When I saw that I imagined dad's letter would have read like:
Cry not for my death, child, for now my soul is free,
Cry not for my death, child, instead listen to me:
You want an easy life, without a care for the next bill?
I can make that happen, though you have to honor my will:
You can complain all you want, even in a high pitch ...
but to get my damn money, you'll have to become a witch!
Can't really tell how good the sex scenes are going to look like... honestly the scene with the attorney standing in front of the door reminded me of the ending of "Invasion of the body snatchers", I swear it feels like she's about to raise her arm man.
BOOla54762 as for the game itself being in RPGM... if you leave the mansion at the start and move left to leave the area, you'll immediately enter the mansion again and I honestly don't understand why we need a short fade to black every time we enter a room on the same floor. I dunno if I fucked up with the screen resolution or something, but at the beginning especially, there were a few black screen flickers between scene transitions. Think in the graveyard, you had flashes of the graveyard itself between scene transitions. As for your engrish, you could just use some online translators like deepl or yandex
(or whatever else is applicable for your mother tongue) or you could look over to the
recruitment & services portion of f95, maybe you find someone who has time to kill?
Overall, looking forward to what Jenifer is going to do with her powers