Just because I love this topic, what are some of those hooks?
A- Resilience Vs indulgence
B- Bullying Vs Helplessness
C- Trust Vs Doubt, Lies(Mistery) Vs Truth (Clues)
apply those to anything you see in NTR
person:
A- Slightly ashamed, but elated
B- The antagonist got her to have sex during work
C- Said she had to run to get some copies because the machine was not working, her clothes were sweaty and dissaranged.
place:
A- Karaoke Bar, quite dirty after a party, The patrons paid well for said party.
B- Patrons leave a mess, Owner complains.
C- Liquids Spilled funky smells, Wrappers and "wrappers" lying around.
sex:
A- Cheating is immoral, but she is horny
B- Antagonist pushes, and she cant avoid him
C- If i use my mouth at least is not sex, Girl has "breath problems"
I tried to reduce it to the essence and some more hooks may be missing, since I am not in a thinking mode now. But usually you strive to highlight the conflict of these ideas.
is not about full Resilience or full indulgence, is about the fight between the two. same with bullying and helplessness. is not about one or the other, is about the struggle of the weak vs the strong. is not about Trust or Doubt is about unvealing mysteries wich i'm themselves may be conspiracies or true.
is just drama.
like I said Look at the Awakening of the Goddess comic.
She talks to her boyfriend through a webcam, Send him a selfie naked in a river, but there is a pair of legs behind her, it was a kidd bathing in the river, (the trust, doubt, truth and lies start coming into play), another selfie this time an older boy appears and looks like he is leering (clues and mysteries), She then takes a headache medicine, Starts getting hot and bothered (Restraint vs indulgence), goes to sleep but hass some drunk sex but this is hard to confirm because the husband just catched a glimpse of the stream at night while doing something else. next she is in a tribal party half drunk and an adult with her hands around her....
more and more and you see how the elements balance each other to keep the tension up.
meanwhile the game.
couple arrives, they must play some games, loose the game and you get instafucked. hurray NTR!