Ren'Py - Completed - One Pump Chump [v1.0.0] [TwistedScarlett]

Amazing so far! Loving the art style, writing quality, and humor - the scenes are absolutely fantastic. The character development and storytelling really shine. 10/10 experience. I hope this gets developed quickly because I can't wait to see where the story goes next!

A well-crafted wholesome romance of the "Lovable oaf teaches hardass the value of Christmas" type. Not much taboo breaking or fetishes from the protagonists perspective, which is my personal preference, though that is likely to change in the future. From the story that is in this first release Tatsumaki has a complete character arc, which makes the story surprisingly compelling for a porn game. I believe the story has a need for the protagonist to grow for the relationship to be less sexual and more romantic, but this is a first release, so it will probably get added. When it does, I hope it is more than just learning to to be a stronger hero, and more overcoming some emotional hangup, like Tatsumaki.

The combat is responsive and quick, which is very important for a turn based rpg. So far the combat is pretty good, though scaling can get weird since there is no incentive to take the harder fights early, and it is better to just max out easy patrols.

Scenes are hot, which is obvious if you know the authors previous works, and the lack of mandatory fetishes should have broad appeal for most people.

TLDR: Good story, hot scenes, responsive gameplay, 5/5

Always am happy with whatever game Twisted Scarlett always cooks up. Whenever Twisted makes a game, I always enjoy myself. Tatsumaki is a such a fantastic choice for a character to follow. Fantastic work as always, can't wait to see how the game goes.

The author delivers sharp and creative parodies that stand out without trying too hard. It's the kind of content the community needs more of. The game itself is well-made, and future updates are worth waiting for.

Very nice game so far. No repetitive grind, not bad writing, quite cute romance between MC and Tatsumaki. Would love a bit more freedom - mainly to manually trigger meetings with Tatsumaki instead of them being scripted, but it's not a big deal. Looking forward to new versions. The only "negative" (and it's mostly a nitpick) - H-scenes look a little to barren, it would be nice if there would be a bit more different CGs in them (like, several different frames of blowjob, with different positions of the head, or something like this), but I understand that drawing even a one CG is already a very time consuming process.

Not a big fan of renpy because I feel like alot of games are either incredibly short or waaaaay too long for very little reward. This game has a nice balance and I very much enjoy the grind for skills. Not to quick but not unbearably long.

It's good, dialogue flows well and the lewd scenes are hot. 10/10, will fap again. Also nice that the focus is on the one waifu with some optional scenes with side characters, I'm a sucker for monogamy.

Its early in the progression, but has fun gameplay. The way the characters react off each other feels smooth and the patrols are fun. I enjoyed the writing/setting as well. If you liked unveiled I would bet you will enjoy this.

There's not enough of the game yet to criticize, so all I can ask is an addition to the cheat menu to indicate how much affection each option generates.
Overall, the combat system is clean and I'm interested in how the plot will constrain interactions

Really enjoyable. I've liked the focus on a more progressive relationship leading to a romance. The gameplay is also a bit fun, i'm able to see some potential into it, but what takes the focus is trully the writing and fetishes.

Lovely demo so far, will be following this often during development. It's a RPG maker game with no roaming elements (as of demo v.0.1.0) but rather based on a choice based system (akin to Visual Novel as stated in the overview). No, the art isn't AI, and the scenes so far look great complimented with pretty neat writing

There's not enough content in the game to write a full review, but there is a good baseline of content and foundation in the demo so far, with some enemies (mostly female combatants) having nice custom-made enemy sprites and not some lazy stock holder enemy like in other RPG games.

If you know One Punch Man as a series, the writing is pretty realistic to the characters, although of course, with a little plot convenience for the MC. Only small grip i have is that the combat system isn't too fleshed out, but like, who cares about that aspect, it's adequate enough to not feel annoying or forced.

Excited to see where the development of this game goes, and I myself, will be considering to support their Patreon. Will raise to a 5 star in future demos when there's more quality content to go through.