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Gravied
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Yea , just finished the game . He just changed the plot , and replaced some few pictures, not much content was there
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Tbh I liked this way more than the last one.. But the content was kinda short but hey he's Releasing the new update on 31st..can't wait
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Yeah you guys are missing this - not supposed to be a new update but a fix to the last one that everyone was complaining about.
The writing still isn't awesome, but this change makes a lot more sense for the progression of the character. There is two things:
A: No new random dude that instantly gets to 3rd base with Rachel out of the blue;
B: Rachel clearly being jealous that John is getting action from elsewhere, and acting out of spite on that basis. That is better character progression for the story.
So this is, IMO, a lot better of a version for the Ch10 update than what we had before. I think the comic format can work, but it has to be done better (IE no miniature text, better leadup to the images) and they should introduce some other creepy old man characters, just not so quickly as they did.
The writing still isn't awesome, but this change makes a lot more sense for the progression of the character. There is two things:
A: No new random dude that instantly gets to 3rd base with Rachel out of the blue;
B: Rachel clearly being jealous that John is getting action from elsewhere, and acting out of spite on that basis. That is better character progression for the story.
So this is, IMO, a lot better of a version for the Ch10 update than what we had before. I think the comic format can work, but it has to be done better (IE no miniature text, better leadup to the images) and they should introduce some other creepy old man characters, just not so quickly as they did.
Yeah, I like the concept of the comic pictures, but the execution was too poor. Needs to be polished.
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It wasn't a bad update, it fixed the previous one. I liked how she got upset when she saw John's photo, as if she felt jealous and powerless because he didn't respond to his messages or calls. That will further advance his corruption by John,
I didn't like that she suddenly showed her tits to the stepson
I didn't like that she suddenly showed her tits to the stepson
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Thank you NTRcaptain for the rework!
I agree it was very short but it wasn't about a new content update, but to fix what the community didn't like. And it delivered big time in that regard.
The story was so much more believable (you need to remember that Jason is her ex) and by removing the comic style it felt way more immersive.
I agree it was very short but it wasn't about a new content update, but to fix what the community didn't like. And it delivered big time in that regard.
The story was so much more believable (you need to remember that Jason is her ex) and by removing the comic style it felt way more immersive.
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The plot of version v10.0.b is really much better
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Yes! It could have been even better, but it is much better than the previous one
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