Also sharing a gripe about cock sizes here: Alex is described as having a cock almost twice as long as Hugh's, which would be... monstrous, frankly. There's a pernicious trend in porn and smut for the dudes to be hung like mammoths, wielding truly mastodonic dongs, and while I get the appeal of the male leads being hung we're so far past the point that it's immersion breaking. IRL six inches is comfortably above average, if your dudes are slinging sausage that clears that by over 100% I think you're hitting the edge of suspension of disbelief.