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FYI, Elsa94, it's not a huge thing, but you have a character whose name is Nazia (i.e., her name shown when she speaks) but who is called multiple times "Narzia" by other characters (such as by Nori). You might want to check for consistency with the character's name throughout your scripts.
Also, during the conversation with Lena at the pool, the MC says a sentence that begins with, "Could it be that she is still sad..." but the character name shows "Thinking". Since Lena responds as if the MC asked the question out loud, I assume you've just got a mistake in the character chosen to speak here.
Also, during the conversation with Lena at the pool, the MC says a sentence that begins with, "Could it be that she is still sad..." but the character name shows "Thinking". Since Lena responds as if the MC asked the question out loud, I assume you've just got a mistake in the character chosen to speak here.