Man I need to learn what they do.
I’m literally breaking my back adding L2D and voice acting while these guys can drip-feed and make bank.
You know I checked your game after the leak. here is my advice.
- you are delivering too much quality. your game looks professional. that means clean well written, no bugs, logical plot. well presented UI branching paths.
I honestly think your game looks too good. but at the same time that is what drives me away from it.
the story feels "safe" as in lacking risks. the idea is not new the art is again professional, well proportioned, clean, well colored the kind of art AI tries to copy.
you have to be more messy. you see. NTR is about cleanliness or more precisely lack of.
for the example. in the bathroom scene, she gets raped while facing the mirror. if you want to make it more NTR you have to reduce the cleanliness.
- smear her make up all over the sink and the mirrors
- wet her hair in the toilet.
- dishevel her clothes
- piss on her face
humiliate the character.
same in the train scene, it all looks too clean, the train is clean.
- surround her with passengers,
- squeeze her by sweaty men all around.
- grope every hole in her body.
- rub dicks against buts.
- use all her hands.
- and have someone play with her panties while she is busy.
again.
Humiliate the character.
all the previous games have strong content surrounding humiliation.
you see the girls dancing like whores, you see the bad guys calling the cuck an idiot, you see the girls lying to the cuck, you see the characters becoming filthy both psychically and metaphysically.
in your game the girl get abused but not humiliated. it is not about being phisical is about bullying.
- the picture with the big cock measured against her face. I remember when I was reading 120 days of sodom, how a simple line comparing the width of a girls hips to the guys dick just to drive the tiny girl vs big cock.
- same with the girls getting pasties and swinging the tits.
- or trusting their hips.
- or taking their tongue out
- or rolling their eyes
this is all stupid clownish shit that adds to the humiliation. and makes the character look more filthy and degraded.
and finally as a side not I did not like you using shaky text and blur in your shots, I want to see the artwork not blurred artwork. shit i personally hate that.