VN Ren'Py Nudist College [v0.20] [Elsa]

[DaFinker]

Does this developer not have proofreaders? The grammar and spelling at the start of this game is just terrible.

The good news is, there is no good news - it only gets worse... At least you're getting in after all of the retroactive changes and Steam conversion.

 

[SOABUK80]

Am i the only one who doesn't care about Olivia? they made a stand alone vn of her that is partially in the Nudist College (please stop changing the name of the game) game and while i don't hate her or anything, there are better characters...i just don't get what the big deal is with her.

 

[damnedfrog]

Am i the only one who doesn't care about Olivia? they made a stand alone vn of her that is partially in the Nudist College (please stop changing the name of the game) game and while i don't hate her or anything, there are better characters...i just don't get what the big deal is with her.

Can't speak for others, but she is totally my type.
I love her body and i love her personality.

About the game name changing, it was because of Steam that don't like adult game in school.
Same thing for replacing schoolgirls' uniforms with casual clothing.

 

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Wish the fixes finally happen for S2...good on the dev to finally getting it on steam.

 

[F22232425]

Elsa is Russian, as I recall. A number of people in the Discord and here (including me) have offered to proofread for the game for free but she never responds, so I guess she just doesn't care to.

I thought she was Malaysian — more specifically Chinese Malaysian?

 

[wizardcs]

Hey, Gaunt,

I hope this finds you well.

According to several English linguists (way too many to reference here, but I cite J.T.Baker as one), in "Correct English" the expression “Grammatical Error” is paradoxical, for the reason that a form cannot be Grammatical and Erroneous at the same time.
You see: a Grammatical Form implies that it already is in accordance with the [productive or not] rules of the grammar of a language; hence a form such as “error in construction” or “error in English” should be used instead.

I hope this elucidates the issue a bit.

cheers, mate!

i think this might be the biggest um actually i have ever seen.

 

[drax78]

Back in Oct 2023 said they were going to fix the proofreading in next update. Guess that never happened. Like why is Women plural with an S. Womens.

 

[DaFinker]

Back in Oct 2023 said they were going to fix the proofreading in next update. Guess that never happened. Like why is Women plural with an S. Womens.

The Dev has been offered help with the English countless times and it's only gotten worse in the more recent updates. With the many revisions and focus on Steam, I just don't think the Dev cares very much about the dialogue being good, or even one girl being consistently named, right now.

 

[Elsa94]

Hope you guys can be patient with me as I am just a one person developer. I also need to time to learn better things to make the game better.

As for the loyal fans that keeps loving my game and encourages me, thank you so much as I really need to hear that.

 

[ChadFast]

Hope you guys can be patient with me as I am just a one person developer. I also need to time to learn better things to make the game better.

As for the loyal fans that keeps loving my game and encourages me, thank you so much as I really need to hear that.

It's a fun game. I've enjoyed what I've played of it. I think I'm a couple of episodes behind, so I'll need to catch up, but it's been enjoyable and I hope you continue to improve.

 

[wizardcs]

Hope you guys can be patient with me as I am just a one person developer. I also need to time to learn better things to make the game better.

As for the loyal fans that keeps loving my game and encourages me, thank you so much as I really need to hear that.

Get some Native English speakers to proofread your work and it will make your game so much better and accessible. I did not get very far in the game before I stopped playing because of all the grammar mistakes. Since i understand English is not your first language that's completely understandable. But even most native speaking Devs have people proofread before updates go out. I found the concept behind your game fun so I would happily return if the grammar was fixed. Its just a pet peeve of mine that I personally can't stand.

 

[johnpouljones]

Get some Native English speakers to proofread your work and it will make your game so much better and accessible. I did not get very far in the game before I stopped playing because of all the grammar mistakes. Since i understand English is not your first language that's completely understandable. But even most native speaking Devs have people proofread before updates go out. I found the concept behind your game fun so I would happily return if the grammar was fixed. Its just a pet peeve of mine that I personally can't stand.

Does it bother you that much in a porn game? It's like saying I stopped reading a novel because the illustrations annoyed me.

 

[jI11jaCksjAkk]

Does it bother you that much in a porn game? It's like saying I stopped reading a novel because the illustrations annoyed me.

Is horrible grammar a minor annoyance? Sure. Does it matter? Of course not. Language is about communication, so if you understand what the characters are saying that is all that really matters.

The same people that have a stick up their ass about irrelevant details in AVNs probably also can't get hard watching porn with a beautiful young girl whose body is incredible because OMG!! she is from Eastern Europe and her English is terrible.

 

[johnpouljones]

Is horrible grammar a minor annoyance? Sure. Does it matter? Of course not. Language is about communication, so if you understand what the characters are saying that is all that really matters.

The same people that have a stick up their ass about irrelevant details in AVNs probably also can't get hard watching porn with a beautiful young girl whose body is incredible because OMG!! she is from Eastern Europe and her English is terrible.

Imagine that someone invented a game taking place in London. And he wrote it using cockney slang. Then even Americans, Australians and other nations that have English as their national language would have a lot of trouble understanding it.
I played a game where the text was written in some American slang, probably from somewhere in the south. It was impossible to read it.

 

[wizardcs]

Does it bother you that much in a porn game? It's like saying I stopped reading a novel because the illustrations annoyed me.

that is not at all an apt comparison. reading the words is quite literally what you are doing 99% of the time. Unless you are reading children's books that are completely illustrated being annoyed about the occasional drawing would be stupid.

I also already admitted it is a pet peeve of mine so clearly this would not bother everybody. These games are lewd in nature but at end of the day AVNs have the word novel in its title for a reason. They are meant to be more than just "porn games". Its an actual written story. Calling it just " a porn game" feels like a massive disservice to these devs and far more insulting than what i suggested.

 

[wizardcs]

The same people that have a stick up their ass about irrelevant details in AVNs probably also can't get hard watching porn with a beautiful young girl whose body is incredible because OMG!! she is from Eastern Europe and her English is terrible.

can't say I have ever had such a problem. I wont deny I like to understand what's being said though so subtitles are great! I could still enjoy it for the visual aspect of it without them though. Also side note, hearing somebody especially in a porn video speaking broken English is one thing, trying to read it is a whole different story. I just find it extremely distracting. Besides the porn element I like to enjoy AVNs as actual stories so I really apricate the writing having a degree of quality.

 

[Elsa94]

I do have an american developer proofreader. He do it for me in his free time.

 

[DaFinker]

Is horrible grammar a minor annoyance? Sure. Does it matter? Of course not. Language is about communication, so if you understand what the characters are saying that is all that really matters.

The same people that have a stick up their ass about irrelevant details in AVNs probably also can't get hard watching porn with a beautiful young girl whose body is incredible because OMG!! she is from Eastern Europe and her English is terrible.

 

[kansasdude]

kind of a dumb question cause of her shirt......a better one could be.. I noticed your shirt, what games do you like to play? or I play games to, what games do you play?