Which scene do you like in the game?


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ImperialD

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great game .. only problem i have with it .... it ends to early ..... patiently awaiting your next update (y)(y)(y)(y)(y)
 

aexiel

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Hey, Gaunt,

I hope this finds you well.

According to several English linguists (way too many to reference here, but I cite J.T.Baker as one), in "Correct English" the expression “Grammatical Error” is paradoxical, for the reason that a form cannot be Grammatical and Erroneous at the same time.
You see: a Grammatical Form implies that it already is in accordance with the [productive or not] rules of the grammar of a language; hence a form such as “error in construction” or “error in English” should be used instead.

I hope this elucidates the issue a bit.

cheers, mate!
Kinda late but I'm still gonna give shit about this one. Grammatical has two uses in a sentence: The linguist use (a sentence in correct form in accordance to the rules of grammar); and the layman use (root word + the suffix) to denote association. So no, it is not a paradox unless you also change a grammatical rule where adding the suffix -tical (of or pertaining to) no longer means the same thing. To say that "grammatical error" is a paradox, would be a fallacy since since the literal meaning of "grammatical error" would be "an error pertaining to grammar".
 

Havik79

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Thx for the feedback! I like it. I'll try to fix it tomorrow. Sorry about all this =(
It is fine by me, just skipped to the sex scenes saved again, and skipped till I got to the new stuff.

Was an enjoyable update, I like the new blonde girl, but um NAZIa, not sure about the name.

Although the replay did make me notice something, "narrator, you cum".
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"Lena moans with delight as you unleash a torrent of your hot cum into the deepest part of her womb".

Sorry not trying to be an ass, but I would think a female would have a better understanding of what it feels like having a guy inside or even creampie her and would be able to make up something like I said, rather than, you cum.

Still, a good update, don't think I have seen female blackmail the MC, although given how embarrassed she was, wouldn't it then work for us to blackmail her, or at least stop her from doing it to us.
 
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Sngo

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Well my interest in this game just decreased after this update and I was liking the game until now...
Damn it seems I'm really unlucky with my fav girls in games.
Let's wait for next update to see if it will be the last nail in the coffin or will salvage it for me.

Well anyway GL with the game.
 
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Updated to v0.3
I'd suggest also changing the mod so instead of renpy.random.randint() it uses random.randint() during spin-the-bottle, which will allow people to get a different result by just rolling back or quick save/load; otherwise, you seem to need to go back a number of lines to get a different outcome, which is fine for non-modded but probably worth making easier for modded. (To be honest, I don't really understand why it's ever different after quick-load when using renpy.random, since that's supposed to always give the same result, I thought.)

Note you'll have to add an 'import random' in a python block.
 

SeeEmilyPlay

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I like this game, it's pretty sexy and the setup is a bit different in a good way. And bush :love:

Did not like this update too much unfortunately, there are already quite a lot of characters and introducing even more is just taking time away from the original girls. Adding a dumb guy wasn't fun either.

Hope we get back to school in chapter 4 with a new project.
 
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lordfridge9

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Well my interest in this game just decreased after this update and I was liking the game until now...
Damn it seems I'm really unlucky with my fav girls in games.
Let's wait for next update to see if it will be the last nail in the coffin or will salvage it for me.

Well anyway GL with the game.
But why
 

YogSothoth1982

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I think I have a bug: After the scene with Allana at the nude camp, I proceed to say no to Olivia:

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Then the MC, instead of leaving, crosses paths with Clarissa and, after asking her if he can stay a moment, thinks the following:

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Which makes me think that this scene should only happen if the MC says yes to Olivia.

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I voted for the same

Really? In 0.2 or just in 0.3 now?
Haven't played 0.3 yet, but I'm going to start from the beginning later anyway, might try that out then, thx.
At the nudist beach, when the "experiment" starts and the MC gets a boner, if you turn down Olivia and the teacher, then Allana can take care the MC's boner and the MC and Allana have sex.
 
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That's a red flag for me when a harem game forces me to choose between scenes.
The mod lets you see all three (and you can easily rollback or quicksave without the mod). As to predicting the quality of the game from that particular element of the first chapter, it was, IIRC, the author's first sex scene, and maybe the first real choice in the game as well, so maybe give them the benefit of the doubt and give them a chance to improve. AFAICT it doesn't affect future scenes at all (which means you're not locking yourself out of anything based on those choices).
 
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YogSothoth1982

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Ok, this has not happened in my game:

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So I guess the problem is that for some reason, whatever you choose, it's like you've chosen the option that the MC has sex with Olivia (I have tried the game with and without the mod and I have the same result both times).
 

LucT

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First of all, I like the game, but as some have already pointed out, it could improve with some fixes. - Allana says it's the first time she's seen a penis live, so she's a virgin, just change the sentence to it's the first time I've seen one this big. -Same goes for Olivia, even if she doesn't quite fit her way of being, she might say I've never done it with a real one, which is always better than seeing her lose her virginity as if nothing had happened. -If you choose not to get help from Olivia, she still says in class the next day that she had sex, it should be corrected.
 

YogSothoth1982

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First of all, I like the game, but as some have already pointed out, it could improve with some fixes. - Allana says it's the first time she's seen a penis live, so she's a virgin, just change the sentence to it's the first time I've seen one this big.
I don't find any problem with allana being a virgin before solving the MC problem.

-Same goes for Olivia, even if she doesn't quite fit her way of being, she might say I've never done it with a real one, which is always better than seeing her lose her virginity as if nothing had happened.
In this case, it's not that I care too much what she says. My option is that the MC doesn't have sex with her.

-If you choose not to get help from Olivia, she still says in class the next day that she had sex, it should be corrected.
She has a whole internal argument about something that shouldn't have happened (and in fact I haven't seen) based on my choices.
 
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