Chaoticjustice
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- May 26, 2024
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This story is an absolute disaster, so it starts as a bdsm dungeon where you find out the wife is pretty much a mistress, and after a bit, the MC gets into the bdsm aspect... then it jumps to the MC telling men that he can't satisfy his wife and that they are in an open relationship ( with no prior mention of this or even a potential suggestion off it ) then the wife starts trying to get a person behind the MCs back and he then has evidence of this and never mentions it to the wife, all while the wife is like you can meet the new person before we do anything ( which doesnt happen and the wife thinks that said person just sending you a nude is the equivalment of meeting someone even though zero conversation was exchanged)
Honestly, the concept at the start seemed interesting, then it absolutely nose dived. You would think ideas were just being pulled out of a hat and thrown into the story with no rhyme or reason. wouldn't be surprised if she were randomly pregnant in the next update, at least it would be in line with the erratic writing
Honestly, the concept at the start seemed interesting, then it absolutely nose dived. You would think ideas were just being pulled out of a hat and thrown into the story with no rhyme or reason. wouldn't be surprised if she were randomly pregnant in the next update, at least it would be in line with the erratic writing