VN Ren'Py NTR Phone Group [Vol. 2 - Ch.11a] [NtrCaptain]

[Pagoramix]

funny this dev try out comic slice just at the same moment another popular game does the same...
just out of curiosity, is this dev other games also goin through existential crisis? I mean, did he already tried comic strip, or even strayed from the main protags pov as it have happened here with the whole son bs?

 

[Theadriel]

I mean. Writting in this chapter is so bad.
At what point you leave your husband in the middle of the night to go meet an old man that stalked you few hours earlier just to hear him say "sorry" or whatever soapy bullshit he has to say? In what reality it turns to a street groping and a blowjob without resistance? (Also, 30 minutes titjob? really?) If she was dumb enough to let John play his stupid tricks she reached another level of stupidity when she accepted to follow the guy (who just admit he and John lied to her to litteraly get in her mouth) to his place for a shower just because she has spunk on her shirt. Just come home, quickly get into the shower and clean up instead of being "molested" by an old man all night...

Sometimes I wonder if some games aren't made by teenage gooners who have been raised on pornhub

 

[Simma90]

I gotta agree here...the previous style without the comics was way better and the whole story with Mike was a total downer. This is one of my most awaited games/updates and to get this exact update was just super frustrating both in style and in content. I don't mind other guys coming into play later on in the story but at this point it feels way too rushed.

I don't pay for it either, but I think the dev really should consider rewriting the whole chapter - even if it delays updates. I would rather wait 2 months for a really good update than getting a shitty update every month from now on.

Oh and I forgot to add, apart from the typos in this Update, there are also two issues - one small and one huge:

Spoiler: Issues

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[Vampire_Lord]

Now we have to wait for him to rebuild the episode again, if he wants to do a rework from the story of this last update because nobody liked it that would be great.

 

[Zobra]

Those who praised John :

Spoiler: john

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That how much john actually earned to let mike have his way with her ,both assholes and liars and they both know that

PS: that Comic style ... i need Microscope to Read them from pc...

 

[Chaoticjustice]

That ending is the worst thing I've ever read...dips out in the early hours of the morning to see the old man, tell the MC she shopping with Kate (at like midnight cause that makes sense ) then she's pretending that she's drunk and then she arrives home shortly before sunrise

I swear if the MC is awake when she comes home and believes her/ just believes her regardless I'd be surprised because there is porn logic and there is this

Theres people in comas that have more awareness than that

And the FMC is just as clueless she falls for the same stupid lines over and over and over I swear it's like she's got the memory of a goldfish

 

[Theadriel]

And the FMC is just as clueless she falls for the same stupid lines over and over and over I swear it's like she's got the memory of a goldfish

I mean... she discover she got lied to by both Mike and John (about cancer and Mike family situation) while sucking him in a street and what is she doing next? go to Mike place and get gropped and humped all night while she keep asking what hour it is like if that's all that matters. Even in a porn context it's dumber than possible.

 

[Vampire_Lord]

I mean... she discover she got lied to by both Mike and John (about cancer and Mike family situation) while sucking him in a street and what is she doing next? go to Mike place and get gropped and humped all night while she keep asking what hour it is like if that's all that matters. Even in a porn context it's dumber than possible.

From the moment he discovered that they lied to her, he would have gone home and told them both to go to hell, but he went
to the guy's house and what happened none of us liked because it has no coherence

 

[Gravied]

Good day everyone!

Let me start by addressing the hot topic right now... the last update for the NTR phone group. I ran a poll, and the majority preferred the old experience. The main issue with the comic style was that it broke immersion. I'm glad to see that, and I've already begun reworking the last chapter to better suit the narrative while preserving the mystery and immersion.

This update is being tailored based on all the feedback, ideas, and suggestions I've received over the past few days. I don't want to spoil the plot but just know.... I'm listening and making changes as requested.

As for the comic style, I still plan to pursue it, but I think it will work better as a separate, standalone thing not related to games.

Now, regarding the roadmap... before I start yapping again -

• NTR Phone Group (Chapter 10 -remade) - 10th October
• NTS Mobile Phone Update - 17th October
• HRM Mobile Phone Update - 24th October
• NTR Phone Group (Chapter 11) - 31stOctober

Back to yapping again - but this part is important. Based on recent and past feedback, it’s clear our community prefers NTR content over NTS and Harem. So, I’ve decided to focus more on NTR going forward.

That said, I don’t like abandoning projects I’ve put time and effort into. In short.... Both the NTS and Harem Mobile Phone stories will receive three more updates. The final update for each will drop in December this year, wrapping up their plots properly.

As mentioned in the roadmap above... NTR Phone Group is getting two updates this month (Chapter 10 remade + Chapter 11), followed by two more in November and December.... that’ll take us up to Chapter 13, which will officially conclude the Corruption Arc spanning Chapters 1 through 13.

Starting in January, the game will shift into the Corrupted Arc. Get it? Rachel’s corruption arc (Chapters 1–13) becomes Rachel’s corrupted arc (from Chapter 14 onward). Things are about to get really spicy in the next arc…

Now, since NTS Mobile Phone and Harem Mobile Phone are planned to conclude this December, their slots, time, and resources will be redirected to the NTR Phone Group and two new NTR games . One of these will be a mystery themed NTR project ‍♂ , while the second will start as an NTS story that gradually shifts into NTR ... and eventually evolves into a revenge/reverse NTR arc .

Both will feature a new art style , and I can't wait to share more as we get closer. Decent progress has already been made on both the art and story, but for now, my main focus is on wrapping up the NTS and Harem projects so I can fully dive into the upcoming NTR games.

Let me sign off by thanking you all for your support and the amazing feedback. I’m listening to each and every one of you. Take care!

-NTRcaptain.

 

[Serenity Life]

From the moment he discovered that they lied to her, he would have gone home and told them both to go to hell, but he went
to the guy's house and what happened none of us liked because it has no coherence

I wish I could see your comments in the discussion thread for Nekoaddict’s game.

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Here, everything starts and unfolds in an interesting, logical, and intriguing way — especially in the eighth update, where Rachel literally gave in to temptation, lust… and the size of his “equipment,” letting him “paint” her face and mouth with his semen.
But the way it was presented felt realistic.
The tenth update, on the other hand, was illogical.

 

[Theadriel]

Rachel literally gave in to temptation, lust… and the size of his “equipment,” letting him “paint” her face and mouth with his semen.
But the way it was presented felt realistic.

If you talk about this scene I have to ask. How realistically can John take this position if he can't use his legs?
(And I don't even talk about the dick size but that's a kink for some people)

Realism is the least adjective I would use for that story to be honest and especially with the last update

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Edit: oh yeah I forgot John dick magically inflating for whatever reasons being part of the plot xD

 

[Vampire_Lord]

If you talk about this scene I have to ask. How realistically can John take this position if he can't use his legs?
(And I don't even talk about the dick size but that's a kink for some people)

Realism is the least adjective I would use for that story to be honest and especially with the last update

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Edit: oh yeah I forgot John dick magically inflating for whatever reasons being part of the plot xD

Well, on that subject it is also difficult to have the same consistency of AI in the size of the penis, we just have to imagine that it is the same.

 

[Vampire_Lord]

Good day everyone!

Let me start by addressing the hot topic right now... the last update for the NTR phone group. I ran a poll, and the majority preferred the old experience. The main issue with the comic style was that it broke immersion. I'm glad to see that, and I've already begun reworking the last chapter to better suit the narrative while preserving the mystery and immersion.

This update is being tailored based on all the feedback, ideas, and suggestions I've received over the past few days. I don't want to spoil the plot but just know.... I'm listening and making changes as requested.

As for the comic style, I still plan to pursue it, but I think it will work better as a separate, standalone thing not related to games.

Now, regarding the roadmap... before I start yapping again -

• NTR Phone Group (Chapter 10 -remade) - 10th October
• NTS Mobile Phone Update - 17th October
• HRM Mobile Phone Update - 24th October
• NTR Phone Group (Chapter 11) - 31stOctober

Back to yapping again - but this part is important. Based on recent and past feedback, it’s clear our community prefers NTR content over NTS and Harem. So, I’ve decided to focus more on NTR going forward.

That said, I don’t like abandoning projects I’ve put time and effort into. In short.... Both the NTS and Harem Mobile Phone stories will receive three more updates. The final update for each will drop in December this year, wrapping up their plots properly.

As mentioned in the roadmap above... NTR Phone Group is getting two updates this month (Chapter 10 remade + Chapter 11), followed by two more in November and December.... that’ll take us up to Chapter 13, which will officially conclude the Corruption Arc spanning Chapters 1 through 13.

Starting in January, the game will shift into the Corrupted Arc. Get it? Rachel’s corruption arc (Chapters 1–13) becomes Rachel’s corrupted arc (from Chapter 14 onward). Things are about to get really spicy in the next arc…

Now, since NTS Mobile Phone and Harem Mobile Phone are planned to conclude this December, their slots, time, and resources will be redirected to the NTR Phone Group and two new NTR games . One of these will be a mystery themed NTR project ‍♂ , while the second will start as an NTS story that gradually shifts into NTR ... and eventually evolves into a revenge/reverse NTR arc .

Both will feature a new art style , and I can't wait to share more as we get closer. Decent progress has already been made on both the art and story, but for now, my main focus is on wrapping up the NTS and Harem projects so I can fully dive into the upcoming NTR games.

Let me sign off by thanking you all for your support and the amazing feedback. I’m listening to each and every one of you. Take care!

-NTRcaptain.

I could say that I'm not surprised that the author has a spy account on the thread and sees the opinions we give, but if he does, it's good because he sees that the complaints we've had are quite unfounded and easily correctable. I like that he gives more importance to the game and our opinions.

 

[Theadriel]

Seems a rework of the events isn't planned. If she's reaching the end of corrupting phase in three chapters I guess next one she get fucked by at least John and/or Mike. And soon she'll suck lines of cocks in gloryholes or be the neighborhood cumdump... It seems that drug lord stuff is going to be the end of her since of course she'll be implicated and she'll become that guy slut too.

 

[Serenity Life]

If you talk about this scene I have to ask. How realistically can John take this position if he can't use his legs?
(And I don't even talk about the dick size but that's a kink for some people)

Realism is the least adjective I would use for that story to be honest and especially with the last update

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Edit: oh yeah I forgot John dick magically inflating for whatever reasons being part of the plot xD

Yes, but we’re talking about realism in the context of visual novels — and even more so, within an unusual genre.
So the real question is: “How realistic should the scenes be, given that there’s supposed to be logic here?”
That’s why it’s important to consider not only the absurdity, but also the possible ways things could happen.

In the spoiler below, I described / suggested the likely details of the scenes leading up to the “dirty” photo.

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[Sissycuck111]

Rachel is fkng gorgeous. Very hot game!

 

[Vampire_Lord]

Rachel is fkng gorgeous. Very hot game!

indeed

 

[timurotbasaroglu]

Rachel is is gorgeous and very hot! But what is this story man, it makes no sense!
Also this pacing is terrible.

 

[BOBtheboober1995]

Rachel is is gorgeous and very hot! But what is this story man, it makes no sense!
Also this pacing is terrible.

I will accept the flaws... Rachel's beauty is worth it..

 

[KingsRaiden]

Rachel is hot and like the corruption pacing until this chapter when it seems like Mike was able to jump a few steps ahead of John who is still struggling with getting Rachel to do what he wants, glad the comics are going away they didn't fit the rest of the images or flow of the game.