make there games where you have to have a guide or you'll miss out on everything and I just want to know how carefully do we need to be playing this?
The only other thing is this story kinda went from 0 to 100 with Georgia; I mean the MC went from having shared a few kisses to seeing her naked and taking full nudes for her, to her jacking MC in a club in the span of a day. Now I'm not complaining, I enjoyed all of that and see why you'd want to hook the viewer with some action, but I'm a little concerned from story point of view that your rushing a little too fast. Pacing the story a bit would make these events hit a little harder, but the story is in the early stages so I guess I'll just have to wait and see what you do.
Good luck Shinita, we're all rooting for you!