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Mr Technician

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What usually lacks in games like this, but not only like this, is the "free play" style. After some major events in games. Can't even search for games with "free play" on this forum, sadly. There is no Tag for it.
 

Rancioman

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The current update (the one downloaded from Patreon) is the last one; that is the end of the game. It's a double chapter, and the author said on Discord that the delay in uploading it (it was supposed to be posted on Tuesday) was because he was finishing the game. So the next one is the end.
I'm not going to judge the story the author offers us, which you may or may not like; but I do want to point out a couple of things I think the author can improve in the future:
A) The number of renders is very small in each chapter, and the poses are constantly repeated. If you make your renders with AI, you could set a minimum of 15 or 20 per chapter; it costs nothing, and your potential buyers would be happier.
B) If you're going to offer multiple responses to the same dialogue, make sure that it's reflected in the game later on; otherwise, it doesn't make sense.

The game would be better if you simply made a visual novel without "supposed answer choices" so that the player can better focus on the story you're telling and not give the false illusion that something can be changed with the answers when the only answer that counts is the one that leads to an abrupt ending in Chapter 5 and causes us to miss almost all of the game's content.
 
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BangB420

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The current update (the one downloaded from Patreon) is the last one; that is the end of the game. It's a double chapter, and the author said on Discord that the delay in uploading it (it was supposed to be posted on Tuesday) was because he was finishing the game. So the next one is the end.
I'm not going to judge the story the author offers us, which you may or may not like; but I do want to point out a couple of things I think the author can improve in the future:
A) The number of renders is very small in each chapter, and the poses are constantly repeated. If you make your renders with AI, you could set a minimum of 15 or 20 per chapter; it costs nothing, and your potential buyers would be happier.
B) If you're going to offer multiple responses to the same dialogue, make sure that it's reflected in the game later on; otherwise, it doesn't make sense.

The game would be better if you simply made a visual novel without "supposed answer choices" so that the player can better focus on the story you're telling and not give the false illusion that something can be changed with the answers when the only answer that counts is the one that leads to an abrupt ending in Chapter 5 and causes us to miss almost all of the game's content.
Yeah i wish it was made in renpy instead of whatever engine they on
 

Smiling_Jack

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Was really hoping there would be some actual choices in this game and not just what flavor of cuck you want to be; either an unwilling bitch cuck or a happy even more of a bitch cuck. I guess there won't be any turnabout or winning for the MC. I swear, I'd tear the idiotic NPCs in this game a new one with their flimsy ass logic.
 

NewTricks

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Was really hoping there would be some actual choices in this game and not just what flavor of cuck you want to be; either an unwilling bitch cuck or a happy even more of a bitch cuck. I guess there won't be any turnabout or winning for the MC. I swear, I'd tear the idiotic NPCs in this game a new one with their flimsy ass logic.
If you play both versions of the MC, the game becomes unintentionally hilarious. If you do everything to resist Castle, she berates you for being uncooperative and truculent, yet, in the event that you are enthusiastic and cooperative, she is upset that you aren't putting up a fight. Some people will never be happy. The therapist needs therapy.
 

Tinyk

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If you play both versions of the MC, the game becomes unintentionally hilarious. If you do everything to resist Castle, she berates you for being uncooperative and truculent, yet, in the event that you are enthusiastic and cooperative, she is upset that you aren't putting up a fight. Some people will never be happy. The therapist needs therapy.
In this game I'd need a "bad" ending where the therapist would get lead therapy. It would probably save multiple relationships in the future.

Was really hoping there would be some actual choices in this game and not just what flavor of cuck you want to be; either an unwilling bitch cuck or a happy even more of a bitch cuck. I guess there won't be any turnabout or winning for the MC. I swear, I'd tear the idiotic NPCs in this game a new one with their flimsy ass logic.
Totally agree , the relationship is spiralling and you can do or do nothing , this is frustrating.
 

cloudstrife

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i love your other game! is there any anal in this one?
From what I've seen there's one anal scene with the wife and some guy at the gym I think, if you're into femboy stuff then Alex takes the MC's friend's dick in his/her ass
 
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cloudstrife

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The question here is completely different, this is a fictional story - a fantasy, made in 2d with ai tool. People want to see "Fantasy and not Reality"!
Moreover, MC wife has big breasts, but they don't hang like that!
I finished the game on the first ending as a lonely MC not because i didn't like his colleague, but because i don't like her cocker spaniel tits - visually!
Yeah every woman in the game having quite saggy breasts was a bit much
 

Emperor1

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I am very sorry to say this, with how great the ai art is, but the choice to story system is horrible.

I mean you could have gone with the kinetic novel route, there are some great novels in this site and even more are getting made, or at least be upfront that there will be no "good" end path, but putting in choice system yet having no meaningful choices other then choosing the route? Yeah not a great way

Maybe your next one will be good, looking forward to it, this one is just not my type.

Thank you for sharing your game
 
3.40 star(s) 19 Votes