Ren'Py - Abandoned - Orc's Quest: A Dick Girl's Tale [v0.2] [OrcsMaster]

THIS GAME COULD ACHIEVE GREATNESS SO SAD.
It's super-unique, top-tier renders, good story, loveable characters, delicate music and sound, good gaming system，=, in short, it has everything a great adult game has.
It pains me a lot to see it abandoned...
I was going to subscribe on patreon but Orc Master is gone..... I really hope he would come back someday, like the MC brought hope to orckind.

You know this has some pretty wonky grammar and phrasing, everything from thirsty looks to hunting salad, misspelling character names, occasionally calling the protagonist him despite every other instance referring to her as a her and she just happens to have a dick.
There are A LOT, of grammatical and spelling issues, like A LOT A LOT, BUT not only was I amused, I was and am intrigued to see where this goes. It has SPIRIT, a colorful cast, interesting lore, and it never felt like I was forced to watch the dreaded NTR.
As such 4 stars. Needs polish, and its not finished yet, who knows could go down the tubes, but as it stands my interest is peaked and its still better than MTL poetry by a long shot. If you like fantasy, and being a chick with a dick that dicks down other chicks, and also happens to be an orc, this is a game worth checking out.

4/5 at v0.2

Positive points:
- I loved the ambientation of this game, it reminds me the country part of my state(the incest practice too )

- The passionate incestuous relations between the characters is pretty hot.

- Pregnancy isn't my thing(I feel even disgusted by it tbh), thankfully it's avoidable, but is there for who's like it, so is a positive point I guess.

- Nice characters models, big boobs, muscle girls, penises sizes that doesn't runs from reality in a way that you can easily imagine giving an good bj or being fucked by them.

- Day/Nigh period cycle

- Interesting history so far

Negative points:

- The relations are pretty rushed, things happens pretty fast imo, it's good to not take too long but they happens faster than it should be(dunno, maybe it's because they're family). Hope this gets some work/re-work to feel progressively more natural in future updates.

- The animations are a bit laggy, they need more smooth movements, this will come with time of course, isn't an truly negative point tbh, it's more like a note for the dev.

I think that's it besides that the others reviewers already said, It's a good game and definitely worth your time to play it and possibly your money to help the dev go further.

An personal negative point(it's exclusively an problem that's only mine, it doesn't affects the game for you) is Dhanga's(the auntie) hair, it really looks like my neighboor's hair that is an elderly woman, maybe because it's white and pretty shaggy, this causes me some discomfort, not that much because the gorgeous body that Dhanga haves, but yet it causes me some. I would be highly relieved if her hair changes the color? Absolutely. It'll happen? Hardly for don't say that it'll wont happen.

v0.2

Pros: Good plot. The artwork is getting better. Love the characters so far.

Cons: Needs help with spelling and grammar. Match descriptions and graphics (ex: saying someone is fucking another but the pic looks like screwing in the ass). Rythrix with tan lines?

Suggestions: Use the free version of Grammarly for spelling and some grammar aids.

Good luck!

I really like the game so far has everything i love incest pregnancy harems even foot jobs.

pros. The game features Breeding, Fooljobs Incest and lesbians

cons only one real one at the moment. I honestly feel like the mom and aunt look to old for me mainly the grey hair stuff/ So me me the idea of impregnating them kinda make me squirm. I think i have a choice in it ATM so if can gonna stick to sister and the slave.


that being said I gave it 4 stars cause I like what your trying to do so far. But the grey hair mom and aunt thing is real turn off for me sorry. I wish you well and hope you succeed

Note: I am a huge fan of futanari on female, orc/fantasy content, incest content, kissing, and content that is not POV view. This game has all of that, and is very unique in that regard.



Despite everything I mentioned above I do appreciate this game a lot for non fetish reasons. It puts in time and effort to make the story work, has A LOT of sexual content already (and it’s only version 0.1), and the animations are pretty decent. There are some bugs, but nothing that ruins or breaks the game at all, and despite being an open world game the content is very easily accessible. It is already my favorite new game on the site in quite a while, and with good updates has a chance to become one of my favorite games on the site period.

[Rev @ v0.1]

Has potential, needs polish.

Art's nice.

Writing is poor; scenario's fine but fluency is rocky and the characterization suffers for it.

Porn's alright, but there were a couple pics that the story said were vaginal but basic anatomical knowledge said were anal. A nitpicking pervert is not an aroused pervert.

There're a couple other nitpicks that I mentally filed under "if you have time for this, why not proofread instead?" : the timer thing on the save file is intensely annoying, the meta references are cringy, the font is all caps and compounded by low contrast font color choices so reading is an eyesore, and starting the new game with trigger warnings, dev roadmap, and your complete lifestory makes me impatient.

TLDR: Tits good, words need work.