VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Nutville Paradox [Ch. 6] [Top Tier Story]

This is a story in the vein Thetalkman in kinetic novel format. If you like his or similar themes then you will most likely enjoy this. If not then good luck. If you know his work you will most likely appreciate why the game is so wordy. As far as I can tell this is about the only game that attempts to make a story with such themes so for that reason alone I can forgive whatever inadequacies where adressed in other reviews.
Art starts very weak but improves drastically and developer seems commited to this project.

I think the other reviews are being too harsh on this game. Let's set some things straight.

• Yes, this game is too wordy, a lot of text for not a lot of images, I found myself skipping a lot of text, which made me less interested in the story, however, there's one aspect of this game that saves it from being bad and I think it's worth playing if you are into bimbos like me
• That aspect is the sex scenes. Imo the sexual scenes in this game are hot as fuck, I like the art style, and easily the best part is the AMAZING dirty talk during lewd scenes that are hotter than the visuals themselves. The dirty talk is hella slutty and depraved which matches the "bimbo" theme of this game very well, and honestly, this aspect alone made the game worth a download for me. I do wish there was sound during the scenes, however.
• The MC starts out annoying and cringe but you can tell he's developing and he's definitely going to be a chad by the end of the game

Overall, this game isn't anything too crazy, but if you like bimbos and dirty talk, absolutely download this game.

Game is very poor in content
The art is... unique but unfortunately all the girls look the same. At one point I couldn't tell which was which and I had to be reading their names to understand what is going on.
2*s because the dialog is quite extensive... but a bit way extensive to the point it feels like reading a book.
Overall.. this is a book , almost no art at all and no sex either.

So I love bimbos and unique art, so I decided to give this game a try.

SUMMARY: The VN is primarily a first person narrative about a boy relocating to a school and then investigating why three bimbo staff members are aggressively seducing students. As of version 3.0 (what is reviewed below), it's primarily a text-based story, with only a few (very exaggerated) art assets.

BLUF: Its got potential, but needs a LOT more polish (a whole rewrite, really) and a lot more art before it becomes a a game worthy of your time.

PROS:

• Decent in-game music!
• An obviously native-speaking English speaker is writing all the dialogue
• Original art
• A plot deeper than your typical porn plot...there's a mystery being uncovered, which drives the reader's interest
• There's a sexual tension being created--the story attempts to tease the viewer long before any sexual activities occur, creating anticipation

CONS:

• The writing quality is very poor. It's not poor in the sense of most of the non-native speakers you see here on F95 zone. I could list a thousand reasons why, but I think it's most apt to say that the writing quality is at a high-school grade level. Maybe even a junior-high level.
• Images are rare, and I yearn for more views of the action that's happening in the text below. Furthermore, the few pictures provided sometimes inaccurately display what is explicitly happening in the text. The artist changes facial features, to attempt to deliver what I can only assume are different expressions...but they are so minor and awkwardly implemented they fail to actually give a sense of what the expression is. In other words, I can't read the expressions.
• The plot and dialogue needs a lot of holes filled and tightening up--there's currently too many mental gymnastics required to go along with it and I can't suspend my disbelief. Normally, that's not so important to a fap game, but this is more of a text based VN, and it's titillation is primarily derived from the text, so it's less forgiving of plot holes and implausibility.

In short, this game starts with some good kernels (original art, good music, an interesting plot premise) but it needs more art and a complete rewrite in a fashion that would be interesting to adults (and not junior high kids).

Having said all the above, I'll certainly keep checking it out to see if more polish gets applied over time.