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The cutscenes are great, but the game's overall design is terrible.
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crnisl
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Well, if you have any specific ideas about outfits/sutuations...Those pictures you posted are pretty nice. Do they have continuance?
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Did you take a long time prompting those? Pretty scary how fast its starting to make pretty coherent stuff. Did you need to specify it a lot, or did it take a lot of liberty?
Anyway nice! and thanks
EDIT: also good job on tricking it with the silhouette scene. Who knew that hidden ntr would have such a perk lmao. Hidden from the censorship as well.
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crnisl
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Specifying a lot, and trying again. Time-consuming, yes.Did you take a long time prompting those? Pretty scary how fast its starting to make pretty coherent stuff. Did you need to specify it a lot, or did it take a lot of liberty?
Anyway nice! and thanks
EDIT: also good job on tricking it with the silhouette scene. Who knew that hidden ntr would have such a perk lmao. Hidden from the censorship as well.
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First game I can't view at all in DLSite. I've been able to bypass their filters previously with a VPN but it won't work for this one in particular for some reason.
Edit - Welp, nevermind. For some reason going through the link you provided doesn't work, but if you go through the second link and click on their game in the 'works by this author' thing, it works fine.
Dafuq?
skizzat93
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I think it saves the cookies or something similar, i noticed it a few weeks ago when it happened to me
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Nice, but you dont have to go through so much trouble. Unless you are having fun with it of course.
One can hope that some day we will get game based on scenarios like this.
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Rain monster was quite the disappointment. there is no gameplay for the Main character. most of the work is in the gallery. and mechanically the game has some things that make playing it a pain in the ass.
good stuff:
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Addendum I am double pissed now just because the true ending is cool and enjoyable. this game would have been better by just removing all the porn. and playing the true ending. the developer did such a good job with details and stuff. I knew who the killer was just by looking at the map. but then it ruins it by adding up porn lazily. this would have been better if the game was split in 1 non porn game. and a netori game where you play Gen the loan shark and you explore different routes to corrupting the girls. (working with the fatman, with bob, or with the landlord, or doing AV) and they would have been 2 great games.
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- the child stage was wonderful. I would rate the game higher if it was only the child stage even tough there is no porn.
- the scenes look serviceable and haven ice angles and animations. but narratively they lack depth and there are implied time skips in the corruption process that makes it look rushed. there are also scenes that end too son because the artist did not want to draw another pose. or because they cut 1 scene into 2.
- The fact that the UI had to reload every time a new message was displayed added microseconds to each message making the game feel slow and super long. there were also coded pauses to signify silence wich also made the thing awefull. how do I notice this? because I use the skip button and if i am skipping and the skipping pauses that is horrible for gameplay. and replayability.
- Overuse of ... ... ... literally the job of the 3 dots is already completed when you write them once. why do you have to write them 3 times in 3 diferent messages? beats me. this compounded with the previous dot.
- nothing to do on the main character side. there are no scenes no nothing just skipping time. the scenes are not worth it.
- the best route is the last route and at that point i was zoned out wich is a shame because I noticed it was the better directed the one with the most dialog animations and scene transitions.
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Addendum I am double pissed now just because the true ending is cool and enjoyable. this game would have been better by just removing all the porn. and playing the true ending. the developer did such a good job with details and stuff. I knew who the killer was just by looking at the map. but then it ruins it by adding up porn lazily. this would have been better if the game was split in 1 non porn game. and a netori game where you play Gen the loan shark and you explore different routes to corrupting the girls. (working with the fatman, with bob, or with the landlord, or doing AV) and they would have been 2 great games.
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zebucetiva
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I second that. Really good game. Dev deserves all the praises. We need to support him
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Not games and maybe you already know about this but this guy translates a few chinese ntr novels
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How to translate this game guys I tried translator++ (v7.4.24C) and mtool both but it stuck everytime so please guys help me (and I also want a favour guys if you have the latest version of translator++ can you give me download link please) thank you so much guys
anonsuit
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Luna translator seems to translate the game fine and embed the text in the game without trouble. (for once) so you can try that. I just tried it. but I wont did not go beyond the intro.
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This luna translator is such a headache man very complicated process
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Ntr is best told through a kinetic novel. If you have too much agency, you either turn it into netorase (having to choose the ntr option making in nts), completely fuck up the corruption pacing (games letting you "farm" corruption points to turn her into a slut) or it has uneven corruption points (different routes that you can do at the same time, so you finish a route where she does everything and then move to a different storyline where she starts shy again, although she already is a complete slut).
Trust me, kinetic novels are the best ntr you can get. People overrate "choice" for some reason, although usually its either just an illusion of choice or a choice of "do you want to play pure or do you want toget ntred, you cuck". Dude I am playing an ntr game, just fucking leave that option out.
Other than mirage defection, I cant think of almost any really good ntr that has choices. Its usually just choices to get a bit different routes of corruption, but thats just different branches of a kinetic novel. And even in mirage I think I would have preferred just a kinetic story.
Almost noone is capable of designing "natural" feeling systems like the corruption in karryns prison for example. Its so fucking hard I can only think of karryns prison that did natural non linear corruption really fucking well.
I don't mean to be aggressive with this question. I am moreso curious. Why would you bring up Mirage Defection when you said something about "turn it into netorase" (having to choose the NTR option) when Mirage Defection is exactly that?
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Rain Monster was mediocre. I wish they just keep it linear with only one Antagonist/Bull. I have grown very tired and uninterested in NTR games with choices or/and Routes. Since every time someone makes Multi Choice/Route NTR games, it turns into half-hearted ones with minimal impact on scenes, duration and otherwise.
Also. The Story is kinda pointless and it can get very dark. Since i am not here for the Story about who killed the Uncle, but for the H-stuff. I can find proper enjoyable Detective-like games out there that focuses on the mystery and drama. Not Rain Monster.
Sad and disappointing. Oh well.
Also. The Story is kinda pointless and it can get very dark. Since i am not here for the Story about who killed the Uncle, but for the H-stuff. I can find proper enjoyable Detective-like games out there that focuses on the mystery and drama. Not Rain Monster.
Sad and disappointing. Oh well.
anonsuit
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I know but I am tech savy so I can handle it otherwise you have to read the tutorials they have posted. but as a general guide simple launch the game with luna translator and once you see a bunch of rows popping up. look at the text in the game and find it in those rows. if it has the embeded button click it and see if it the next word gets translated. that should be enough.
anonsuit
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I played his bet her lose and it was a good game. I personally like shorter stories than long ones. I feel that hangovercat improved a bit on the phrasing and it is beneficial for him when the goal is to write a short story. despite the fact that he writes a lot of what I call " tea time phrases" (imagine 2 kids pretending to drink tea and their pretend conversation of hello I am the duke of kid-town and I love tea, do you love tea Mr Kingsley) talking that does not advance the plot neither does a good job of coloring the character. the kind of word that gets cut on movies like people answering the phone by saying "this is x, who is calling?"
anyways, the animations where great, the scenarios interesting and the Climax superb minus the abrupt ending on the last scene. my only shame is that the girl character is kind of my type and I want to see more of it. hopefully since the game ends with possibilities. maybe in the future something can happen.
as for a hangovercat I am a bit tired that his antagonists are Bully X that engages in betting games. it feels like the kind of erotica you see in young adult works. and I feel he pretty much ran all he could do with it when he wrote a promise best left unkempt. in the end I will not be surprise that when I start he maid her fall. the antagonist will be Bully X engaging in games of chance against main character's mom.
also as a funny side note. hearing the voice actor read English translated into Japanese is honestly weird after knowing Japanese. It sounded quite unnatural LOL.
anyways, the animations where great, the scenarios interesting and the Climax superb minus the abrupt ending on the last scene. my only shame is that the girl character is kind of my type and I want to see more of it. hopefully since the game ends with possibilities. maybe in the future something can happen.
as for a hangovercat I am a bit tired that his antagonists are Bully X that engages in betting games. it feels like the kind of erotica you see in young adult works. and I feel he pretty much ran all he could do with it when he wrote a promise best left unkempt. in the end I will not be surprise that when I start he maid her fall. the antagonist will be Bully X engaging in games of chance against main character's mom.
also as a funny side note. hearing the voice actor read English translated into Japanese is honestly weird after knowing Japanese. It sounded quite unnatural LOL.
