https://f95zone.to/threads/the-secr...lage-v1-04-hijoguchiyuki.278200/post-18709557
I played this game and I understand why people do not like it.
Gameplay
First it is a solid game. no bugs, game runs smooth no complaints. events do not have problems I did not have trouble running game game.
Art
Serviceable. good enough, animated enough, voiced enough.
Writing
honestly felt mediocre. the writer checked a list of NTR plot stories and plastered them in the game but forgot why these stories are made. literally copying someone else homework without understanding what was being said the characters felt like toys whose personality serves the Sex scene of turn. in one route she is strong witted in one she submits to the cock. in one she likes getting raped, and in one she is the rapists. who is she anyways??
the game feels like the perfect homework to make enough credit to graduate but not remarkable. it would be a great game if the characters were more consistent because as an NTR it at least did the propper homework of doing most of the scenes you can see in common NTR
I just finished watching the gallery. and just to say despite knowing that the game is kind of mediocre I like that the person did their homework and at least knows what could be some good NTR scenes. I personally liked the sex change one and magic semen twirling inside the womb one.
So, just to drive my point about things I have said in previous posts. I will comit the arrogant sin of saying how I would improve the game (despite the fact that I have never made a game myself) anyways. Having stablished this I will move on into what I would do:
First We know the following premises:
- The village is kinda magical. It has a magical room for making babies and testing mana. It has a magical Hat (harry potter much). and it has magically compatible candidates.
- I would make it so the characters are either not human ( elves, oni, demon) or special humans (half races)
- Your village is a hidden village and the temple, the rituals, and the witch (pillar). Protect the village with their spells.
- You are a couple with the girl you grew up with, eventually you find out she is the next Witch (pillar) she is the strongest magician and you are just a wimp mage. But still, you love each other and have sex like a regular couple.
- You have normal boring sex with your girl as part of the gameplay.
Next NTR-hints start appearing:
- When your girl meets an antagonist it is revealed they are magically compatible and that they must do rituals in the temple. the nature of the ritual got lost to history as it is meant to be a secret and people simply lost the info. but it has kept the village safe for years so nobody questions it. Your character gets jealous but she reassures you with some sex.
- Your Ero-sage (the fat old green guy) reveals to you some of the hidden nature of the rituals, he does not know all but he pushes you into a detective adventure. You go into the forbidden area to look for hints.
- You meet the fairy. The fairy knows a lot about the rituals about the baby making and about the NTR nature of the ritual. she does not like the ritual because it is demonic in nature (eeeeeviilllllll) so she helps you with her crystal ball and instructing you how to stop the rituals then 2 people go in.
- Its gets revealed that the temple generates a flesh golem as part of the ritual (the whole NTR sex quick preg thing creates non humans constructs) these constructs protect the village with their magic and fighting prowess.
There is a hint of a war coming to your city and the story leads to some possible endings:
- You let NTR happen, produce 100 baby golem and use them as an army to drive the enemy away. ( regular NTR ending)
- You escape with your wife ( this is hard as she wants to protect the village, and it involves abandoning loved ones like your mother).
- You get a True ending by investigating the ritual and following some steps to get it.
- You may get a Bad ending if you do not get enough babies by the time the army comes and your wife gets made into a breeding womb by the demon hat.
Here is how i Would contextualize the game-play:
- The temple its a baby factory but people forget after making the baby. everything gets healed so Technically "nothing happened"
- Every period of time your girl goes to mana-exchange with one of the antagonist. you can disrupt it, fail to do so, or let it happen. The fairy shows you what happens inside if you ask her.
- After enough failure with 1 antagonist she gets marked (gallery unlocked) she also unlocks 2 new ways to have sex with you (showing you some change in her psiche even if the temple says nothing happens)
- She also learns spells related to the antagonist that marked her. and this is used on you to cheat on you. even still sex outside the temple has the same results, she cant get pregnant because there is no love, so she gets healed and forgets. this also unlocks each individual antagonist ending (wich you can choose to see).
- Will you let NTR happen to get better sex scenes?
Meanwhile you have to unlock the secret of the village:
- The hat is a demon, the demon wants to gain a flesh body.
- The people of the village made a deal with the demon for protection.
- The people of the village also made a deal with the fairies to protect them from the demon.
- This is why the temple was made. The temple prevents a real baby from being born (soul stuff) turns it into a construct and that protect the village. Only a baby born out of true love can be concieved with the Witch Pillar (that is you and her)
Regular NTR ending implies she fucked all the antagonist and made 100 babies, your wife became a strong magician because of the spells she learned. does not remember anything and is healed and you have a baby with her because you love each other. you also get great sex she got ingrained in her body by having sex with the antagonist. You get visions of the things they did to her because the fairy showed you.
Escaping with your wife involves killing the antagonist with special rituals. you run away from the village since there is no golem army to stop the invading one. the village is destroyed your wife is devastated.
Bad ending involves you not solving the mistery the demon focefully makes the 100 golem army tentacle raping your wife into a baby factory.
True ending involves the fat rich guy. he also knows the secrets of the village and wants to make your wife fall in love with him. True ending unlocks a special storyline where the fat bastard has condom sex with your wife causing her not to forget and not get healed he cant impregnate her or she will forget. so he bullies her until she submits.
- He uses a special ritual as an excuse where your wife has to have sex with the antagonist a d the fat bastard. a preparation that leads to an orgy.
- You have to play dumb and encourage your wife to (ganbare) so that she does not fall in love with the fat bastard while fucking him.
- You have to finish invesigating the last parts of the ritual and performing changes to said ritual.
The orgy is part of the true ending you can change the outcome:
- You fail, and your wife falls in love with the fat bastard you get a special bad ending.
- You suceed, you can choose to kill the antagonist or make them forget. the ritual involes you gettting sloppy sex after her womb is filled you are the final sperm born out of love that impregnates her with the mixture of all the other sperms.
- The demon Hat is reborn but as a (hormed human?) she believes to be your daugther and she is quite powerfull (think nayuta form chainsaw man)
many years pass and you raised a (demon girl) with a sense of justice that protects the village even after you passed because you were that good of a dad.
And that is it folks my sin of arrogance for believing i can make a game better than the developer despite never developing a game.
