VN Ren'Py Completed One Night in 7612: Part One [v0.33] [Mr. Bojangles]

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Jacowboy

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It's still early in the story. Original draft didn't have a sex scene in there but I knew there was gonna be a reaction to this so I somehow found a way to rewrite some parts to make a scene fit snugly with the story so far.
Welp, seems I managed to miss it the first time since someone had the bright idea to make it a very unintuitive QTE option... u_u

Anyways, yea, my bad... there is one extremely annoying sex scene... looks good tho.

I don't think I can stomach all that disount Tate manifesto crap tho, so I'll just move on to the next game.
 
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Mr. Bo_jangles

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Thanks for the feed back on this. Will try to find a way to make the QTE more obvious. The intent was to not lock the routes behind a simple choice menu like other games. Personally it's one of the things that turns me off other AVN's where you can easily predict what's gonna happen once the choices pop up on screen but yeah I think I can implement this setup a little bit better than it is now.

As for the "manosphere/ tate" premise. C'mon it's satire, the whole point is to make fun of the ridiculousness of it all. The only reason I can see on why it's hard to differentiate this piece of fiction from reality is that real life is starting to -out fiction my fiction- if you catch my drift? ;)

Oh and for those commenting on the shaky parts? Yeah will tone that down for the next update, but I don't think episode two would have any scenes that would require the shaky cam use.
 
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Jacowboy

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Thanks for the feed back on this. Will try to find a way to make the QTE more obvious. The intent was to not lock the routes behind a simple choice menu like other games. Personally it's one of the things that turns me off other AVN's where you can easily predict what's gonna happen once the choices pop up on screen but yeah I think I can implement this setup a little bit better than it is now.

As for the "manosphere/ tate" premise. C'mon it's satire, the whole point is to make fun of the ridiculousness of it all. The only reason I can see on why it's hard to differentiate this piece of fiction from reality is that real life is starting to -out fiction my fiction- if you catch my drift? ;)

Oh and for those commenting on the shaky parts? Yeah will tone that down for the next update, but I don't think episode two would have any scenes that would require the shaky cam use.
Yeah, no, it goes waaaaay beyond satire... what you wrote "The only reason I can see on why it's hard to differentiate this piece of fiction from reality is that real life is starting to -out fiction my fiction- if you catch my drift?" kinda proves the point.

Anyways, not trying to get into an argument here, you do you.

Oh, one thing, since you're taking feedback, you might want to tweak the sex scene, it's legit annoying... I get the idea, and I don't dislike the idea, but you probably need to make it waaaaaay faster than it is (and I'd recommend adding it to the gallery w/o the mini game component).
 

Mr. Bo_jangles

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Yup I'll try to tweak it and maaaayybe make the win conditions a bit more obvious since as I'm seeing most of the comments here haven't unlocked the replay for the scene in the replay gallery. Which, as you suggested, does not have the timer and gives you the ability to "chapter skip".
 

erisonkel

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Veiling the scary alternative future where the jews I mean the blacks I mean the gays run the world behind parody... Classic. Can we expect the fag police to raid this establishment later down the line? I dunno, what other things do you weirdos fear nowadays?
 

Mr. Bo_jangles

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Veiling the scary alternative future where the jews I mean the blacks I mean the gays run the world behind parody... Classic. Can we expect the fag police to raid this establishment later down the line? I dunno, what other things do you weirdos fear nowadays?
Sadly no raids are planned to crash the house party. But will focus more on the sexy stuff, that's guaranteed. ;) (y)
 

dickhouse

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Looks good, fucks great but the fucking might be a little too long. Anyways awesome. Keep it up
 

Shipfan66

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Sorry if this sounds kinda negative, but I'm kinda disappointed in what looked to be a pretty darned good game. Unfortunately my playthrough never found any of the interesting stuff because it was locked behind that QTE that I couldn't complete (and got tired of trying to :( .) As a suggestion to the dev, if you must add QTE events, at least give the player an idea of how they are meant to complete them. And the clear-your-desktop minigame... was there a point to that? Or was it like a penalty phase for not finishing the QTE? Kinda immersion-breaking, at least I thought so. I spotted the logoff button and skipped it (thanks for adding that button btw).
The other thing I noticed was that the transitions were way too long and really slowed things down quite a bit, and there really was way too much exposition on the whole new world order stuff. I get that it's satire, and it's fine as far as that goes (cause for the most part I have pretty much the same opinions on all that mess as the protag does lol), but it seems like that makes up like 3/4 of the script and doesn't leave enough for actually developing the story itself. You could safely trim about half of that and wind up with a better flow, in my own humble opinion at least.
On the plus side, the writing was otherwise pretty good and the visuals and character models were well done. Once the kinks are all ironed out this could be a really nice game. I'll keep an eye out for part 2 and hope for the best :)
 
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