Hey,
Elsa94, I noticed you still have something that previously had been pointed out: at the end of v0.8 where Diana asks the girls various questions, you still have renders where the tape over girls' nipples disappear and then reappear (e.g., have Bailey miss the Hooke's Law question; have Glory miss the question about DNA; have Lyra miss the question about
π; etc.). If that is supposed to be the MC imagining it, that isn't clear. If not, you might want to correct that because it's a little confusing to see it happen.
Also, at the bar, you have this:
It looks like you already gave the "Teacher" over the main class a first name (Rose), so I'm not sure why you don't use it since you
do say "Madam Diana". (I would at least say "Madam Diana and your teacher" in the above line, although I think "Madams Diana and Rose" works well.)