VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.5.0] [JDOR]

[HornyyPussy]

Well you and I are looking at his powers differently. If this was a TV show like The Boys, then yes all that you said is true and great for the MC.

Now if this is a porn game, and it is, then those are not that useful for getting more girls. Now knowing a girls fantasy and being able to get her addicted to just your touch (because it gives her mind blowing orgasms) then those are powers I WANT my MC to have.

I did not even give the Timestop girl the time of day... I did not agree to be her photographer, she is a Bitch and I don't even want her power, it is a rapey power like invisibility, don't want that one either.

And for the porn game I don't even want super strength, on the off chance it could end up hurting one of the girls.

Now other powers that would come in handy, are Teleportation (to take girls to nice places), Flying (girls would like that as well), Super endurance (he just keeps going and going, nice for ability to make lots of girls happy)

Do you see where I am coming from now?

As others have said, you are COMPLETELY ignoring the story part of the VN which makes your points....well, pointless.

We are talking about people who can summon mind wolves, relieve someone's else yesterday and even teleport people by just touching them once. Suspension of disbelief is a must here.

It's a superpower and sex VN, belief and logic went out the door as Jaq wrote the first word of the story

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

This is the only thing in your argument that we don't actually even have a hint about yet. The assumption that the clones are risk-free is something that I'm sure is going to be tested in the story. I kinda hope they're not though, since that really would be pretty OP once he gets full control over it.

Especially if you're right about them using his other powers.

Since the MC can feel what the clone experiences (and Cat can as well) we can probably safely assume the clones aren't entirely "risk free", at least in terms of sensory transfer.
They don't transmit everything of course (like, the MC can't see through their eyes), but pleasure certainly seems to work, so that suggests pain does as well.
That could potentially be pretty detrimental if he can't either shut it off or at least dampen it somewhat. I'm inclined to think the link would just stop if the clone died, but you never know, it might send the MC into shock or something. If they make it so clone death = MC death then there are VERY few reasons to ever actually pull one out.

 

[Blossop]

I wonder how many different ways there are to combine Cat's power with Lucia's power.

 

[OWSam000]

I think the time-stop superpower that Luci had is too powerful to exist. (Just similar to one of the characteristic of the famous Speed Force that the Flash has, can nearly stop time moving forward but still aging). Such powerful ability won't stop some ambitious people kidnapping her to steal or transfer her power for their purposes, whatever how powerful she thought her father was.

 

[Snugglepuff]

We are talking about people who can summon mind wolves, relieve someone's else yesterday and even teleport people by just touching them once. Suspension of disbelief is a must here.

Suspension of disbelief is also dependant on context within the setting and characters as well.
Like if Batman punched the moon out of orbit without any explanation of how he was able to, or anyone questioning it, when there's been nothing to show he's ever had the ability to do that.

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[Nezron]

As others have said, you are COMPLETELY ignoring the story part of the VN which makes your points....well, pointless.

You have no idea what you are talking about. Where in any of my post have I ignored the story, since I was only talking about powers that I do or don't like for the MC..... and super powers are pretty much the main part of the story.
I have even stated I liked the story and look forward to more.

A pointless post is a post calling another persons post pointless. You add nothing to the debate.
have a ok day
peace

 

[HornyyPussy]

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Well, you are wrong there my friend. That phrase is more powerful than "By the power of Greyskull, I have the Power"!!!

 

[HornyyPussy]

You have no idea what you are talking about. Where in any of my post have I ignored the story, since I was only talking about powers that I do or don't like for the MC..... and super powers are pretty much the main part of the story.
I have even stated I liked the story and look forward to more.

A pointless post is a post calling another persons post pointless. You add nothing to the debate.
have a ok day
peace

Sure kid, sure.......

 

[lorkdubo]

Suspension of disbelief is also dependant on context within the setting and characters as well.
Like if Batman punched the moon out of orbit without any explanation of how he was able to, or anyone questioning it, when there's been nothing to show he's ever had the ability to do that.

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The joke here is that in Batman, "Because I'm Batman" is quite accurate, as he has ∞ plot-armor and ∞ way of BS if he has "time" to prepare. I still HATE the Batman vs Superman fight.

 

[HornyyPussy]

The joke here is that in Batman, "Because I'm Batman" is quite accurate, as he has ∞ plot-armor and ∞ way of BS if he has "time" to prepare. I still HATE the Batman vs Superman fight.

Keep Supes humble

 

[Elduriel]

I think the time-stop superpower that Luci had is too powerful to exist. (Just similar to one of the characteristic of the famous Speed Force that the Flash has, can nearly stop time moving forward but still aging). Such powerful ability won't stop some ambitious people kidnapping her to steal or transfer her power for their purposes, whatever how powerful she thought her father was.

yeaah, that one is a thinker... once you get it you really don't need any other powers. And to think she does onlyfans or whatever to make money adds insult to injury, she could literally do anything else to get money. I guess it's an ego thing or something.

 

[Deleted member 2093814]

Seems a fun game so far even if there's little choices. The MC tho....derpy looking as fuck. What's with the black eyes? looks like he has chronic insomnia...

Lady Steel is easily best girl, so far above the others it's no contest. Evelyn's dialogue seems really out of character when she talks to MC on her birthday, calling herself a cumslut and saying stick it in her ass.

 

[Rehwyn]

Seems a fun game so far even if there's little choices. The MC tho....derpy looking as fuck. What's with the black eyes? looks like he has chronic insomnia...

Lady Steel is easily best girl, so far above the others it's no contest. Evelyn's dialogue seems really out of character when she talks to MC on her birthday, calling herself a cumslut and saying stick it in her ass.

My understanding is that the MC is intentionally looking a bit rough around the edges, since he's still recovering from near-death experiences.

 

[Deleted member 2093814]

My understanding is that the MC is intentionally looking a bit rough around the edges, since he's still recovering from near-death experiences.

Yeah you could be right because in the earlier flashback scenes he doesn't look like he 's got a terminal illness

 

[DevinHesi]

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[Krytax123]

Seems a fun game so far even if there's little choices. The MC tho....derpy looking as fuck. What's with the black eyes? looks like he has chronic insomnia...

Lady Steel is easily best girl, so far above the others it's no contest. Evelyn's dialogue seems really out of character when she talks to MC on her birthday, calling herself a cumslut and saying stick it in her ass.

Tbf some girls talk like that when they are horny/feel secure with their partner/intend to make their partner horny.

But i still agree with you, its one of my few critics with the avn that imo (!) a lot of the women talk like male college bros. I got this feeling from the very beginning when the 4 friends talk in the school together.

The girls dialogue lacks .. feminity in lack of a better description. Somehow its not every women tho but Evelyn, invisible girl and moonsong are strong contenders for this.

Oddly its not so much the case with Lady Steel who supposedly behaves/acts less feminine.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Seems a fun game so far even if there's little choices. The MC tho....derpy looking as fuck. What's with the black eyes? looks like he has chronic insomnia...

The MC is basically "Year One Invincible" at this point. The game starts with him getting mauled damn near to death by an anthropomorphic tiger guy and he gets his ass handed to him a bit later on in a bar fight because he's a moron that decided it would be a good idea to take on like 3 guys by himself instead of waiting for not-Wonder Woman to finish taking a piss.

Lady Steel is easily best girl, so far above the others it's no contest. Evelyn's dialogue seems really out of character when she talks to MC on her birthday, calling herself a cumslut and saying stick it in her ass.

Well, yeah, obviously. She's an Alex fan.

 

[Eunoian]

More seriously though, it seemed like Evelyn didnt have any control over her power,it's how she justified herself to mc...

Were these images with Safe Mode on?

 

[Hungover00]

The MC is basically "Year One Invincible" at this point. The game starts with him getting mauled damn near to death by an anthropomorphic tiger guy and he gets his ass handed to him a bit later on in a bar fight because he's a moron that decided it would be a good idea to take on like 3 guys by himself instead of waiting for not-Wonder Woman to finish taking a piss.



Well, yeah, obviously. She's an Alex fan.

Alex is the rich swimmer, right?

 

[Rehwyn]

Alex is the rich swimmer, right?

With the silver hair, yes.