So, I haven't even finished watching the intro yet but first impressions are very positive.
The setup, writing, tiles, music, etc., all do a great job of setting the atmosphere - fairly rare for the intro of an RPG maker game to impress me.
My only criticism so far is that it definitely needs a proofreader. There are a few misspelled or out of place words. (For example: 'existance' should be spelled existence, 'seperate' should be spelled separate, offguard should be off guard, in the context it's used apart should be 'a part', etc., etc.)
That said, it's not Engrish or anything - the meaning is (so far, at least) always perfectly clear. Looking forward to seeing where this one goes!