I like this game, even though I normally don't like kinetic novels. The content is great, and the humiliation/corruption/submission is what I'm here for. So I'm willing to suspend my disbelief for the sake of getting the content delivered to me. But what I WILL NOT DO is believe that my man's being captain-save-a-hoe could somehow drop his cellphone on the ground and forget it, all while continuously getting pic updates from his kitten, and constantly watching livestream surveillance cameras of his domestic slut. And you are also telling me that he doesn't have a passcode lock on his phone? So someone just picked up his phone and then they immediately knew where his ex was headed? How? Why? Whaaaaat?? And how did they even know where to find ol'girl? She wasn't at home, and nobody knows where mc lives.
Maybe I'm tripping, but I hate when plot turns have negative outcomes for protagonists because of something so stupid and avoidable as not leaving your phone somewhere, or forgetting the plane tickets on the counter. When it's done well it works (something like emotionally storming out of the house and forgetting their wallet because they are arguing with their spouse) but this just seemed random, like there was no other way to have the bad guys on their heels.
Maybe the employee that saw her dash out of the club can be like "she was in here talking to mc - they are old friends." And they find us that way? It just seems too easy to drop your phone without either of them noticing it lying there.