Others NTR Chat: My Girlfriend's Travel [v0.16] [KusoBin]

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RustyV

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This has become a vanilla sexathon.
Elle is fucking her new boyfriend and reporting about it back to her at home boyfriend.
You put her in Jamaica on vacation, why not have her hook-up with a lesbian-curious college girl, or Jamaican man?
 

Zulfiqar

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It was just ruined by Doctor Castle. Even hardcore NTR simplords hated her fucking guts, and hardcore Femdom fans thought she was too extra.
Yeah I mean I just skipped her dialogue as it was often sadistic not in a teasing way but like she literally wanted the MC to off himself. Humiliation necessarily entails a decline in the self esteem of the MC but if he's literally less than worthless there comes a point where his very presence is nothing but an imposition. At that point he should consider either leaving or... yeah :KEK:
 

FAPANAUT

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I was enjoying the NTS in this game, especially since the MC is getting as much or more action than Elle. But forcing the MC to allow Liam to take her anal virginity ruined it for me!
The Netorase path derailed QUICKLY with Liam. There was no mutual consent nor any observance of boundaries. The narrative shifted to the Netorare space without any legitimate considerations.

KusoBin limits the options to: "I don't like this guy Liam" and "I'm fine with it" which on the surface seems okay for the NTS narrative, it maintains the mutual consideration of both the MC and Elle. What's really going on is if you choose the first option then there is one picture of Elle in the sauna with a towel wrapped around her and nothing else, no quick "Hey babe" with a naked picture...nothing. And I can accept that considering the choice was to not engage with Liam. If, however, you choose the "I'm fine with it" option, then it goes from 0 - 100 immediately. Elle just casually informs the MC that Liam took her into a private room and raw fucked her and creampied her. While this may be considered a "grey area" of Netorase, it does not fit the loving, trusting, mutual consideration narrative that was building to that point. Raw fucking and creampies are inherently primal and typically off limits without the express mutual consent of both partners. Then to put a choice that isn't really a choice about anal and no matter how it is framed the MC is going to just consent was the beginning of the end for my interest in the overall character development and so-called Netorase story arc - the MC becomes a singular "cuck-boy" with no means to navigate the complexities of the relationship.

As a writer I understand there is a significant amount of work that goes into creating a multi-layered story where characters have depth, and that is time consuming, so I don't judge KusoBin for truncating the process and going with a more linear narrative to statisfy the people who are looking to fap to pictures of Elle (or any character in these stories), it was just disappointing that there wasn't a point where Elle had the wherewithall to put her hand on Liam's chest, push him back, and say "put on a condom" or I'm not comfortable getting fucked in the ass, (or giving the MC the option of saying 'No, I want to be your first'). Hell, in an ideal scenario, the discussion of raw sex vs a condom and/or anal would have already happened between the MC and Elle prior to any of this, thus eliminating the issue of the carte blanche approach Elle seems to be taking now that she has "permission" - might as well fuck whomever, wherever, without discussion. Yet at the same time Elle continues to "ask for permission" (honestly why bother? It isn't even pertinent at this point), and the MC is just saying, "Elle, I'm telling you it's okay" :rolleyes: There are no choices, any perceived boundaries are gone and this has become less and less about a mutually consensual experiment of a kink.

Let me complete this tirade by saying for those that are into the more Netorare leaning narratives, that's great, no judgement at all - in fact, I play those routes in these games as much as the Netorase routes - but, if a creator is going to write a story where there is supposed to be bothoptions available then, well...how about actually having both options available. Al we have now is Netorare-light and while the MC is pefectly aware of and consents toeverything the Elle is doing, it is so singular in it's approach it just ceases to have meaning.

Oh, just a note, I am a subscriber on Patreon so this isn't me just ranting, I have let my critique of this chapter in the story be known on Patreon and even KusoBin responded with, "Thank you, Nem. I really appreciate your feedback, it’ll help me create something better in the future." And while that doesn't mean he is going to change anything for this story, it does seem to indicate I made a valid point.
 

turbokinetics

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The Netorase path derailed QUICKLY with Liam. There was no mutual consent nor any observance of boundaries. The narrative shifted to the Netorare space without any legitimate considerations.

KusoBin limits the options to: "I don't like this guy Liam" and "I'm fine with it" which on the surface seems okay for the NTS narrative, it maintains the mutual consideration of both the MC and Elle. What's really going on is if you choose the first option then there is one picture of Elle in the sauna with a towel wrapped around her and nothing else, no quick "Hey babe" with a naked picture...nothing. And I can accept that considering the choice was to not engage with Liam. If, however, you choose the "I'm fine with it" option, then it goes from 0 - 100 immediately. Elle just casually informs the MC that Liam took her into a private room and raw fucked her and creampied her. While this may be considered a "grey area" of Netorase, it does not fit the loving, trusting, mutual consideration narrative that was building to that point. Raw fucking and creampies are inherently primal and typically off limits without the express mutual consent of both partners. Then to put a choice that isn't really a choice about anal and no matter how it is framed the MC is going to just consent was the beginning of the end for my interest in the overall character development and so-called Netorase story arc - the MC becomes a singular "cuck-boy" with no means to navigate the complexities of the relationship.

As a writer I understand there is a significant amount of work that goes into creating a multi-layered story where characters have depth, and that is time consuming, so I don't judge KusoBin for truncating the process and going with a more linear narrative to statisfy the people who are looking to fap to pictures of Elle (or any character in these stories), it was just disappointing that there wasn't a point where Elle had the wherewithall to put her hand on Liam's chest, push him back, and say "put on a condom" or I'm not comfortable getting fucked in the ass, (or giving the MC the option of saying 'No, I want to be your first'). Hell, in an ideal scenario, the discussion of raw sex vs a condom and/or anal would have already happened between the MC and Elle prior to any of this, thus eliminating the issue of the carte blanche approach Elle seems to be taking now that she has "permission" - might as well fuck whomever, wherever, without discussion. Yet at the same time Elle continues to "ask for permission" (honestly why bother? It isn't even pertinent at this point), and the MC is just saying, "Elle, I'm telling you it's okay" :rolleyes: There are no choices, any perceived boundaries are gone and this has become less and less about a mutually consensual experiment of a kink.

Let me complete this tirade by saying for those that are into the more Netorare leaning narratives, that's great, no judgement at all - in fact, I play those routes in these games as much as the Netorase routes - but, if a creator is going to write a story where there is supposed to be bothoptions available then, well...how about actually having both options available. Al we have now is Netorare-light and while the MC is pefectly aware of and consents toeverything the Elle is doing, it is so singular in it's approach it just ceases to have meaning.

Oh, just a note, I am a subscriber on Patreon so this isn't me just ranting, I have let my critique of this chapter in the story be known on Patreon and even KusoBin responded with, "Thank you, Nem. I really appreciate your feedback, it’ll help me create something better in the future." And while that doesn't mean he is going to change anything for this story, it does seem to indicate I made a valid point.
Thats exactly why i feel liam is supposed to be the ntr line crossing bull or at least one that dances around the ntr/nts hard lines and why i gave him the boot. Still better then that taptus phone game dev. I have him quoted that kissing isnt cheating and only intercourse is cheating.
 

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KusoBin limits the options to: "I don't like this guy Liam" and "I'm fine with it" which on the surface seems okay for the NTS narrative, it maintains the mutual consideration of both the MC and Elle. What's really going on is if you choose the first option then there is one picture of Elle in the sauna with a towel wrapped around her and nothing else, no quick "Hey babe" with a naked picture...nothing. And I can accept that considering the choice was to not engage with Liam. If, however, you choose the "I'm fine with it" option, then it goes from 0 - 100 immediately. Elle just casually informs the MC that Liam took her into a private room and raw fucked her and creampied her. While this may be considered a "grey area" of Netorase, it does not fit the loving, trusting, mutual consideration narrative that was building to that point. Raw fucking and creampies are inherently primal and typically off limits without the express mutual consent of both partners. Then to put a choice that isn't really a choice about anal and no matter how it is framed the MC is going to just consent was the beginning of the end for my interest in the overall character development and so-called Netorase story arc - the MC becomes a singular "cuck-boy" with no means to navigate the complexities of the relationship.
It's not netorase, not really.

It is pretty much what they discuss ingame, a free pass.

MC fucks around, she fucks around. She only talked to the MC about it originally because she was having doubts, as soon as the doubts were gone she got down to fucking.

It's being classed as netorase because technically she's not cheating on that route. She was given the green light and she's gonna run with it.

I don't see their relationship surviving which is why i've gone all in with another woman.

I'll keep in her good books while she's on the holiday for the stories and flirting with Rachel but if given the choice near the end or whenever a choice seems reasonable i'll be switching my MC to the other woman. The girlfriend now is in the same boat as her blonde friend. Good for fun but not for a serious relationship.

And this is another girl here saying don't make a housewife our of a ho.
 

turbokinetics

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It's not netorase, not really.

It is pretty much what they discuss ingame, a free pass.

MC fucks around, she fucks around. She only talked to the MC about it originally because she was having doubts, as soon as the doubts were gone she got down to fucking.

It's being classed as netorase because technically she's not cheating on that route. She was given the green light and she's gonna run with it.

I don't see their relationship surviving which is why i've gone all in with another woman.

I'll keep in her good books while she's on the holiday for the stories and flirting with Rachel but if given the choice near the end or whenever a choice seems reasonable i'll be switching my MC to the other woman. The girlfriend now is in the same boat as her blonde friend. Good for fun but not for a serious relationship.

And this is another girl here saying don't make a housewife our of a ho.
Same here. Wouldnt mine flipping to Rachael. I love her so much haha
 
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It's not netorase, not really.

It is pretty much what they discuss ingame, a free pass.

MC fucks around, she fucks around. She only talked to the MC about it originally because she was having doubts, as soon as the doubts were gone she got down to fucking.

It's being classed as netorase because technically she's not cheating on that route. She was given the green light and she's gonna run with it.

I don't see their relationship surviving which is why i've gone all in with another woman.

I'll keep in her good books while she's on the holiday for the stories and flirting with Rachel but if given the choice near the end or whenever a choice seems reasonable i'll be switching my MC to the other woman. The girlfriend now is in the same boat as her blonde friend. Good for fun but not for a serious relationship.

And this is another girl here saying don't make a housewife our of a ho.
if there is the option for the mc to jump ship early , it would be interesting to see it play out where it acts as a wake up call for elle and she try's to get the mc back rather than it going to an end game screen and being like this is what happened in the next three years
 
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if there is the option for the mc to jump ship early , it would be interesting to see it play out where it acts as a wake up call for elle and she try's to get the mc back rather than it going to an end game screen and being like this is what happened in the next three years
I would have loved a few chances to jump ship early. I always prefer when games give you the choice, so staying makes it feel like we did it instead of being mad at the usual (not this one) dumb MC's.

Earliest point, bounce after the BJ if you never engage with another girl.
MC "We are done. Your stuff will be at your parents when you get back"
GF "Why? Are you serious? It was a free pass."
MC "I gave you the free pass. YOU chose to use it. It was a test to see if I was the only one you wanted. I wasn't"
GF "That's sick! Why would you test me!?"
MC *Picture of an engagement ring*
MC "I was going to propose when you got back if you chose me over random dick. YOU chose random dick"
MC *GF Blocked*
 

The_fallen_dragon

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I was enjoying the NTS in this game, especially since the MC is getting as much or more action than Elle. But forcing the MC to allow Liam to take her anal virginity ruined it for me!
Whats ruining it for me is forcing mc to only hear what elle is doing, i remember early i the game when we starting fucking obsessive chick with the cow bikini we could tell elle we are fucking her but it just stopped.

whats also ruining wow they are dragging out belle rachel and devin. how many more times do we just have to lookat them posing in clothes? Devin. kinda annoyed we didn't get to go with tom and get a scene where we smash devin or rachel.
 
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The_fallen_dragon

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This has become a vanilla sexathon.
Elle is fucking her new boyfriend and reporting about it back to her at home boyfriend.
You put her in Jamaica on vacation, why not have her hook-up with a lesbian-curious college girl, or Jamaican man?
how would a Jamaican man be any different from whats going on with liam?
 
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