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Wonderdull game, even the shortness doesn't bother! I liked the basics of the story. i wouldn't have minded both taking her or more R scene, from the uncle eventually!
But really nice game, i enjoyed it
But really nice game, i enjoyed it
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Thanks, I will take that as a compliment!
And no, I'm not sending boob pics.
This game was really nice, albeit too shortKinda dissappointed the tags are lying thogh, there is no impregnation (except for a short onliner at the very end) and also no pregnancy, since you don't see Maddie actually being pregnant. Obviously not really the devs fault but still sad we don't get a short little afterstory or something.
Still, keep up the good work dev.
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I'll see what I can do in the coming week.
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tightbuns I suggest shortening the duration of your dissolves and pauses. The delays are so significant that I found them distracting: I frequently couldn't tell if my click had been registered, and I frequently couldn't tell if I needed to click to advance or if I was just waiting for a two- or three-second timer to elapse.
Personally, I think the current pace is laboriously slow, but if you want to preserve it as part of your artistic vision, I'd suggest showing an icon on screen either when the player needs to click to advance or when the player doesn't need to click, i.e. when a slow image sequence is playing.
I hope you found that criticism constructive; this is a really impressive initial release.
Personally, I think the current pace is laboriously slow, but if you want to preserve it as part of your artistic vision, I'd suggest showing an icon on screen either when the player needs to click to advance or when the player doesn't need to click, i.e. when a slow image sequence is playing.
I hope you found that criticism constructive; this is a really impressive initial release.
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So the dog part will be removed, so sad and potential wasted there. It is what it is
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If anyone wants to skip Minigame
*You can Chose to Win or Lose & See Both Scenes*
*You can Chose to Win or Lose & See Both Scenes*
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I dont get why people dont like the beastiality specially when its good like this one . I like it and i will support the dev
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really nice game and I think the format is great, to not drag the VN for years and just focus on a couple of scenes.
said that I did wish to be able to add the old dude as well, so she can pick him as well or why not both if u play "correctly".
hopefully we get more games from this DEV.
said that I did wish to be able to add the old dude as well, so she can pick him as well or why not both if u play "correctly".
hopefully we get more games from this DEV.
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I liked it a lot, so I made a Spanish translation, in case anyone is interested.
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Thanks for the feedback! Yeah what you're probably most irked by is the manual pauses I added after speech (thinking it would convey a character's internal dialogue taking place - It seemed to not have that effect haha)
Setting the pace and finding a good timing for transitions is one of my weaknesses, I admit. I often spent more time than necessary on certain parts, overthinking it perhaps. I'll take your advice to heart
Thanks, that seems to be a very requested feature!
I'm re-releasing the game and updating the download links so that will probably break on that version, because no dog scene.
I'll have to say sorry to everyone for the mess :3
Seeing how the game was received (beyond my expectations) -I've decided to continue with a sequel, and bring Maddie's story to its end, and THEN continue with the story I had planned for next.
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nice. still keep it simple. I think a lot of us enjoy those small stories instead of those neverending VN that spans for years.
this format is nice, so keep it like this even if u add more scenes.
and try to not add too many characters as that also tends to stretch the story too far from the eroticism.
this format is nice, so keep it like this even if u add more scenes.
and try to not add too many characters as that also tends to stretch the story too far from the eroticism.