K9
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- May 28, 2017
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Love it, love the art. Once the drone/money grind problem is fixed (and it does need to be fixed, because right now it makes the game horribly boring after a while), it's gonna be great.
Found a few typos. You wrote 'understanded' in one line, it should be 'understood', and one time Tinkerbell says 'he' while speaking of a female character (didn't note when, sorry, I think it's either with Alfa when 'calibrating' her or after Snow White reacts to Cupid Apples).
Character suggestion: Mavis from Hotel Transylvania. This game needs goth titties.
Found a few typos. You wrote 'understanded' in one line, it should be 'understood', and one time Tinkerbell says 'he' while speaking of a female character (didn't note when, sorry, I think it's either with Alfa when 'calibrating' her or after Snow White reacts to Cupid Apples).
Character suggestion: Mavis from Hotel Transylvania. This game needs goth titties.