VN Ren'Py NTR'ed by My Friend [v0.3.0] [NTR.ai]

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Beautiful VN!
And a very elegant style...
A suggestion: If Blake were also much more muscular than Alan, he would be really irresistible to Cristine... Good luck!
Interesting suggestion and I am truly sorry but I can't help myself with this next comment so hopefully you see it as a joke haha

So more muscular eh now would that make him irresistible to Christina or irresistible to you ;)

Sorry I couldn't help myself and I had to say it was the only person that decides what Christina is into is the Dev technically she's not into anything untill the Dev writes it

But like I said I only mean it as a joke and I'm not here to shame anyone
 

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Beautiful VN!
And a very elegant style...
A suggestion: If Blake were also much more muscular than Alan, he would be really irresistible to Cristine... Good luck!
I did try to make Blake more muscular but the face would be not like what I want.
 

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That's pretty good, it conveys the storyline at a simple glance, the fact that it's a gif catches the eye and the short teaser might be appealing to people who didn't know about the game. Thanks brother, I'm now waiting with anticipation the next update.
Really happy you liked it! I rushed to learn some After Effects over the past few days to make it—was torn on which style to go with.
This will actually be the splash screen and menu in v0.4.0 too, haha.
 
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I just discovered the game, if the new version will be released for free today, can you make it a little earlier for us?
Thanks so much for your interest and excitement!

But I want to make sure things stay fair for the paid members who supported the early access.

I would appreciate your understanding—and I hope you’ll enjoy the update once it’s out!
 

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Played 0.4, pretty good update, I'm always a fan of this kind of sequence
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This being said, I had one issue with the animations. I assume the blurriness is related to the AI generation and you can't really do much about it so I can live with that but I'm definitely not a fan of the way some of them loop. Like, she is turning her head towards the door or lifting her head to look at the player then it restarts. Maybe there should be more stills acting as a transition or no loop during some sequences, I don't know.

Like, for example, in this update:
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It would be the same concept for the 0.5, it would be disturbing to see the sequence winning the poll starting over and over
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Just my two cents on it (or 4.80 bucks technically), as a guy who has no idea about how long it would take or how hard it would be to do it, especially with something as capricious as AI.
 
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Played 0.4, pretty good update, I'm always a fan of this kind of sequence
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This being said, I had one issue with the animations. I assume the blurriness is related to the AI generation and you can't really do much about it so I can live with that but I'm definitely not a fan of the way some of them loop. Like, she is turning her head towards the door or lifting her head to look at the player then it restarts. Maybe there should be more stills acting as a transition or no loop during some sequences, I don't know.

Like, for example, in this update:
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It would be the same concept for the 0.5, it would be disturbing to see the sequence winning the poll starting over and over
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Just my two cents on it (or 4.80 bucks technically), as a guy who has no idea about how long it would take or how hard it would be to do it, especially with something as capricious as AI.
Thanks for the detailed feedback! I apologize for the bad experience and the loop sequence you suggest is actually what I did for the previous updates. I was doing the final editing for the animations really late and didn’t think it correctly.
Just to confirm, the bad sequences are the
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, these two right? I will re-edit them and upload again. Sorry for that again.
 

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Thanks for the detailed feedback! I apologize for the bad experience and the loop sequence you suggest is actually what I did for the previous updates. I was doing the final editing for the animations really late and didn’t think it correctly.
Just to confirm, the bad sequences are the
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, these two right? I will re-edit them and upload again. Sorry for that again.
That wasn't a bad experience, don't apologize about that, that's just a minor grip I had but I assume most people won't care about it.
As for the "fixing", just ask your patrons if they noticed it and if they were bothered by it, don't waste time to please one dude who had a tiny issue with two out of the six animations.

But yeah, I was talking about the
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. I've noticed it previously during the 0.1 cumshot but I paid no mind to it because it was the early release so I attributed it to a "beginner" mistake.

Just keep up the good work mate, move forward with your storyline and only come back to "fix" this if you have the time or the desire to do so. This being said, I appreciate that you are listening to criticisms and taking them to heart. But don't forget that you are the boss and you don't have to please each and every one of your customers every time they ask you something, you won't be able to fulfil every request once you have grown (and I assume you will).

Finally, I would recommend you to send the 0.3 version to an uploader as it became free for everyone, your game will be put on top of the Latest Games and Updates section of the website and get more visibility.
 

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That wasn't a bad experience, don't apologize about that, that's just a minor grip I had but I assume most people won't care about it.
As for the "fixing", just ask your patrons if they noticed it and if they were bothered by it, don't waste time to please one dude who had a tiny issue with two out of the six animations.

But yeah, I was talking about the
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. I've noticed it previously during the 0.1 cumshot but I paid no mind to it because it was the early release so I attributed it to a "beginner" mistake.

Just keep up the good work mate, move forward with your storyline and only come back to "fix" this if you have the time or the desire to do so. This being said, I appreciate that you are listening to criticisms and taking them to heart. But don't forget that you are the boss and you don't have to please each and every one of your customers every time they ask you something, you won't be able to fulfil every request once you have grown (and I assume you will).

Finally, I would recommend you to send the 0.3 version to an uploader as it became free for everyone, your game will be put on top of the Latest Games and Updates section of the website and get more visibility.
No worries! I totally agree that bad loops can break immersion. And about AI, yeah it is very difficult to control the sequence so the animations were actually chosen out of 400 videos, but still some good results can be turned into good sequences by editing.
But as for first chapter scene, I will not revise it since I suppose that Alan is not the MC when it comes to sex haha
And thank you for the reminder, I will ask them to upload the new free version but actually the Last Update section has the rule that the frequency is at least over 2 weeks.
 
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