VN Others NTR Phone [v0.32.2] [Shybox]

[Dave 237]

so does poly always cheat on you?

 

[Deathcat]

what makes her a cunt?

You can play bf one of two ways either {slightly} jealous and questioning or super supportive but with the one rule, no guys. I played the latter and the two seemingly have a great relationship with bf helping set up streams and generally wanting her to succeed. Polly does drop gently hints that she wants to go farther, even calling the MC a stag at one point but everything is great until, randomly, Polly breaks all the trust and good will she had with the MC deciding in a single moment that, no, he's not a stag but a cuck. Fuck his help, fuck his feelings, fuck their relationship, she wants big dick now!

If that's not a cunt... Then I don't know what else to tell you. Maybe next update, however many months that will be my bet is November, will have her apologize, it was implied that she was drunk after all but as it stands she's just a bitch. However it happened irl we know it was 'for the best' as she's now a popular and successful cam girl or OF or whatever it is she does but for now, she ruined her relationship for...what exactly? She was horny and wanted a big cock. Okay...

Looks like Rachel is in the next poll, she will 100% win, by a landslide, it won't even be close. *Sigh* At least Lilith got a decent sized update recently unlike the tiny one Mabel received. One day Mabel.... One day...

 

[Chaoticjustice]

You can play bf one of two ways either {slightly} jealous and questioning or super supportive but with the one rule, no guys. I played the latter and the two seemingly have a great relationship with bf helping set up streams and generally wanting her to succeed. Polly does drop gently hints that she wants to go farther, even calling the MC a stag at one point but everything is great until, randomly, Polly breaks all the trust and good will she had with the MC deciding in a single moment that, no, he's not a stag but a cuck. Fuck his help, fuck his feelings, fuck their relationship, she wants big dick now!

If that's not a cunt... Then I don't know what else to tell you. Maybe next update, however many months that will be my bet is November, will have her apologize, it was implied that she was drunk after all but as it stands she's just a bitch. However it happened irl we know it was 'for the best' as she's now a popular and successful cam girl or OF or whatever it is she does but for now, she ruined her relationship for...what exactly? She was horny and wanted a big cock. Okay...

Looks like Rachel is in the next poll, she will 100% win, by a landslide, it won't even be close. *Sigh*

Hahaha yes I'm all for this 1000 times yes - here's where I landed on it and I would imagine you'd agree

Honestly I was really enjoying the Polly chat I thought it was gonna go down the swinging/ sharing each open relationship route with the MC appearing on stream .... Then the end just annoyed me that she straight up cheats and even tho she says sorry you know she doesn't give a fuck.... But I think the thing that infuriated me the most was that she kept calling you kitten while this conversation was happening my god I wanted more than anything for the MC to let rip and lay into her ... Fuck it burn all her shit , destroy her streaming stuff like go big or go home .... Even get with Anna and rub it in Polly's face , but it was a disappointing end to it as he was supportive and was like look only rule no guys and by the end she's just like fuck you il do what I want also while I remember the bit where she's like at least you don't have a temper and your like well I'm not small and she's like well your not big .... Id of been like excuse me bitch what the fuck do you think your saying , fuck you I'm out your for the streets

 

[Deathcat]

Hahaha yes I'm all for this 1000 times yes - here's where I landed on it and I would imagine you'd agree

Honestly I was really enjoying the Polly chat I thought it was gonna go down the swinging/ sharing each open relationship route with the MC appearing on stream .... Then the end just annoyed me that she straight up cheats and even tho she says sorry you know she doesn't give a fuck.... But I think the thing that infuriated me the most was that she kept calling you kitten while this conversation was happening my god I wanted more than anything for the MC to let rip and lay into her ... Fuck it burn all her shit , destroy her streaming stuff like go big or go home .... Even get with Anna and rub it in Polly's face , but it was a disappointing end to it as he was supportive and was like look only rule no guys and by the end she's just like fuck you il do what I want also while I remember the bit where she's like at least you don't have a temper and your like well I'm not small and she's like well your not big .... Id of been like excuse me bitch what the fuck do you think your saying , fuck you I'm out your for the streets

Exactly! The way it felt at the beginning was that Polly was slowly building the MC up to the idea of introducing other guys. But, as you said with the size comment she makes, I think she was actually just looking for an excuse to cheat and when she couldn't find one she just said 'fuck it, I'm cheating anyway lol!' Like, the man had a single rule and you couldn't talk it out with him? Maybe he still say no and THEN you cheat but nah, cheat anyway, screw him he has a tiny cock.

It was frustrating.

 

[Dave 237]

You can play bf one of two ways either {slightly} jealous and questioning or super supportive but with the one rule, no guys. I played the latter and the two seemingly have a great relationship with bf helping set up streams and generally wanting her to succeed. Polly does drop gently hints that she wants to go farther, even calling the MC a stag at one point but everything is great until, randomly, Polly breaks all the trust and good will she had with the MC deciding in a single moment that, no, he's not a stag but a cuck. Fuck his help, fuck his feelings, fuck their relationship, she wants big dick now!

If that's not a cunt... Then I don't know what else to tell you. Maybe next update, however many months that will be my bet is November, will have her apologize, it was implied that she was drunk after all but as it stands she's just a bitch. However it happened irl we know it was 'for the best' as she's now a popular and successful cam girl or OF or whatever it is she does but for now, she ruined her relationship for...what exactly? She was horny and wanted a big cock. Okay...

Looks like Rachel is in the next poll, she will 100% win, by a landslide, it won't even be close. *Sigh* At least Lilith got a decent sized update recently unlike the tiny one Mabel received. One day Mabel.... One day...

umm i was talking about the person who inspired the character

 

[FatYoda]

This is an amazing project. Really liked the Poly chat. Just wish there could have been more hints/teasing before the big reveal of her straight banging another dude.

Seriously...if there were hints or teasing i could have gotten on board. sharing is fun, but just the straight up disregard for what the guy she supposedly loves feels...doesn't fit. you don't love someone if you can do that to them.

 

[FatYoda]

Just to make this one clear, I was worried about that so I wrote in the beginning of her chat "inspired by her real life and rewritten by Shybox" The game is still called NTR Phone. Which stands for cheating. She didn't share with me what the exact reason for her breakup was, the breakup reason is my nsfw addition. The girl group chat and how she got the tattoos, her boyfriend helping with the start of her streaming career. That is all true. But the nsfw stuff is made up because I didn't want to break into her privacy too much.

I let her playtest the story before it was published to make sure she's okay with how the story is presented. She gave me the okay to upload.

I think her being a real person rubs some people the wrong way. But I wouldn't put her into the game if she wasn't an interesting person to begin with. And it's the only collab that I'm doing. It's a unique addition to the game to have one collab in it.

the problem is that's just not the way that would go down. if she loves him she's gonna discuss with him what she wants. and if he finds out, she's not gonna treat someone she loves like that. she's gonna be remorseful and feel like shit for hurting him. i could have gotten on board with that...but the complete disregard for the way the amazingly supportive man she loves feels is absolute garbage. It wasn't the fact he got cheated on, it's the extreme cuntishness of the way she handled it. The second she said i'm sleeping over i knew we were getting cheated on, so it wasn't a surprise, and i could tell that's the way she wanted to progress for a while leading up to that, but that was awful. Like when he straight up asked about the tattoo, she should have brought up how she wanted to move forward. That story would have been amazing/perfect if she had mentioned it then. It would have even still been good if she'd jumped off that cock and ran home and was apologetic and we moved forward with a sharing relationship after that. But that caused me literal pain when she treated him that way. I am incapable of reading anything without getting emotionally involved. Ive been that way my whole life.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

the problem is that's just not the way that would go down. if she loves him she's gonna discuss with him what she wants. and if he finds out, she's not gonna treat someone she loves like that. she's gonna be remorseful and feel like shit for hurting him. i could have gotten on board with that...but the complete disregard for the way the amazingly supportive man she loves feels is absolute garbage. It wasn't the fact he got cheated on, it's the extreme cuntishness of the way she handled it. The second she said i'm sleeping over i knew we were getting cheated on, so it wasn't a surprise, and i could tell that's the way she wanted to progress for a while leading up to that, but that was awful. Like when he straight up asked about the tattoo, she should have brought up how she wanted to move forward.

Yes bang on couldn't agree more , both Polly and Racheal massive cunts now with that being said there is only one other female that takes top cunt for me in an NTR game and that is Laura in a promise best unkept (if you haven't played it id say to do so , so you know what i mean but given the fact ive called her the top cunt i doubt you would )…. but moving on if you put those three together they would be like the charlies angels of being cunts ..... and before anyone starts yes i know its NTR but it takes a special kind of cunt for my hate for them to be massively above anything i would have for the male that's cheating or blacking etc those cunts

sidenote - i dont think ive ever used the word cunt so much in a short space of time haha

 

[FatYoda]

Honestly I was really enjoying the Polly chat I thought it was gonna go down the swinging/ sharing each open relationship route with the MC appearing on stream .... Then the end just annoyed me that she straight up cheats and even tho she says sorry you know she doesn't give a fuck.... But I think the thing that infuriated me the most was that she kept calling you kitten while this conversation was happening my god I wanted more than anything for the MC to let rip and lay into her ... Fuck it burn all her shit , destroy her streaming stuff like go big or go home .... Even get with Anna and rub it in Polly's face , but it was a disappointing end to it as he was supportive and was like look only rule no guys and by the end she's just like fuck you il do what I want also while I remember the bit where she's like at least you don't have a temper and your like well I'm not small and she's like well your not big .... Id of been like excuse me bitch what the fuck do you think your saying , fuck you I'm out your for the streets

exactly! I was so looking forward to moving forward on her streams and even eventually sharing her with other guys and getting involved in both MMF and MFF threesomes. If you've never shared a girl in your life...the look on her face the first time she's dp'd....fucking amazing. those are the reasons i like sharing irl. and this story was moving forward perfectly...i was even semi ok with her fucking him/cheating once and then coming home sad and apologetic and we move forward...but the way she treated him with utter disregard...FUCK THAT SHIT!

 

[Chaoticjustice]

exactly! I was so looking forward to moving forward on her streams and even eventually sharing her with other guys and getting involved in both MMF and MFF threesomes. If you've never shared a girl in your life...the look on her face the first time she's dp'd....fucking amazing. those are the reasons i like sharing irl. and this story was moving forward perfectly...i was even semi ok with her fucking him/cheating once and then coming home sad and apologetic and we move forward...but the way she treated him with utter disregard...FUCK THAT SHIT!

absolutely this is spot on , i also forgot the mention the absolute curve ball that is the first group chat... honestly when that started i was like this is great the MC is gonna get to fuck all her work mates either on his own or with her as it was giving vibes that she wanted to try it .... them bam im fucking someone else without your consent sorry not sorry .... but it was the fact she kept saying kitten during the part where it comes out shes cheating and that only amp'd up my anger .... like such a small thing but i was genuinely like this motherfucker is calling me kitten while we are talking about her cheating while shes actually cheating haha

 

[FatYoda]

absolutely this is spot on , i also forgot the mention the absolute curve ball that is the first group chat... honestly when that started i was like this is great the MC is gonna get to fuck all her work mates either on his own or with her as it was giving vibes that she wanted to try it .... them bam im fucking someone else without your consent sorry not sorry .... but it was the fact she kept saying kitten during the part where it comes out shes cheating and that only amp'd up my anger .... like such a small thing but i was genuinely like this motherfucker is calling me kitten while we are talking about her cheating while shes actually cheating haha

Yep, exactly that story was looking perfect, sharing her with her friends (which seems to ALWAYS BE LEFT OUT of these types of stories, getting involved with her friends too (also...for whatever reason is never a part of these)_ eventually sharing her with her friends BF's or with randoms for streams. It was perfect and then just getting absolutely stomped on at the end...not cool.

 

[FatYoda]

Yes the game is called NTR Phone but there is NTS content too, not just NTR, and I think an NTS variation wouldn't hurt... instead of Polly cheating she can explore with the MC with his consent

yep, i loved this storyline and the way it felt like it was going....and then she just treated you like garbage when you caught her. I shut that shit down and was not in the mood anymore the rest of the night...shit literally ruined my night.

 

[Step3]

Seriously...if there were hints or teasing i could have gotten on board. sharing is fun, but just the straight up disregard for what the guy she supposedly loves feels...doesn't fit. you don't love someone if you can do that to them.

You misunderstand. I love NTR. It's not for everyone. I am simply complaining that the angst was not prolonged before the kill shot.

I wish he had gotten hints, had numerous reasons to be suspicious before finally receiving a video confirming his fears from one of her friends. The way she behaved afterwards, cold and callous was perfect. And true to life as many can attest!

 

[Ronjonsurf69]

yep, i loved this storyline and the way it felt like it was going....and then she just treated you like garbage when you caught her. I shut that shit down and was not in the mood anymore the rest of the night...shit literally ruined my night.

The audio included in the animations of Polly were also of poor quality. At least Amber has a reason to cheat because you're too busy at work and planned time with her, so she cheats. Naomi is really hot, and just a party girl from the very beginning so you can't really blame her she's just having fun, even in a slutty way she has her moments but she does care and is sweet. Cathyrn really listens and gives you everything you want. Lilith is really easy to steer the conversation again getting what you want. Rachel is nice at first but she's got a craving for darker skin and its her thing. Mabel is a fun cosplay story. But yeah I could do without Polly. Lol

 

[FatYoda]

The audio included in the animations of Polly were also of poor quality. At least Amber has a reason to cheat because you're too busy at work and planned time with her, so she cheats. Naomi is really hot, and just a party girl from the very beginning so you can't really blame her she's just having fun, even in a slutty way she has her moments but she does care and is sweet. Cathyrn really listens and gives you everything you want. Lilith is really easy to steer the conversation again getting what you want. Rachel is nice at first but she's got a craving for darker skin and its her thing. Mabel is a fun cosplay story. But yeah I could do without Polly. Lol

Yeah i would have liked that more too. I don't mind light NTR with a buildup and then she cheats then she's remorseful and you open the relationship up, those aree fun but her shitting all over you while she's fucking Nick...that hurt, and it just didn't seem to fit her character at all.

 

[salmon312]

You misunderstand. I love NTR. It's not for everyone. I am simply complaining that the angst was not prolonged before the kill shot.

I wish he had gotten hints, had numerous reasons to be suspicious before finally receiving a video confirming his fears from one of her friends. The way she behaved afterwards, cold and callous was perfect. And true to life as many can attest!

Exactly. Polly's story was the most realistic of all. I can understand why players prefer a "sweetened" version of NTR stories, with the sole purpose of having a more digestible product for the consumer. But Polly's story was realistic, with the shock of discovering the harsh truth and superficiality of a person you considered special.
I also ended up feeling bad about Polly's story, but I guess for the same reason real-life people don't like being cheated on.

P.S.: The dialogue between the women in a private group also added a lot of realism.

 

[DressedToThrill]

Lots of good stuff in the Polly story. I just wish there was a timeline where the friend group stayed together and were cheering on the BF, who become more open to share Polly on stream, also with guys on camera, and perhaps with the other girls' boyfriends in the group chat. Cheating kills the story for me, since that's usually a game over in real life. Sharing lets me suspend disbelief enough to believe the story can continue.

Also, a rarity when discussing these phone games, I wish for an option to slow or pause the chat. This was just too fast for me, or to far between MC time to type, and the dialogue isn't even boring to read, so let us!

Also I have no knowledge at all about this real life camgirl, so I have no opinion on that at all. I just think the group of friends working at a bakery, being lewd on the side, was fun and cute.

 

[Deleted member 3521099]

mid update ngl. huge personality change at the end feels rushed and abrupt. there was also no real story branches

 

[Leathermax]

I didn't dislike Polly's story. I kinda saw it coming, tbf. If your girl is asking you to push the boundaries of the relationship over and over, it's quite telegraphed where it's going. And if she's growing bolder while at it, it also makes sense for her to not even act ashamed of her own betrayal.
What I wanted to know is if that's where Polly's story end, because I felt that's where it was getting hotter.

 

[salmon312]

mid update ngl. huge personality change at the end feels rushed and abrupt. there was also no real story branches

Why rushed? From the very beginning, it's clear that Polly is a slut.
From the start, she's been sharing nude photos with women from work she's known for a couple of days, chatting about cheating on her boyfriends, and showing interest in stripping on webcam.
There's no rush here. What we're seeing is a betrayal of a man's feelings and the harsh reality of how women behave in packs.