VN Ren'Py Nyatorase: Shared Passions [v0.02] [SadCat]

[star12341]

Just tried this - the wife's design is great (obviously). The writing while not stand out was good and so I am definitely interested to see where this goes. I love the Terasu comic you mentioned so if that's an inspiration very much looking forward to it.
I will say the hypnosis feels more like a corruption/NTR set up - hard to imagine a world where that leads to a functional relationship if real. I think part of what I enjoyed from Terasu's comic is the ambiguity/anxiety of not knowing how the GF is feeling (which I why I am ultimately glad it ended with an open ending). I think showing the love between the character's and fleshing that out - why are they married? Why is she staying in the marriage? Is really important in an NTS regardless of whether there are NTR elements or not. If the swinging/cucking dynamic is going to be functional, and if its going to believable, there has to be reason for her to stay faithful to MC. The audience has to be able to understand why they are in a relationship and why they want to preserve it. Otherwise, all the audience sees is her having a good time with other people and her making fun of MC and his little dick. So far we are told he is a great husband but the relationship is just kinda there - I wouldn't know why she chose to date him or why she would keep dating him over any other mildly polite guy - esp. if the other one is making her cum her brains out and filling her to the brim with cum.

Anyway, as others have voiced - I think focus is really important! I understand the incentives to please the audience but I also think everyone is cheering for a script that finishes and does something well and no one is hoping for a game that never ends and does 100 things mediocrely.

Thank you for the work and good luck with the project! Will definitely keep an eye on it!

 

[SadCatAI]

Just tried this - the wife's design is great (obviously). The writing while not stand out was good and so I am definitely interested to see where this goes. I love the Terasu comic you mentioned so if that's an inspiration very much looking forward to it.
I will say the hypnosis feels more like a corruption/NTR set up - hard to imagine a world where that leads to a functional relationship if real. I think part of what I enjoyed from Terasu's comic is the ambiguity/anxiety of not knowing how the GF is feeling (which I why I am ultimately glad it ended with an open ending). I think showing the love between the character's and fleshing that out - why are they married? Why is she staying in the marriage? Is really important in an NTS regardless of whether there are NTR elements or not. If the swinging/cucking dynamic is going to be functional, and if its going to believable, there has to be reason for her to stay faithful to MC. The audience has to be able to understand why they are in a relationship and why they want to preserve it. Otherwise, all the audience sees is her having a good time with other people and her making fun of MC and his little dick. So far we are told he is a great husband but the relationship is just kinda there - I wouldn't know why she chose to date him or why she would keep dating him over any other mildly polite guy - esp. if the other one is making her cum her brains out and filling her to the brim with cum.

Anyway, as others have voiced - I think focus is really important! I understand the incentives to please the audience but I also think everyone is cheering for a script that finishes and does something well and no one is hoping for a game that never ends and does 100 things mediocrely.

Thank you for the work and good luck with the project! Will definitely keep an eye on it!

I've heard a few things about the hypnosis scene/segment and I would like to reiterate, nothing will lead to NTR.
Hypno video is optional, and viewing the scene sets the flag for future related scenes/lines.
Someone brought up they didn't like how Kat was ignoring the MC during this scene, but it's hypnosis, which is kinda what happens. Though I understand why some people are worried. Kat will forever stay with the MC because she loves him, her will is not weak enough that some hypnosis play would just corrupt her away or something.

Spoiler: Hypnosis?

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As for why they married or will stay married? Well, they love each other. Ultimately this is a porn game, and some things don't need to be spelled out or overexplained.
The MC is a kind and loving husband, and they share many interests. Ultimately, Kat knows that sexual prowess doesn't mean as much. In the latest update you see this with her reaction to Lucie's boyfriend's harassment. But the truth is also that Kat is not going to just be easily swayed by another nice guy just because he has a bigger dick. Doesn't have to have a reason to love the MC. This isn't real life.
As for focus don't worry, ultimately I know I cannot please everyone. This is my game and it will play out how I want it to, so no need to worry about me losing focus.
I know that can be hard to believe since a lot of other indie h-games fall in that hole but I have learned from witnessing that first-hand

 

[luccel]

I wanted to rate this 2 / 5 but decided not to rate it for now. However, this is a 0.2 version? The length is a joke, and it's only the MC's fantasies with nothing happening. Also, it's blatantly dumb that his friend wears these tattoos, and afterward, the guy acts all surprised. The other friend is also so extreme that it comes across as downright silly if the MC acts like they are normal. Also he randomly decides to tell his friends: "Hi I'm a cuck, how do I tell my gf?".
The writing, and the story are both shit.

This is another example of a developer who puts money before his game. Usually people would not even release something with such a tiny amount of content..... This dev however uses AI art to throw out bait to capture losers wallets right from the start. FINDOM Fetish is spreading.

I can't understand how a game this terrible, a 5-minute VN with the most pathetic and weakest stereotypes you can come up with, justifies 650 bucks every month. I will never understand this.

 

[Kenichi111]

I thought the art was good then I learned that it was ai man so sad. This ain't my thing but more power on you dev.

 

[luccel]

I thought the art was good then I learned that it was ai man so sad. This ain't my thing but more power on you dev.

 

[Vix Luma]

A review so far:
+++Respectable dev
+Cat wife
++++Hypnosis
+++BBC QOS kink
+++++Kat ignoring MC during hypnosis video (I have a major hypno kink and this realism really did it for me)
+++Corruption undertones with unconditional love overtones(not done enough, and it's being handled really well so far)
++Loving Humiliation and femdom executed very well
+++Tasteful AI art
++Very few if any typos
+++Teasing!
+Can scroll to backtrack

Nitpicks:
-can't press spacebar to advance story (it's the one-handed mode for VNs)
--couldn't turn down the voice volume for the hypno section, possibly a bug

27pts!

The story really intrigued me, it really made me think about, "oh hey, will there be a hypno/corruption route?"
Very well written, very cozy aftercare, very hot wife. My only major gripe is that there isn't more!
I'm excited to see where this goes

 

[SadCatAI]

A review so far:
+++Respectable dev
+Cat wife
++++Hypnosis
+++BBC QOS kink
+++++Kat ignoring MC during hypnosis video (I have a major hypno kink and this realism really did it for me)
+++Corruption undertones with unconditional love overtones(not done enough, and it's being handled really well so far)
++Loving Humiliation and femdom executed very well
+++Tasteful AI art
++Very few if any typos
+++Teasing!
+Can scroll to backtrack

Nitpicks:
-can't press spacebar to advance story (it's the one-handed mode for VNs)
--couldn't turn down the voice volume for the hypno section, possibly a bug

27pts!

The story really intrigued me, it really made me think about, "oh hey, will there be a hypno/corruption route?"
Very well written, very cozy aftercare, very hot wife. My only major gripe is that there isn't more!
I'm excited to see where this goes

spacebar should still work, it works for me
The "voices" currently are sound effects so sound settings will do it
Please let me know any typos so I can fix them!

 

[Vlbc]

I don't get the tattoo thing.
Did people complain about it?
What did I miss? lol

 

[SadCatAI]

I don't get the tattoo thing.
Did people complain about it?
What did I miss? lol

Some people dont care for it so I made it optional
BTW I forgot to mention here but for those of you playing the game after having a save from v0.01, please start a new save for this update as otherwise the default of all the new choices added earlier is disabled/no

 

[Loximar]

You shouldn't be tailoring your artistic vision to vocal minorities. The vast majority of people who play your game will not speak up regardless of whether they like it or not. Attempting to cater to people who are vocal about what they do/don't like is going to cause you to create something that isn't in your ideal scenario. This only leads to a weaker presentation and disjointed scenes/logic.

 

[Snoopy_H]

Some free/low end antivirus do that with renpy games, look up how to whitelist files with your antivirus or find the deleted file

dude, weak insult but also not true; i have downloaded many renpy games, its just yours

 

[yw94]

I liked how it developed so quick and smooth and didn't waist 10 updates for that

 

[Thelone69]

Do you plan on making any content where the mc helps out wife in her adventure? Like helping her with a blowjob or cleaning her up etc. Or is it more like reporting type NTS? I personally prefer it if the mc joins the action more. Some bi element is fine too honestly

 

[kristo0086]

Do you plan on making any content where the mc helps out wife in her adventure? Like helping her with a blowjob or cleaning her up etc. Or is it more like reporting type NTS? I personally prefer it if the mc joins the action more. Some bi element is fine too honestly

Guys, read the description
Nyatorase is a NETORASE adult visual novel where you embark on your new sexual journey with your beautiful wife Katherine.
I don't think mc will suck dick. And it is unlikely that there will be only stories about his wife 's adventures . Although if I could suck off a femboy and then he would fuck Catherine .

 

[Thelone69]

There are thousand pages long argument on what exactly is 'netorase'. We don't need to do that here. Both with a helping mc and only reporting. I just personally prefer the first one and asking the dev if he wants to do it or not

 

[star12341]

I've heard a few things about the hypnosis scene/segment and I would like to reiterate, nothing will lead to NTR.
Hypno video is optional, and viewing the scene sets the flag for future related scenes/lines.
Someone brought up they didn't like how Kat was ignoring the MC during this scene, but it's hypnosis, which is kinda what happens. Though I understand why some people are worried. Kat will forever stay with the MC because she loves him, her will is not weak enough that some hypnosis play would just corrupt her away or something.

Spoiler: Hypnosis?

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That would be hot - like I mentioned - I think it's hot when you have to worry or doubt. That would be a fun way of resolving it - but we will see!

 

[KINGKUMAR]

Why mc look look like alien other planet creature but plot best

 

[kikomascado]

Guys, read the description
Nyatorase is a NETORASE adult visual novel where you embark on your new sexual journey with your beautiful wife Katherine.
I don't think mc will suck dick. And it is unlikely that there will be only stories about his wife 's adventures . Although if I could suck off a femboy and then he would fuck Catherine .

There's netorase where MC also panders the bull.
I particularly don't mind much, but I love cumkisses and wife cleanups, and that's kinda bi as well.

 

[SadCatAI]

You shouldn't be tailoring your artistic vision to vocal minorities. The vast majority of people who play your game will not speak up regardless of whether they like it or not. Attempting to cater to people who are vocal about what they do/don't like is going to cause you to create something that isn't in your ideal scenario. This only leads to a weaker presentation and disjointed scenes/logic.

Making some content like tattoos optional is very easy for me to do so it isn't a problem. I did also reduce her tattoos overall but this was an artistic decision.

Do you plan on making any content where the mc helps out wife in her adventure? Like helping her with a blowjob or cleaning her up etc. Or is it more like reporting type NTS? I personally prefer it if the mc joins the action more. Some bi element is fine too honestly

The furthest the game will go with bi content will probably be cum cleanup at most

 

[NTR Sommelier]

There's netorase where MC also panders the bull.
I particularly don't mind much, but I love cumkisses and wife cleanups, and that's kinda bi as well.

Not trying to start a whole debate about this but, I've always felt the cleanup aspect was more about erotic humiliation than being bi per se, (not that there is anything wrong with it, of course) I think many cucks who are into cleanup would never suck the bull for example.