VN Ren'Py Completed Only a Dream [v2024-02-23] [tightbuns]

[uuhwhat]

This game was really nice, albeit too short Kinda dissappointed the tags are lying thogh, there is no impregnation (except for a short onliner at the very end) and also no pregnancy, since you don't see Maddie actually being pregnant. Obviously not really the devs fault but still sad we don't get a short little afterstory or something.
Still, keep up the good work dev.

 

[Marioc17]

Android port please and thank you

 

[Quinnzoel]

model looks nice, what engine is that

 

[jerry03]

Wonderdull game, even the shortness doesn't bother! I liked the basics of the story. i wouldn't have minded both taking her or more R scene, from the uncle eventually!
But really nice game, i enjoyed it

 

[RG80100]

tightbuns this is really good for a first game. I love the protagonist, she is beautiful and horny asf. Hope you want to continue

 

[tightbuns]

is the dev a woman? cuz i feel like the dev had a bit of a unique take on this female protag/male domination genre. the female MC felt more alive and male side characters were much less hornier than usual.

Thanks, I will take that as a compliment!
And no, I'm not sending boob pics.

This game was really nice, albeit too short Kinda dissappointed the tags are lying thogh, there is no impregnation (except for a short onliner at the very end) and also no pregnancy, since you don't see Maddie actually being pregnant. Obviously not really the devs fault but still sad we don't get a short little afterstory or something.
Still, keep up the good work dev.

Wonderdull game, even the shortness doesn't bother! I liked the basics of the story. i wouldn't have minded both taking her or more R scene, from the uncle eventually!
But really nice game, i enjoyed it

Hope you two like this (3 bonus renders):

Spoiler: Maddie preg & Kristaps bj 0

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Spoiler: Maddie preg & Kristaps bj 1

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Spoiler: Maddie preg & Kristaps bj 2

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Android port please and thank you

I'll see what I can do in the coming week.

 

[timbukalso]

tightbuns I suggest shortening the duration of your dissolves and pauses. The delays are so significant that I found them distracting: I frequently couldn't tell if my click had been registered, and I frequently couldn't tell if I needed to click to advance or if I was just waiting for a two- or three-second timer to elapse.

Personally, I think the current pace is laboriously slow, but if you want to preserve it as part of your artistic vision, I'd suggest showing an icon on screen either when the player needs to click to advance or when the player doesn't need to click, i.e. when a slow image sequence is playing.

I hope you found that criticism constructive; this is a really impressive initial release.

 

[kyuurubi]

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Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
Wed Feb 14 04:38:14 2024

I try open with joiplay

 

[Rabonixxx]

So the dog part will be removed, so sad and potential wasted there. It is what it is

 

[DarkAssassin]

If anyone wants to skip Minigame
*You can Chose to Win or Lose & See Both Scenes*

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[Pritam 2005]

If anyone wants to skip Minigame
*You can Chose to Win or Lose & See Both Scenes*

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Thank you so much DA, Take love ❤❤

 

[Sul1986]

I dont get why people dont like the beastiality specially when its good like this one . I like it and i will support the dev

 

[baka]

really nice game and I think the format is great, to not drag the VN for years and just focus on a couple of scenes.
said that I did wish to be able to add the old dude as well, so she can pick him as well or why not both if u play "correctly".
hopefully we get more games from this DEV.

 

[FookU2]

model looks nice, what engine is that

I honestly thought the female's face is kinda fugly. lol

 

[holliatak]

did i just find a gem here

 

[Vekza]

I liked it a lot, so I made a Spanish translation, in case anyone is interested.

 

[Emil33]

Such a fun game thank you

 

[GrandHell]

Any games similar to this but longer?

 

[grim1952]

That was really good, hope you do a sequel, would love to see more of her.

 

[baka]

well. if u remember NTRGames. he used 2 models in all his games. and his games where also short, still in one story he did have a couple of parts.
but if used it should be another story involved her, maybe in the past or the future.