Ren'Py Completed One Pump Chump [v1.0.0] [TwistedScarlett]

[jokuur]

Got a couple of anal scenes coming up soon
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can we get monsterization of tatsumaki?
if people can be monsters from eating too much crab then she can be one from being too short
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[Guideman]

Yo Twisted, nice to see ya back in action.

Looking great so far.

 

[Inquirer5]

No AI has been used.

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I'm TwistedScarlett. I have over 8,000 images on rule34xxx, I've been making games and drawing art for longer than AI has existed, and there are plenty of models trained on my art.

It's actually digusting people are giving you shit because they see so many AI slop peddlers using your work. I wont lie, I had the same thought when I skimmed the screenshots but I actually used my eyes instead of assuming, I don't know how people still struggle to tell the difference when all you need to do is look at the lines.

 

[PomTPirate]

It's actually digusting people are giving you shit because they see so many AI slop peddlers using your work. I wont lie, I had the same thought when I skimmed the screenshots but I actually used my eyes instead of assuming, I don't know how people still struggle to tell the difference when all you need to do is look at the lines.

These fuckas must have amnesia, they forgot that he is him

 

[SpicyWintercress]

Very promising stuff. I'll probably hold off on playing more until a few more updates accumulate, but it seems to be yet another excellent game by TS.

Anyway, with the request in the OP for issues noticed, here's a few:
1. After selecting "attack" but not yet the target, there's no longer a "back" button. Intentional? Still having it at that point would be nice
2. I accidentally ran away at the start of the battle against the 2 Chimeras chasing the imps. The text then proceeded to act as if I beat them ("beasts collapse in a steaming pile of limbs and mutated goo" etc.). I reloaded and lost, still got the same text. If I were to guess that's probably how it goes in more fights than that one,
3. Speaking of that text, this bit needs cleanup: "like as soon as they defeated, it's like" - the double "like" looks awkward but could be intentional, but "they defeated" is probably missing an "are"
4. The description for Focus (Esper 4) needs a bit of a cleanup too. "Clears sevearl status effects and remove bonus damage taken from Lust" - "Clears several status effects and removes bonus damage taken from Lust"

All in all though, everything's already looking pretty nice.

 

[Deleted member 9313717]

wouldn't saitama kill all the girls even if he thrust a little? xD
btw, great game!

Saitama isn't the protagonist tho.
And I'm completely sure he has a huge strength control; otherwise he would rip his clothes apart when trying to get dressed.

 

[The-Nah-guy]

Saitama isn't the protagonist tho.
And I'm completely sure he has a huge strength control; otherwise he would rip his clothes apart when trying to get dressed.

i believe his clothes is abnormal too cus he punched and it didn't tear

 

[Gulekgul]

you sure this is not aicg? It looks exactly like one

 

[Inquirer5]

you sure this is not aicg? It looks exactly like one

Low tier bait, get out.

 

[Tiereon]

My WORD this was unexpectedly SUPER FUN !!!

Absolutely loved the characterization of Tatsumaki as well !!

It's close enough to her original character, but also changed enough that she can work GREAT in the story !!

Will keep a close eye and, if possible, might go into them Patreon page to support cause DAMN!
(If there is a donation option, would love to know as well!!)

 

[Deleted member 9313717]

My WORD this was unexpectedly SUPER FUN !!!

Absolutely loved the characterization of Tatsumaki as well !!

It's close enough to her original character, but also changed enough that she can work GREAT in the story !!

Will keep a close eye and, if possible, might go into them Patreon page to support cause DAMN!
(If there is a donation option, would love to know as well!!)

Hell yeah, amen to that brother.
I'm loving the game so far and I want to write a review, but I'll do that when the final version comes out.

 

[TwistedScarlett60]

Some previews of the next update:
Improved damage numbers:

Critical hits (a new mechanic), and DoT damage can now be identified. Here's an example on the new target dummy.

Expanded skills tree;

All abilities now have two upgrades. You can only select one at a time.
2 New Skills and 2 New Passives: Toxic Crescendo, Last Stand, Mind over Matter, and Silent Eclipse.
After a certain point in-game, you can now freely sell abilities to refund them.
Skills no longer provide stats, instead, each skill tree provides stats depending on invested currency.
All players will get a Mag refund when loading a v0.2 save.

New girls!

This update ended up being ambitious because of the skills overhaul and the introduction of several new characters:

 

[Jotarokujo77793456]

I feel like you definitely answered this already but are there going to be scenes on characters outside of Tatsumaki? And I don't mean one off like Mosquito girl or the succubi, I mean like Fubuki or other characters.

 

[jokuur]

These fuckas must have amnesia, they forgot that he is him

Some previews of the next update:
Improved damage numbers:

Critical hits (a new mechanic), and DoT damage can now be identified. Here's an example on the new target dummy.

Expanded skills tree;

All abilities now have two upgrades. You can only select one at a time.
2 New Skills and 2 New Passives: Toxic Crescendo, Last Stand, Mind over Matter, and Silent Eclipse.
After a certain point in-game, you can now freely sell abilities to refund them.
Skills no longer provide stats, instead, each skill tree provides stats depending on invested currency.
All players will get a Mag refund when loading a v0.2 save.

New girls!

This update ended up being ambitious because of the skills overhaul and the introduction of several new characters:

oh fakkk new skills i cant wait to check them all so tatsumaki will luv how stronk i am

 

[TwistedScarlett60]

I feel like you definitely answered this already but are there going to be scenes on characters outside of Tatsumaki? And I don't mean one off like Mosquito girl or the succubi, I mean like Fubuki or other characters.

It's definitely something I'm dabbling in. In v0.1, there was only 1 side-char HCG, in v0.2 there was 3, and in v0.3 I'll be adding another 3. These are just simpler, optional scenes. Some of these monster girls will appear more than once, the plan is for all of them to appear at least twice and get some development.
Of the human cast, Wren and Rose are unlikely to ever get a scene, but I'll try to get at least one or two with Fubuki at some point. The question is how to implement it in a way that doesn't diminish the relationship with Tats.

 

[sukubot]

The question is how to implement it in a way that doesn't diminish the relationship with Tats.

It can be (wrong) choice plus joke bad ending. This wont make it canon and thus no worries in terms of story.

 

[jokuur]

It's definitely something I'm dabbling in. In v0.1, there was only 1 side-char HCG, in v0.2 there was 3, and in v0.3 I'll be adding another 3. These are just simpler, optional scenes. Some of these monster girls will appear more than once, the plan is for all of them to appear at least twice and get some development.
Of the human cast, Wren and Rose are unlikely to ever get a scene, but I'll try to get at least one or two with Fubuki at some point. The question is how to implement it in a way that doesn't diminish the relationship with Tats.

i can answer, we cant! we should leave other thots alone for our tsundere queen, i know fubuki got milk but sacrifices must be made!
seriously tho you need to make a choice at the beginning of the game if this is gonna be harem game or romance game as i dont have anything against both choices now trying to add more girls could be uncomfortable because the game took off as romance so shouldnt it stick to romance then?
if u plan to make harem game now i will be unhappy how little of other girls there is and if its gonna be romance im gonna be unhappy how we cheat on tatsumaki both options are bad even if optional, i dont mind fubuki flashing tits once or twice but you should consider this
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[jokuur]

Some previews of the next update:
Improved damage numbers:

Critical hits (a new mechanic), and DoT damage can now be identified. Here's an example on the new target dummy.

Expanded skills tree;

All abilities now have two upgrades. You can only select one at a time.
2 New Skills and 2 New Passives: Toxic Crescendo, Last Stand, Mind over Matter, and Silent Eclipse.
After a certain point in-game, you can now freely sell abilities to refund them.
Skills no longer provide stats, instead, each skill tree provides stats depending on invested currency.
All players will get a Mag refund when loading a v0.2 save.

New girls!

This update ended up being ambitious because of the skills overhaul and the introduction of several new characters:

fakkk i didnt saw that
You can only select one at a time.
why i cant have them all?

now i will have to test multiple builds playing the game multiple times?
how am i gonna replay the game without gooning so many times are u trying to kill me?

 

[yahoman]

Finished the demo today, I can't believe it's just a demo!
I wish you luck and hope that you have fun working on this!

 

[4DreadMare]

Lol, we've reached a stage where people accuse artists of using AI because their art resembles AI trained on their art without their permission. What a strange future.

This one is really sad because its one of the most used ai styles meaning they fed a lot of their work :/