VN Ren'Py Nudist College [v0.20] [Elsa]

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Which scene do you like in the game?

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xXx GAMELOVER

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EyeWish1 said:
Okay, after three weeks I finally completed my English re-write of this game. It was a massive undertaking , considering how far into development the game is, but I felt the game deserved some TLC. Elsa94 created a very cool game, with a good story, and a number of appealing characters.

Ver 0.19
Google Drive

What I did:

1- Corrected the English translation. It was the only thing, IMO, that was really dragging down the game.
2- Fixed name mismatches. There were many instances where the dialogue on screen did not match the correct person.
3- Enhanced the dialogue during the heart warming scenes.
4- Added more humorous lines to the crazy characters. Especially Allana and Glory. Also the study group and test scenes.
5- Stayed true to the original story and the characters. I have been in conversation with Elsa, and this was a concern of hers/his(?). If anyone feels I strayed too far, please let me know.
6- Removed a lot of redundant lines and replaced them with more relevant dialogue. I felt the reader didn't need to be constantly reminded that it was a government sponsored program.

What I didn't do:

1- Fix some coding issues.
2- Deviate from the story. I believe it is true to Elsa94's vision.
3- Fix every single line. I would say that I covered about 95% of the story. There was an awful lot, and I may have missed some dialogue here and there.

I do not know if old saves can be migrated into this version. I would suggest starting from the beginning anyway, to receive the full impact of these changes.

I hope you like it.
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Karlon

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I live to see the main story line. More, more. Trivial story.. hmm.. No. Beautiful concept and game.
 
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classkidz

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fahdiz02 said:
Hello game maker I like your game I follow from Itch.io and I like all girls in your games especially Olivia. Are you have any planning to add Malaysian uniform because I wantto see Olivia in school uniform! I read you teaching a new game maker on Patreon, I support Malaysian game maker like you and I want to make games also if You want to teach! Please add more hijabi girls in game like in our country and also Indon hijabi!
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Malaysian developer really?? Serious sh*t really?? wow...i just..wow~ then plz put smone with Baju Kurung school uniform. damn sure sexy like hell..whatever it is, proud der. all the best!
 
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MECKATZER

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EyeWish1 said:
Okay, after three weeks I finally completed my English re-write of this game. It was a massive undertaking , considering how far into development the game is, but I felt the game deserved some TLC. Elsa94 created a very cool game, with a good story, and a number of appealing characters.

Ver 0.19
Google Drive

What I did:

1- Corrected the English translation. It was the only thing, IMO, that was really dragging down the game.
2- Fixed name mismatches. There were many instances where the dialogue on screen did not match the correct person.
3- Enhanced the dialogue during the heart warming scenes.
4- Added more humorous lines to the crazy characters. Especially Allana and Glory. Also the study group and test scenes.
5- Stayed true to the original story and the characters. I have been in conversation with Elsa, and this was a concern of hers/his(?). If anyone feels I strayed too far, please let me know.
6- Removed a lot of redundant lines and replaced them with more relevant dialogue. I felt the reader didn't need to be constantly reminded that it was a government sponsored program.

What I didn't do:

1- Fix some coding issues.
2- Deviate from the story. I believe it is true to Elsa94's vision.
3- Fix every single line. I would say that I covered about 95% of the story. There was an awful lot, and I may have missed some dialogue here and there.

I do not know if old saves can be migrated into this version. I would suggest starting from the beginning anyway, to receive the full impact of these changes.

I hope you like it.
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I wanted to try your version but the link is expired, can you make a new one or attach it here? Thx
 
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jI11jaCksjAkk

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Karlon said:
I live to see the main story line. More, more. Trivial story.. hmm.. No. Beautiful concept and game.
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It's kind of a bummer that the OP listing:
..........Thread Updated: 2025-05-31
does not refer to the game this thread is actually about. Even more of a bummer that 80% of the side story is just repurposed story & renders from the early part of the main game. :confused:

How long has it been now since the actual game was updated? 0.19 arrived here in January, meaning it was released weeks/months before that. Is the next update out there for subscribers yet?
 
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madelein-00

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SoftNormals said:
Damn, what happened to Olivia's tits? It's like they keep shrinking. In her newest scenes they look like 2 cup sizes smaller. She lost that busty goofball look and is a more generic body now :S
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Exactly! that is what i been saying. i dont know why the change if she was perfect but it is what it is i guess. i would like an option to have her older tits back xD
 
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