VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.6.0] [JDOR]

[UnoriginalUserName]

I don't think we know if they'll be able to use his other powers or not, since Cat only has that one power, and he didn't try to use any others with his clone when he had one out. The fact he got the power from Cat's clone seems to indicate the presence of metagenes in the clone though, so it's certainly a possibility.

That's true, but if they are straight up clones (and like you said, they seem to be since the MC got Cat's power by fucking one) they should be able to use anything the MC can with the possible exception of something requiring mental focus or thought to use.
Like, I'm not entirely sure if they could use the wolf power, since that's a whole mental link thing and the clones are just puppets without an ego. But something like "Hey Clone 1, break that guy in half while Clone 2 uses green sparkle power!" should be totally doable.

 

[Nezron]

Since Ruth / Lady Steel is classified as a main girl love interest, I'm inclined to believe the MC will get super strength. He might have to be a little creative about how he goes about getting it mind you, at least until he unlocks "unbreakable spine" or "cock of steel" to avoid being crushed to paste.



You really aren't seeing the potential those powers have with just a little creative application.

First of all, "big deal, he has a wolf" - that wolf is a psionic projection. Not only is it likely stronger and faster than a real wolf of its size (and it is pretty big), it's also essentially immortal. It might be put down / out of action, but as long the the MC is still alive he should be able to summon it back (perhaps after a delay, who knows). If it was just a simple "Oh, it's a big doggo" type power then Moonsong wouldn't be able to hold her own and hang with the Sisterhood girls. She isn't Batman.

And the clones are stupidly powerful. They can do anything he can do. So they can use Emerald's power. And they can use super strength when he gets it. They could potentially summon their own psionic wolves too. If we assume the gallery is canon, Cat (the clone girl) has a picture in there with her and 4 clones about to "service" Emerald, so let's say 4 clones is the limit. That's 4 disposable clones able to potentially use every power the MC has at once. They might even be able to use his own power absorbing power themselves and transfer it back to him.

Evelyn's precognitive scrying thing is a bit weird (and it's more likely to be the NTR power than the clones), but also extremely powerful if properly used.

He's also going to get cryokinesis, invisibility, and Ghostraven's enhanced physical abilities. Those all belong to main girls so it's more or less "guaranteed" those are in.

He'll also potentially be getting time stopping (although it comes with severe drawbacks if you abuse it like a moron), hyperpolyglotism (perfect for a superhero on the go around the world), telepathy, intangibility, pyrokinesis, replication, and Marina's sexual desire knowledge power (which is admittedly probably mostly useful to obtain more power). All of those belong to side girls, so there's no "guarantee", but at least a few of them are likely.

Well you and I are looking at his powers differently. If this was a TV show like The Boys, then yes all that you said is true and great for the MC.

Now if this is a porn game, and it is, then those are not that useful for getting more girls. Now knowing a girls fantasy and being able to get her addicted to just your touch (because it gives her mind blowing orgasms) then those are powers I WANT my MC to have.

I did not even give the Timestop girl the time of day... I did not agree to be her photographer, she is a Bitch and I don't even want her power, it is a rapey power like invisibility, don't want that one either.

And for the porn game I don't even want super strength, on the off chance it could end up hurting one of the girls.

Now other powers that would come in handy, are Teleportation (to take girls to nice places), Flying (girls would like that as well), Super endurance (he just keeps going and going, nice for ability to make lots of girls happy)

Do you see where I am coming from now?

 

[Reniere]

Right now i am more interested in knowing what limits will be put to Jack's power. Right now he can copy up to four powers at the same time so i am inclined to believe time may be the limiting factor here.

I hope not then its Heroes all over again. having to copy powers over and over again when you overwrite the current one.

 

[Reniere]

Now knowing a girls fantasy and being able to get her addicted to just your touch (because it gives her mind blowing orgasms) then those are powers I WANT my MC to have.

You say you dont want blackmail but the power you want most is the most blackmail potential one.
You can withdraw mindblowing orgasm once they are addicted to it. and make them do things you want
if they want a hit that sounds more Blackmailish to me then the rest.

 

[lorkdubo]

Well you and I are looking at his powers differently. If this was a TV show like The Boys, then yes all that you said is true and great for the MC.

Now if this is a porn game, and it is, then those are not that useful for getting more girls. Now knowing a girls fantasy and being able to get her addicted to just your touch (because it gives her mind blowing orgasms) then those are powers I WANT my MC to have.

I did not even give the Timestop girl the time of day... I did not agree to be her photographer, she is a Bitch and I don't even want her power, it is a rapey power like invisibility, don't want that one either.

And for the porn game I don't even want super strength, on the off chance it could end up hurting one of the girls.

Now other powers that would come in handy, are Teleportation (to take girls to nice places), Flying (girls would like that as well), Super endurance (he just keeps going and going, nice for ability to make lots of girls happy)

Do you see where I am coming from now?

You want orgasm power over the literal power of stopping time. STOPPING TIME!!!! I hate when they go all in these stupid porn powers instead of actual shit that would draw people to you.
There is a more funny variation of that power in the game hypnosis where the cum is literal crack as commanded by the self hypnosis, and low and behold, any girl that touches that cum is heavily addicted to it.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Well you and I are looking at his powers differently. If this was a TV show like The Boys, then yes all that you said is true and great for the MC.

Now if this is a porn game, and it is, then those are not that useful for getting more girls. Now knowing a girls fantasy and being able to get her addicted to just your touch (because it gives her mind blowing orgasms) then those are powers I WANT my MC to have.

I did not even give the Timestop girl the time of day... I did not agree to be her photographer, she is a Bitch and I don't even want her power, it is a rapey power like invisibility, don't want that one either.

And for the porn game I don't even want super strength, on the off chance it could end up hurting one of the girls.

Now other powers that would come in handy, are Teleportation (to take girls to nice places), Flying (girls would like that as well), Super endurance (he just keeps going and going, nice for ability to make lots of girls happy)

Do you see where I am coming from now?

Oh, I see where you're coming from. But a lot of the shit you want isn't in the game or realistic (if you can even put that word to use in this situation). You want your MC to be "Super Romance Porn Man" with absolutely no useful abilities outside of sex or getting a girl in the mood for sex.

First of all, that orgasm touch power is fun sounding at first. Until you get swarmed by bitches 24/7. I should also point out that that guy's power is a lot like a drug with very addictive qualities. That shit isn't going to be healthy for anyone on the receiving end for any length of time and it causes a personality shift too. I fully expect him to get shipped off to that farm for people with dangerous powers.

The sexual fantasy power is fine. It's very porn-game-esque. I hope you're comfortable letting that cute girl in the corner take a shit on your chest when it turns out that's what she's into.

You don't want time stopping, super strength, or invisibility. Ok, fair enough.

So far the only teleporting power in the game belongs to a guy, so I hope you're ready to get your gay on. Oh, and by the way, it can only teleport other people, not him, so you'll be using it to send the girls away to exotic locales without you.

You want flight. I mean, nobody in the game has it yet, but sure, that sounds fun. You'll want to wear goggles if you fly at any kind of speed beyond like 25 mph. So will the girl you plan on somehow carrying around with you WITHOUT SUPER STRENGTH. Better hope you aren't too high off the ground when you get tired and drop her ass. I'm in pretty good shape but I don't think I'd want to try carrying a 100 pound girl in my arms for miles on end.

Super endurance. Uh huh. Now, are you talking orgasm control here, or lack of fatigue, or both? Because you know, that shit is going to really start to fucking chafe after a bit, and the girl is going to start hurting a lot too. Fucking for hours on end isn't as fun as it sounds.

Long story short (too late) - If all you want are the sex powers without anything else, you're essentially completely nixing the game's story.

 

[Hungover00]

You want orgasm power over the literal power of stopping time. STOPPING TIME!!!! I hate when they go all in these stupid porn powers instead of actual shit that would draw people to you.
There is a more funny variation of that power in the game hypnosis where the cum is literal crack as commanded by the self hypnosis, and low and behold, any girl that touches that cum is heavily addicted to it.

The most powerful magic, Chronomancy!

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

I hope not then its Heroes all over again. having to copy powers over and over again when you overwrite the current one.

A limit is necessary or else this will turn into another generic trope of power fantasy game. Considering the effort the developer (jdor) put into the story so far i don't believe/hope they will go down this route.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

The most powerful magic, Chronomancy!

You want orgasm power over the literal power of stopping time. STOPPING TIME!!!! I hate when they go all in these stupid porn powers instead of actual shit that would draw people to you.
There is a more funny variation of that power in the game hypnosis where the cum is literal crack as commanded by the self hypnosis, and low and behold, any girl that touches that cum is heavily addicted to it.

Honestly, I'm having a hard time deciding if Lucia's power is actual time stopping or if it's just incredibly fast super speed. Because actual time stopping would have to affect literally everything in the entire universe. That's a pretty big ask for the suspension of disbelief, even when you're talking about super powers.

 

[lorkdubo]

Honestly, I'm having a hard time deciding if Lucia's power is actual time stopping or if it's just incredibly fast super speed. Because actual time stopping would have to affect literally everything in the entire universe. That's a pretty big ask for the suspension of disbelief, even when you're talking about super powers.

She does not have super speed then but Speed Force, given that she can bring someone at that speed (MC). Both are ridiculous given that to be able to use super speed, you have to also have a lot of other super powers because if not, you are destroyed by the super speed, which in case of Lucia would be really fast. There is another alternative, and that is slowing time and not stopping it. The difference between slowing time and stopping it is massive.

 

[Reniere]

She does not have super speed then but Speed Force, given that she can bring someone at that speed (MC). Both are ridiculous given that to be able to use super speed, you have to also have a lot of other super powers because if not, you are destroyed by the super speed, which in case of Lucia would be really fast. There is another alternative, and that is slowing time and not stopping it. The difference between slowing time and stopping it is massive.

I was just about to type not stopping time completely and more of a pause not super long but feels long. Cause the possibility of Stopping time and the day and night cycle messing with the Earths core could pretty much categorize her as a world threat, If her ability stops everything.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

She does not have super speed then but Speed Force, given that she can bring someone at that speed (MC). Both are ridiculous given that to be able to use super speed, you have to also have a lot of other super powers because if not, you are destroyed by the super speed, which in case of Lucia would be really fast. There is another alternative, and that is slowing time and not stopping it. The difference between slowing time and stopping it is massive.

Yeah the Speed Force (Flash) is why Flash can move at superluminal speeds (especially in the atmosphere). Otherwise he'd destroy himself and the planet. It's why Superman is limited speed-wise. His body might be able to handle it, but his surroundings can't.

Here's a good example :

There's also the energy (calories) requirement, but you could potentially explain that away as long as the speedster isn't ALWAYS moving at super speed.

I was just about to type not stopping time completely and more of a pause not super long but feels long. Cause the possibility of Stopping time and the day and night cycle messing with the Earths core could pretty much categorize her as a world threat, If her ability stops everything.

No, whatever her power is, whether it be stopping time or slowing it to the nth degree, it HAS to affect everything equally. It cannot be localized unless it's to a small area inside a bubble that somehow doesn't affect the planet in any way. There's a lot more than just the day/night cycle at stake. It would fuck up the earth's orbit, which in turn would fuck up the orbits of the moon, Mars (probably), Venus (probably), and possibly Mercury. That's the same reason that if her power is actual time stopping that it has to affect everything. The universe is constantly in motion, if there's an outer limit to her powers you'd have cosmic shit crashing into other cosmic shit all over the place. Kinda bad news.

 

[Nezron]

Oh, I see where you're coming from. But a lot of the shit you want isn't in the game or realistic (if you can even put that word to use in this situation). You want your MC to be "Super Romance Porn Man" with absolutely no useful abilities outside of sex or getting a girl in the mood for sex.

First of all, that orgasm touch power is fun sounding at first. Until you get swarmed by bitches 24/7. I should also point out that that guy's power is a lot like a drug with very addictive qualities. That shit isn't going to be healthy for anyone on the receiving end for any length of time and it causes a personality shift too. I fully expect him to get shipped off to that farm for people with dangerous powers.

The sexual fantasy power is fine. It's very porn-game-esque. I hope you're comfortable letting that cute girl in the corner take a shit on your chest when it turns out that's what she's into.

You don't want time stopping, super strength, or invisibility. Ok, fair enough.

So far the only teleporting power in the game belongs to a guy, so I hope you're ready to get your gay on. Oh, and by the way, it can only teleport other people, not him, so you'll be using it to send the girls away to exotic locales without you.

You want flight. I mean, nobody in the game has it yet, but sure, that sounds fun. You'll want to wear goggles if you fly at any kind of speed beyond like 25 mph. So will the girl you plan on somehow carrying around with you WITHOUT SUPER STRENGTH. Better hope you aren't too high off the ground when you get tired and drop her ass. I'm in pretty good shape but I don't think I'd want to try carrying a 100 pound girl in my arms for miles on end.

Super endurance. Uh huh. Now, are you talking orgasm control here, or lack of fatigue, or both? Because you know, that shit is going to really start to fucking chafe after a bit, and the girl is going to start hurting a lot too. Fucking for hours on end isn't as fun as it sounds.

Long story short (too late) - If all you want are the sex powers without anything else, you're essentially completely nixing the game's story.

haha, you are a funny guy.
1st: All of the powers I listed are already in the game. Knowing Fantasy, Orgasm Touch, Flying (I don't know how you figure no one has flight... Paris if full of them according to the game), Teleport... yep all there.
2nd: I didn't say you had to get teleport from the guy, figured would be a girl with it.
3rd: I said I didn't want Timestop, Super Strength, or Invisibility. But I did not say I want the MC to be weak, I hope he gets some other cool powers, not that he needs more according to others that have not really liked my views so far. Apparently his wolf is immortal, and his duplicate has all his powers (where the fuck they got that info I don't know).
4th: And knowing someone's fantasy... just because I know it does not imply I will want to do it... called choice.
5th: And the orgasm touch is just for the girls you want, just to please them, not addict random girls or even the ones you are with.... You try to turn every power I list into the creep version or worst case scenario.
6th: Endurance, not to fuck a girl raw (again with worst case), If the MC is going to have further 3somes or more, then would be nice to please all the girls... right?
7th never said only wanted sex powers, I like the story so far and look forward to more.

anyways... I am done trying to explain my post... as I feel people think I am against the game or the developer or something.
I am not. I like the game

So FORGIVE ME FOR WANTING SOME SEX POWERS.
And about Time Stop... cool power for fighting bad guys, way overpowered... but useless as a sex power unless you are a RAPIST.

that is all... just a game. have a nice day.
peace

 

[Snugglepuff]

And about Time Stop... cool power for fighting bad guys, way overpowered... but useless as a sex power unless you are a RAPIST.

Or... You're using it to stop time around you and the girl to help her explore her exhibitionism kink and develop it into a full-blown fetish.

 

[Pax Draconis]

Honestly, I'm having a hard time deciding if Lucia's power is actual time stopping or if it's just incredibly fast super speed. Because actual time stopping would have to affect literally everything in the entire universe. That's a pretty big ask for the suspension of disbelief, even when you're talking about super powers.

Whereas it could also be existing in between time. There's a subtle difference there, one involves phenomenal power to stop the fundamental forces of the universe the other would involve less than 1.21 gigawatts. Consider it like the ability to time travel without the ability to move forward or backward in time. If you posit a 4th dimensional plane for an objects existence within the bounds of time and space:
Think of it like frames of a film. Now instead of using the normal energy the object would use to move across the 4th-axis, it instead uses that same energy to move along the other 3: x-axis, y-axis, z-axis. It doesn't so much as take energy as redirect it, hence the aging that is experienced. Think of it like slow teleportation at least for the object being teleported. I mean this would take less energy than the infinite folding of dimensions that would need to happen in order to instantly step from one point of space to another instantaneously (true teleportation).

 

[Ghost'']

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[Elhemeer]

And the clones are stupidly powerful. They can do anything he can do. So they can use Emerald's power. And they can use super strength when he gets it. They could potentially summon their own psionic wolves too. If we assume the gallery is canon, Cat (the clone girl) has a picture in there with her and 4 clones about to "service" Emerald, so let's say 4 clones is the limit. That's 4 disposable clones able to potentially use every power the MC has at once. They might even be able to use his own power absorbing power themselves and transfer it back to him.

This is the only thing in your argument that we don't actually even have a hint about yet. The assumption that the clones are risk-free is something that I'm sure is going to be tested in the story. I kinda hope they're not though, since that really would be pretty OP once he gets full control over it.

Especially if you're right about them using his other powers.

 

[Crypt]

I'd like to file a kink complaint.

Please stop removing the stockings/thigh highs, etc during the sexy time. Please and thank you

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

We are talking about people who can summon mind wolves, relieve someone's else yesterday and even teleport people by just touching them once. Suspension of disbelief is a must here.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Well you and I are looking at his powers differently. If this was a TV show like The Boys, then yes all that you said is true and great for the MC.

Now if this is a porn game, and it is, then those are not that useful for getting more girls. Now knowing a girls fantasy and being able to get her addicted to just your touch (because it gives her mind blowing orgasms) then those are powers I WANT my MC to have.

I did not even give the Timestop girl the time of day... I did not agree to be her photographer, she is a Bitch and I don't even want her power, it is a rapey power like invisibility, don't want that one either.

And for the porn game I don't even want super strength, on the off chance it could end up hurting one of the girls.

Now other powers that would come in handy, are Teleportation (to take girls to nice places), Flying (girls would like that as well), Super endurance (he just keeps going and going, nice for ability to make lots of girls happy)

Do you see where I am coming from now?

As others have said, you are COMPLETELY ignoring the story part of the VN which makes your points....well, pointless.

We are talking about people who can summon mind wolves, relieve someone's else yesterday and even teleport people by just touching them once. Suspension of disbelief is a must here.

It's a superpower and sex VN, belief and logic went out the door as Jaq wrote the first word of the story