Saerwen
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the bit that i thought made it pretty thin was the length of the relationship , after all they are only together 3 months i just don't see how she would agree to being shared before shes like you know what that's cool your not into sex but its not for me and they just go there separate ways
after all its not like they owe each other anything its only three months
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The story's progression is the quickest ever. As the girl is virgin, and she is convinced by one texto, just in one night. At this speed, it's related to fantasy. Maybe it should be NTR because of the premise, not NTS.
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You have no chemistry with your girlfriend. No sense of bonding. It's not NTS when it's someone you don't know, like, or care about whatsoever. It doesn't even feel like 3 months of dating, it feels like they just met, went on a couple dates, and here we are.
The pacing is bad. It also really doesn't set up any tension on her being a virgin. She doesn't seem like one really, and then it's just "well I thought about it, let's do it" and she doesn't restrain herself to just oral or something like that, just jumps into it.
It just feels like a joke.
Especially with Jasper getting jealous and not wanting to do it anymore, there's the potential of the premise really working. Build up, he has issues with sex for whatever reason and wants her to sleep around, she goes a little into it and turns out it turns her on a lot, but after seeing her suck someone's dick, Jasper is having second thoughts. He realizes he isn't okay with sharing.
But Chloe wants a physical relationship, so he has to step up and get over his sex-shy nature. If you like a humiliation angle, it could be he goes down on her, it's fine, but when she goes down on him, she sees his dick is much smaller than the guy she sucked off. Netorase was so much fun, very exciting and taboo, and to think it's over and this is all she's going to get... Or nix the humiliation angle and just put it more on the pandora's box style of really liking the taboo of that and wanting to keep going.
I think the hottest is cheating, do what she wants without Jasper consenting to it, but her pressing him into letting her do it more and him relenting because of his insecurities is fine too. Ideally, penetrative sex finally happens as more of things-went-too-far moment. Maybe Jasper was fine with her sucking dick experiencing some things, but he wasn't ready for her to lose her virginity that way, but alas couldn't get over his issues fast enough to fuck her himself.
There are various ways to make the elements of this come together.
But as-is, it's a 1-star slop that would need a complete rewrite because of what I explained at the start. No chemistry, no pacing.
The pacing is bad. It also really doesn't set up any tension on her being a virgin. She doesn't seem like one really, and then it's just "well I thought about it, let's do it" and she doesn't restrain herself to just oral or something like that, just jumps into it.
It just feels like a joke.
Especially with Jasper getting jealous and not wanting to do it anymore, there's the potential of the premise really working. Build up, he has issues with sex for whatever reason and wants her to sleep around, she goes a little into it and turns out it turns her on a lot, but after seeing her suck someone's dick, Jasper is having second thoughts. He realizes he isn't okay with sharing.
But Chloe wants a physical relationship, so he has to step up and get over his sex-shy nature. If you like a humiliation angle, it could be he goes down on her, it's fine, but when she goes down on him, she sees his dick is much smaller than the guy she sucked off. Netorase was so much fun, very exciting and taboo, and to think it's over and this is all she's going to get... Or nix the humiliation angle and just put it more on the pandora's box style of really liking the taboo of that and wanting to keep going.
I think the hottest is cheating, do what she wants without Jasper consenting to it, but her pressing him into letting her do it more and him relenting because of his insecurities is fine too. Ideally, penetrative sex finally happens as more of things-went-too-far moment. Maybe Jasper was fine with her sucking dick experiencing some things, but he wasn't ready for her to lose her virginity that way, but alas couldn't get over his issues fast enough to fuck her himself.
There are various ways to make the elements of this come together.
But as-is, it's a 1-star slop that would need a complete rewrite because of what I explained at the start. No chemistry, no pacing.
The thing is i had previous Godot games being flagged as suspicious. and never got a single trojan report in any of them!
.... but lets assume for a moment u right and its a false positive, dont u think u should fix that before making it public! dont know.... if u want your game to be well received u sure doing a horrible job at it! or it could be that wasnt your goal!?
your whole excuse stinks, cause u are already admitting what u know what the issue is and u also saying u know how to fix it! Yet u choose not to! and lets be real i never had a Godot game downloaded and my system simply ERASED it instantly! not suspicious, not a choice for me to ignore it simply didnt even allow to be on my disk! cause it as a Trojan in it!
I think you're mixing up several types of relationships. I was part of a community called Convento das Safadas, which ended because some jerk started leaking content. Within this community, there were several categories, and each group had its own swinging rules. It was very difficult to get into swinging with legal marriage, boyfriends, and bisexuals, but it was a couples' swapping community. The husband or wife couldn't be celibate under any circumstances, since if for some reason one of the parties refused to have sex, no one would do it. The fetishes included in cuckolding are not part of swinging. There's respect between participants, and another very important rule. Breaking these rules would lead to the couple's banishment.
Even swing clubs have well-defined rules and etiquette, there are nights or sectors that allow singles or couples that allow partial exchange, but this is the exception.
The Hotwife category focuses more on the wife seducing other men, not on humiliating the husband. Always with the husband present, and penetration only with the husband's permission or with a threesome. Otherwise, caresses, kisses, oral sex, or other forms of physical contact are allowed, but always avoiding penetration.
An open relationship is open to each partner with their own clearly defined rules and limits.
Sharing was looking for a long-term relationship, a real relationship, not a bull.
Cuckolding involves humiliation, quick sexual relationships, usually without romantic feelings, bullshit, celibate relationships, and others. Exhibitionism is self-explanatory. There was a couple who even had a kind of bleacher next to the bed; you could sign up to watch live or online.
And Hotwife, cuckolding and others classify themselves as swingers because they are socially more accepted, but swingers do not consider Hotwife, cuckolding as the same type of fetish, there is a big difference between the glaring ones, such as the wife of couple A having sex with B's husband and the wife of B having sex with A's husband and always with a lot of respect without a cuckold fetish without comparison.
And for me it is not understandable because the swinging tag adds the netorase tag the only thing in common that is allowed for the partner to have sex, which would be less than 10%, the other 90% is identical to netorare. The ideal would be to create the netorase tag, but it would still be more logical to integrate netorase into netorare since 90% of the content is identical.
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Are you sure?...
Because it seems like you're trying to convince yourself...
Again, I'm not expressing my opinion, just going off what actual swingers have told me...
There was a local group that approached us, my wife (now ex) and I.
It was made very clear that one or both of us could participate at whatever level we as a couple felt comfortable...
And as far as the 'ex' part goes, let's just say I didn't agree with her having sex with other dudes...
For the record, 20+ years ago, I presumed swinging was a couple swap only thing.
I was first hand told differently, and other swinger types seem to agree...
You're free to disagree, set your own rules, have your own opinions, but you'll have to bring your disagreement up at the next international swingers convention or something to make sure you're all on the same page about what is and is not considered a "swinging" relationship...
"Swinging is a term used to describe a non-monogamous sexual lifestyle. There are different types of swinging relationships, including:
- Soft swap: involves sexual activities up to and including oral sex.
- Full swap or hard swap: involves most sexual activities, including intercourse — vaginal or anal, depending on preferences.
- Same-room sex: couples engage in sexual activities in the same room.
- Cuckolding: a man enjoys his "hot wife" having sex with other men.
- Stag and vixen: a man enjoys his vixen’s extramarital affairs from a cockier, more dominant perspective.
- Unicorn hunting: couples seeking bisexual women.
- Dragon slaying: couples seeking bisexual men."
Swinging is traditionally defined as couples swapping partners with other couples or consistently bringing other singles ('thirds') to bed. Often, swingers seek what they call soft swaps and full swaps. Soft swaps are when you switch partners for sex acts except vaginal and anal penetration. Full swaps are when you go "all the way." Old school swingers would stress that partners are involved in the sex together, but there are many dynamics that include sending your significant other off to fuck other people and hearing about it when they come home.
Swinging has its own colorful jargon. "Bulls" are single men who join couples. Couples seeking bisexual women or men are "unicorn hunters" or "dragon slayers," respectively. Cuckolds like to feel humiliated by their "hot wife" having sex with other men, and stags enjoy their vixens’ extramarital affairs from a cockier, more dominant perspective. Women who enjoy people desiring their men are called "cuckqueens". And having sex in the same room as another couple is called — wait for it — "same room sex".
And like I said about this particular VN game...
If the dude ain't interested in having sex with his own girlfriend, not my type of swinging story...
When you say "Swinging is traditionally," you've already answered both the fetish and what swinging is. The community focused on partner swapping, so much so that there was a hierarchy of couples. Couples with a proven civil or religious marriage had access to all swinging profiles. Houses with non-civil or religious relationships only had access to the same level of relationship. The couples weren't necessarily heterosexual, although I didn't see any. Swinging profiles included non-penetration, same or separate rooms, bisexual, and variants.
Swingers were not prohibited from registering in other "Cuckold" groups and looking for registered single male Bulls, but the couple should register in this group, which already shows that a separation like this with no couple was obliged to register in the Swinging category.
Just as a couple in an open relationship can be Swingers, Cuckolds, Cuckqueens or a couple who doesn't mind their partner having another relationship
What's not possible is to talk about the exchange. Celibate swinging is a Cuckold or Netorase relationship, but not a swinging game.
Just like me, I'm celibate, but I don't practice it.
I get upset when I search for a swinging-themed game and only find Netorase, which is much closer to netorare.
The International Swingers Convention is no longer being held since the coronavirus incident, and its website was taken down:
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Saerwen
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Thank you for explaining. Rarely Devs know this stuff before they make porn games with kinks.
It's a false positive. I saw the same windows defender alert pop up for someone else in another godot game just today. I scanned both this game and the other with bitdefender and it found nothing.
After replaying and re reading properly to me it feels like Chloe is toxic as fuck
Bangs Jake then asks the MC if she can do it again then MC is like na I'm not feeling this I didn't like it and it made me feel jealous
Then she's like I wouldn't do anything to hurt you and says she's sorry the MC felt jealous then immediately asks to do it again for the second time
Then the MC buckles and let's her so then she bangs lily and after that the MC is essentially like fuck this I want to bang her now and then tells Chloe this and she sends some happy reply and then is immediately like I'm not coming home I'm going to stay with lily as I don't want to hurt her feelings (essentially telling the MC that his feelings can go and fuck)
Like I don't even think I would say this is a relationship on Chloe's end anymore , she genuinely cares more about anyone that she fucks more than the MC
Like If it continues like this and the relationship survives I genuinely see Chloe disappearing for weeks at a time and eventually coming back to the MC being like ooooo hey it's you my "boyfriend" ( that she doesn't see and probably knows absolutely nothing about)
Bangs Jake then asks the MC if she can do it again then MC is like na I'm not feeling this I didn't like it and it made me feel jealous
Then she's like I wouldn't do anything to hurt you and says she's sorry the MC felt jealous then immediately asks to do it again for the second time
Then the MC buckles and let's her so then she bangs lily and after that the MC is essentially like fuck this I want to bang her now and then tells Chloe this and she sends some happy reply and then is immediately like I'm not coming home I'm going to stay with lily as I don't want to hurt her feelings (essentially telling the MC that his feelings can go and fuck)
Like I don't even think I would say this is a relationship on Chloe's end anymore , she genuinely cares more about anyone that she fucks more than the MC
Like If it continues like this and the relationship survives I genuinely see Chloe disappearing for weeks at a time and eventually coming back to the MC being like ooooo hey it's you my "boyfriend" ( that she doesn't see and probably knows absolutely nothing about)
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It sounds like your dentures were falling mid sentence, which is weird because this is a written response
Were you trying to tell me that you found a trojan? Did you detect it with anything other than windows defender?
its posted in this tread already not gonna waste more time warning those who dont wanna listen!It sounds like your dentures were falling mid sentence, which is weird because this is a written response
Were you trying to tell me that you found a trojan? Did you detect it with anything other than windows defender?
You're the one who doesn't wanna listen.
Godot is known for setting off false positives in windows defender. This isn't the first Godot game that's suffered from that and it won't be the last. And I scanned everything with malwarebytes and bitdefender. It came out clean. What more do you want?
i have literally dozens of godot games! yes some accuse something. but none of them ever came back with a trojan report. like i said wish u GL.