anonsuit
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- Nov 24, 2019
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I don't mind the white guy as the antagonist. but the writing itself reeks of self insert.yeah, felt weird having a white whale being the NTRer, this is a huge self insert, HAHAHHAHA
i think the worst example I found was was one of the sex scenes where the wife has sex in front of the husband on the living room. there is no buildup nothing, the guy goes to sleep and gets woken up by the sex. and then makes a passive agressive mention the next day, and then on the last day he blows up about the cheating sex. that he had already witnessed like 3 scenes ago!!
literally the cuck does not exist he is just there for the NTR tag.
and the thing is that it sucks because his art has become better and better. but somehow the writing takes away from it.
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