Also I saw your review (thank you for leaving one), I will do my best to make the game less grindy as well as look into some of the broken links (though this is the first i've seen someone here state this) for pics.
And in terms of spelling mistakes I only see the one you mentioned so idk why you said "on every screen"?
As for spelling and grammar mistakes, I just launched the game again. Just a few random ones after clicking for a minute:
- You have selected fit, you are careful with what you eat and have a set workout plan for the week,
[missing "your" here] body is very toned.
- Your hair is waist-length, long but
doesnt go past your waist.
- Your cup size is C,
noticable in public depending on your top.
- On the eye color screen, all are capitalized, except for brown.
-
Your Caucasian, known for how wide variety their woman are in terms of body. (the second part could also be rephrased)
- Only started going to the gym
acouple of months ago
- Congrats you have made your model
[, the ] only thing left to do is give yourself a name for your account:
That's just for the character selection. There's more like that in most screens, sometimes multiple.
You could run your text through any free online grammar check service and it'll likely help you catch the most obvious issues.