Chapter 1
It is so refreshing to see a Female MC that's a normal human being! Normal sexual desire is plenty sexy on it's own. No need to come up with any weird motivation to make her horny - just natural human needs.
Maybe too nonchalant? I mean they should at least discuss the possible unsavoryness of the deal - even if they are both of the best intentions. Perhaps a little bit about consent during their discussion, rather than just priority.
The art is awesome and this is definitely a VN not a game. There isn't a branch to be seen (yet?) and I'm not sure there is even any stats in it. However, all the characters are interesting and three dimensional - excellent job there! No one is thrown away.
I think this ends up being much more realistic and natural than A Wife and Mother, even as it's shaping up to be more of a screwball comedy with a very comicy feel. It has me jonesing for the next release which seems to be very far away. Now that the First chapter is out for marketing, the developers should consider updating the story a day at a time, so they can have quicker, shorter releases similar to the Adventurous Couple.
Good Luck!
It is so refreshing to see a Female MC that's a normal human being! Normal sexual desire is plenty sexy on it's own. No need to come up with any weird motivation to make her horny - just natural human needs.
Maybe too nonchalant? I mean they should at least discuss the possible unsavoryness of the deal - even if they are both of the best intentions. Perhaps a little bit about consent during their discussion, rather than just priority.
The art is awesome and this is definitely a VN not a game. There isn't a branch to be seen (yet?) and I'm not sure there is even any stats in it. However, all the characters are interesting and three dimensional - excellent job there! No one is thrown away.
I think this ends up being much more realistic and natural than A Wife and Mother, even as it's shaping up to be more of a screwball comedy with a very comicy feel. It has me jonesing for the next release which seems to be very far away. Now that the First chapter is out for marketing, the developers should consider updating the story a day at a time, so they can have quicker, shorter releases similar to the Adventurous Couple.
Good Luck!