I think it was fun to go through for a first attempt at something. Some of the story elements were okay. But at the end of the day as harsh as it is to say, there is nothing new going on here making me go 'oh okay, let's see what is going to happen'. As people had mentioned there are a few things going on that have me hit the breaks a bit.
1) Pacing
As stated, pacing is insane. Teacher comes in, waves magic penis and everyone goes bonkers and EVERYONE jumps on him in about 2.3 heartbeats. A little fast
2) MC Dumb Like A Bag Of Shrimp
I mean I am looking at a pic of Rebecca with a black strip over her eyes and I am going, oh that's Rebecca. You telling me that the MC who knows her better than I do can't see that that is her with a black strip. Mom comes out of hours of teacher meeting with cum on her chest and the MC goes, "Yay I have mom back I get fed". Like wtfbbq? No one on earth is that stupid and I deal with a lot of dumb.
3) Everyone Wants Magic Penis
Uhm..., no. I know it is an NTR thing but are you telling me no one has a) morals, b) self control, c) complete disinterest, d) self respect. Either or all of those kind of come into play. Sure there are nymphos, but you can't tell me what not a single person in that classroom alone, much less parents and/or adults, don't kick him right in the Mommy & Daddy Button if not just tell him to go fuck himself. The only person that told him realistically to go screw himself was the MC's sister, and the gallery made me scratch my head wondering what I missed and if she too caved to the magic penis.
4) How Is Teacher Not Arrested/Fired
In most places, exposing yourself to students will get you canned faster than you can say NTR. Again, you can't tell me that #3 above is an absolute. One of them will go home after saying 'sure he has a big dick but he is gross as shit' and say 'the teacher pulled his dick out in the classroom' and the parent would have the power that be on speed dial. So not completely realistic in that suspension of disbelief kind of goes out the window. Now add in him sleeping with most of the student population, he would never work in education again.
The whole NTR thing unfortunately follows the same setup all the time. MC is a wimp, has a small dick, insert other aspects, etc. Here comes Giant Penis Mcgoo and it becomes the most important thing in the universe where a dong ALWAYS trumps personal/emotional connection, history, and even love two people have for eachother. As I said this literally shows no difference in that path. My attention was caught with the whole Emma sticking with the MC regardless. I was looking at it going, "Hmmm this could be different for once because the shit head might actually whiff on one at bat". But nope, she is falling under #3 which with everyone else and again makes no sense, because penis trumps emotional and personal connection. No it doesn't. Again I understand it's the genre, but something original would be neat for once. The minute Emma throws away her relationship because penis is the most important thing in the universe, time to hang it up and wont deal with the creator's works. I could be wrong, and I am intrigued to see if I am wrong, and it would be neat to see that the MC wins one, that there is an eventual cost for the teacher doing what he is doing. But I don't think that that would happen.
1) Pacing
As stated, pacing is insane. Teacher comes in, waves magic penis and everyone goes bonkers and EVERYONE jumps on him in about 2.3 heartbeats. A little fast
2) MC Dumb Like A Bag Of Shrimp
I mean I am looking at a pic of Rebecca with a black strip over her eyes and I am going, oh that's Rebecca. You telling me that the MC who knows her better than I do can't see that that is her with a black strip. Mom comes out of hours of teacher meeting with cum on her chest and the MC goes, "Yay I have mom back I get fed". Like wtfbbq? No one on earth is that stupid and I deal with a lot of dumb.
3) Everyone Wants Magic Penis
Uhm..., no. I know it is an NTR thing but are you telling me no one has a) morals, b) self control, c) complete disinterest, d) self respect. Either or all of those kind of come into play. Sure there are nymphos, but you can't tell me what not a single person in that classroom alone, much less parents and/or adults, don't kick him right in the Mommy & Daddy Button if not just tell him to go fuck himself. The only person that told him realistically to go screw himself was the MC's sister, and the gallery made me scratch my head wondering what I missed and if she too caved to the magic penis.
4) How Is Teacher Not Arrested/Fired
In most places, exposing yourself to students will get you canned faster than you can say NTR. Again, you can't tell me that #3 above is an absolute. One of them will go home after saying 'sure he has a big dick but he is gross as shit' and say 'the teacher pulled his dick out in the classroom' and the parent would have the power that be on speed dial. So not completely realistic in that suspension of disbelief kind of goes out the window. Now add in him sleeping with most of the student population, he would never work in education again.
The whole NTR thing unfortunately follows the same setup all the time. MC is a wimp, has a small dick, insert other aspects, etc. Here comes Giant Penis Mcgoo and it becomes the most important thing in the universe where a dong ALWAYS trumps personal/emotional connection, history, and even love two people have for eachother. As I said this literally shows no difference in that path. My attention was caught with the whole Emma sticking with the MC regardless. I was looking at it going, "Hmmm this could be different for once because the shit head might actually whiff on one at bat". But nope, she is falling under #3 which with everyone else and again makes no sense, because penis trumps emotional and personal connection. No it doesn't. Again I understand it's the genre, but something original would be neat for once. The minute Emma throws away her relationship because penis is the most important thing in the universe, time to hang it up and wont deal with the creator's works. I could be wrong, and I am intrigued to see if I am wrong, and it would be neat to see that the MC wins one, that there is an eventual cost for the teacher doing what he is doing. But I don't think that that would happen.
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I'm not trying to be rude, but it sounds like you're just not a fan of the genre. There's nothing wrong with that, but really everything you're complaining about is the kinda stuff that a lot of people are here specifically for. Imagine if someone was complaining about a first person shooter, because they didn't like that guns are the way to solve all the problems.
1 is up for debate, some people like faster pacing rather then a slow-burn. It can even depend on mood. I don't wanna deal with 20 hours of set-up in every game i play, but sometimes that's enjoyable.
2 is what's called a narrative conceit. The player needs to be able to know who the people are, because otherwise it's not as enjoyable. So a black bar or a simple censor block is meant to convey to the player/audience "This is not meant to be an image that in-universe characters would be able to recognize".
Consider that, in fantasy settings, people need to speak english for the players to be able to understand anything going on, but the characters themselves could not be said to be literally speaking a west-germanic language originating from Ignvaeonic languages brought by anglo-saxons from germany. We understand that they are speaking an in-universe language, but we are perceiving it as english because otherwise the story could not happen in a way we would understand
Likewise, black-bar tells the audience who the character is, and also conveys "the person who is looking at the picture, does not know who it is the way we do"
3 is 100% just a genre thing that you are not here for, if you don't like the genre. I like it when the girl immediately loses all sense of rationality, because the dick is that good. It's hot to me. It's hot to a lot of people. It's what a lot of people are here for, when they click on a game that has the N, the T, and the R are capitalized in the title.
4 is a bad faith argument. Do you also get upset when people in horror movies go off exploring on their own? He's not arrested because that's how the story happens. It's a story set in a world where if the dick is good enough you can get away with anything. It's never a question of realism, your word of the day is "Verisimilitude". We don't care about whether the story follows the rules of reality, we care about if the story follows its own internal logic. If another character with a huge dick showed up, and was arrested for exposing himself, THEN the story would be internally inconsistent.
This is interesting for AI done, however i find that the story is too straight forward, just follow the objective and everything just happens. For the girls, they see giant wand, they want instead of being curious.
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Most of those scene happen without the MC's presence or knowledge. You can't see them outside of the gallery.
1) It's dev first game. Dev has already stated this is release 3/5 and will make a new game with slower pacing after.
2) Normal NTR porn logic. In fact it's a very common trope in Anime as well.
3) Porn logic. Bigger dick = Better sex partner.
4) Porn logic
if everything is true and the dev is going to realese a new game, i just hope i hope it will NTR as well, but taking into consideration the suggestions
I have problems with my mouse with this update, constant scrolling down. Outside of the game, I don´t have that problem
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I enjoyed playing this; the artwork looked great and there was nice variety to the characters. Dr Boki shows real writing potential; I felt frustration with the MC's inability to be on time or figure obvious things out. I genuinely felt sorry for Dana and her unrequited love for the MC. I decided I wouldn't mind if Dana saw the girlfriend slowly slip down the slut slope and decided to fight to win the MC's affection. I'm eager to get the next update.
Yeah, just go up to the ice cream vendor (you need to stand on the edge of the carpet) and "interact".
Hey man! I just wanted to say I *REALLY* liked your game, it was great! And I have never liked NTR before, but I think you might be converting me! xD I just really like the whole "perverted old teacher with massive cock perving on the young schoolgirls". (If someone has any tips on more games like this I'd love to hear them). 