VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[noturiah]

"Was" intended, supposedly according to hear say, but got kicked to the fucking curb. Which is a great thing. We already have one cringy old man (who isn't all that great of a villain anyways), we don't need two.

Have to say I'm totally fine with the Ed route not being implemented, partly because it's hard to top Arthur in GGGB and I agree Seymour doesn't come close, even though Seymour is meant to fill some of the same daddy-issues story, if you want to play Lena that way. (I'll add "yet, at least" because I'll reserve final judgment on Seymour until I see Eva's plans for how he will make both his Lena and Ian puppets dance.) And if Seymour can't, so far, give Arthur some competition, Ed certainly cannot.

I can see where Eva was going with the setup for Ed and Molly - someone already mentioned that Molly's illness could open up an Ed/Lena route, and that makes sense. It could be an affair if Molly is in the hospital and Ed and Lena have to run the cafe, it could be a relationship if Molly dies and Lena and Ed get close emotionally, it could also just be a pity fuck or two on Lena's part in either scenario as well, depending on a player's version of Lena.

But the second reason I'm fine with an Ed route not happening is frankly that his personality, especially in the early part of the game, is just a less-incel version of Stan. They're both awkward, nervous guys who have boundary issues and can do versions of spying on Lena, and versions of making her uncomfortable with these passive-aggressive attitudes towards her. IMO they basically serve the same function for Lena's early story, the differences only being age, and one's in her home life while the other is in her work life.

You can say there's a degree to which all Lena's non-Ian options have some of these traits (and I'd largely agree) but only Stan and Ed have that milquetoast creeper vibe that's basically laughable. Robert is pathetic but can be a real threat with Lena's restaurant job - and there's for sure a subset of players who enjoy having Lena toy with him sexually and emotionally, just to watch him squirm. Axel can't handle Lena leaving him and aims to control her only slightly less than Seymour does. To Jeremy she's a trophy the way any girl is to Jeremy, to boost his own self-esteem. Mike gets off having her as "the other woman" and clearly can't form meaningful emotional attachments.

But Stan's just a laughable pervy young man, and Ed's just a laughable pervy old man. No sense giving both of them sexual content with Lena. I'm sure some here would say there's no sense in giving either of them sexual content with Lena, but that's a can of worms for another day...

 

[0tt0von]

Have to say I'm totally fine with the Ed route not being implemented, partly because it's hard to top Arthur in GGGB and I agree Seymour doesn't come close, even though Seymour is meant to fill some of the same daddy-issues story, if you want to play Lena that way. (I'll add "yet, at least" because I'll reserve final judgment on Seymour until I see Eva's plans for how he will make both his Lena and Ian puppets dance.) And if Seymour can't, so far, give Arthur some competition, Ed certainly cannot.

I can see where Eva was going with the setup for Ed and Molly - someone already mentioned that Molly's illness could open up an Ed/Lena route, and that makes sense. It could be an affair if Molly is in the hospital and Ed and Lena have to run the cafe, it could be a relationship if Molly dies and Lena and Ed get close emotionally, it could also just be a pity fuck or two on Lena's part in either scenario as well, depending on a player's version of Lena.

But the second reason I'm fine with an Ed route not happening is frankly that his personality, especially in the early part of the game, is just a less-incel version of Stan. They're both awkward, nervous guys who have boundary issues and can do versions of spying on Lena, and versions of making her uncomfortable with these passive-aggressive attitudes towards her. IMO they basically serve the same function for Lena's early story, the differences only being age, and one's in her home life while the other is in her work life.

You can say there's a degree to which all Lena's non-Ian options have some of these traits (and I'd largely agree) but only Stan and Ed have that milquetoast creeper vibe that's basically laughable. Robert is pathetic but can be a real threat with Lena's restaurant job - and there's for sure a subset of players who enjoy having Lena toy with him sexually and emotionally, just to watch him squirm. Axel can't handle Lena leaving him and aims to control her only slightly less than Seymour does. To Jeremy she's a trophy the way any girl is to Jeremy, to boost his own self-esteem. Mike gets off having her as "the other woman" and clearly can't form meaningful emotional attachments.

But Stan's just a laughable pervy young man, and Ed's just a laughable pervy old man. No sense giving both of them sexual content with Lena. I'm sure some here would say there's no sense in giving either of them sexual content with Lena, but that's a can of worms for another day...

Sounds like more evidence that Lena-Holly should be canon.

 

[hu lover]

good game, really like it.

 

[nayzen]

Do I understand correctly that Jessica is the same character as from GGGB? And if that's the case, then Ashley and other characters are walking around somewhere. Or is it just a parallel universe with the same people

 

[Gato21]

yeyeye we are all into ntr and ntr is the best thing in the world I understand know

you heard it eva give us more ntr they love it

Are you real?

I ask myself that sometimes too. The consistency of his predilection for cucking Ian and, metaphorically, the orthography of the English language leads me to believe he is, indeed, sincere.

 

[magaclaawe]

Jeremy needs to fuck Cindy.

 

[Gato21]

Jeremy needs to fuck Cindy.

Lena needs to fuck Cindy. Axel needs to fuck Cindy. Cindy needs to fuck Cindy. <insert name> needs to fuck Cindy. Your point being?

 

[vgbestly]

Lena needs to fuck Cindy. Axel needs to fuck Cindy. Cindy needs to fuck Cindy. <insert name> needs to fuck Cindy. Your point being?

EVERYONE needs to fuck. The content drought is real and I'm down bad.

 

[SerHawkes]

EVERYONE needs to fuck. The content drought is real and I'm down bad.

-Hawkes, sitting in the corning, drinking whiskey and smoking a cig, waiting 3+ years, 3 bullshit reworks, all for Ian-Ivy-

Clearly your new here...

 

[Triepslay]

Lets be real, axels the definition of working his glamor muscles.

I do agree to some extent, I don't see Robert beating him cuz that guy ain't better than Axel and his fighting style is just swinging, while someone like Jeremy would probably beat Axel, hell, Ian can too if he was really experienced in Jujutsu cuz I think Axel would try and throw a few punches then body slam Ian or smth, if Ian was experienced in Jujutsu then he can reverse that into a submission move.

Only reason I like Jeremy is the fact he's the only friend of Ian that has a personality with decent interactions, Perry is good too. Other than that he's just a guy chasing any pussy he can get.

 

[noturiah]

Do I understand correctly that Jessica is the same character as from GGGB? And if that's the case, then Ashley and other characters are walking around somewhere. Or is it just a parallel universe with the same people

Yes, that's right. And you can get the "good" or "bad" versions of Jessica depending on who Lena does or doesn't sleep with. Ian's new supervisor as of chapter 10, Natalie, is also the Natalie from GGGB, though she has no content yet outside of an intro scene. But, to throw a wrench into this, there's debate about whether the redhead Ian can watch doing porn near the start of the game is Ashley or not. She looks rather like Ashley. But I want to say that Good Jessica mentions a wife at some point? Someone here will correct me if I'm wrong about that. If true, that would mean the redhead is definitely not Ashley.

Are other characters from GGGB going to show up? No one knows. But personally, I'm waiting for the big reveal that Tyrone and Marcel are brothers and when the big rap star and his entourage visit town they use the basement of Blazer as a sex dungeon for all the young white women they can find...

Jeremy isn't allowed in, of course.

 

[nayzen]

Yes, that's right. And you can get the "good" or "bad" versions of Jessica depending on who Lena does or doesn't sleep with. Ian's new supervisor as of chapter 10, Natalie, is also the Natalie from GGGB, though she has no content yet outside of an intro scene. But, to throw a wrench into this, there's debate about whether the redhead Ian can watch doing porn near the start of the game is Ashley or not. She looks rather like Ashley. But I want to say that Good Jessica mentions a wife at some point? Someone here will correct me if I'm wrong about that. If true, that would mean the redhead is definitely not Ashley.

Are other characters from GGGB going to show up? No one knows. But personally, I'm waiting for the big reveal that Tyrone and Marcel are brothers and when the big rap star and his entourage visit town they use the basement of Blazer as a sex dungeon for all the young white women they can find...

Jeremy isn't allowed in, of course.

Ian will not be lucky if he meets Jasmin in the final of the tournament

 

[GokutheG]

Yes, that's right. And you can get the "good" or "bad" versions of Jessica depending on who Lena does or doesn't sleep with. Ian's new supervisor as of chapter 10, Natalie, is also the Natalie from GGGB, though she has no content yet outside of an intro scene. But, to throw a wrench into this, there's debate about whether the redhead Ian can watch doing porn near the start of the game is Ashley or not. She looks rather like Ashley. But I want to say that Good Jessica mentions a wife at some point? Someone here will correct me if I'm wrong about that. If true, that would mean the redhead is definitely not Ashley.

Are other characters from GGGB going to show up? No one knows. But personally, I'm waiting for the big reveal that Tyrone and Marcel are brothers and when the big rap star and his entourage visit town they use the basement of Blazer as a sex dungeon for all the young white women they can find...

Jeremy isn't allowed in, of course.

Jessica mentions that Ash is who she is engaged to. I've also seen her say that Dave is who she's marrying. Seems to depend on if Lena accepts Seymour's contact in his office or not. If Ash does show up I hope she is in a relationship with either Jessica or Eva.

 

[Reaurt]

Yes, that's right. And you can get the "good" or "bad" versions of Jessica depending on who Lena does or doesn't sleep with. Ian's new supervisor as of chapter 10, Natalie, is also the Natalie from GGGB, though she has no content yet outside of an intro scene. But, to throw a wrench into this, there's debate about whether the redhead Ian can watch doing porn near the start of the game is Ashley or not. She looks rather like Ashley. But I want to say that Good Jessica mentions a wife at some point? Someone here will correct me if I'm wrong about that. If true, that would mean the redhead is definitely not Ashley.

Are other characters from GGGB going to show up? No one knows. But personally, I'm waiting for the big reveal that Tyrone and Marcel are brothers and when the big rap star and his entourage visit town they use the basement of Blazer as a sex dungeon for all the young white women they can find...

Jeremy isn't allowed in, of course.

EvaKiss has noted that the redhead in the porn scene at the beginning of ORS is not actually Ashley, just a look-a-like easter egg.

As a side note, ActuallyAshley would be a great Onlyfans ... oh excuse me, "StalkFap" name for Ashley if she were to show up. I doubt Ashley will ever make an appearance, outside of a cameo in a scene with GoodJess.

 

[Blurpee69]

the redhead Ian can watch doing porn near the start of the game is Ashley or not. She looks rather like Ashley. But I want to say that Good Jessica mentions a wife at some point? Someone here will correct me if I'm wrong about that. If true, that would mean the redhead is definitely not Ashley.

I think, originally, it was supposed to be Ashley and just thrown in as an easter egg. But now as the story has progressed and ideas have changed, the red headed porn star is now just a nameless pornstar.

Speaking of all the cameos in ORS though, do we know approximately how many years have passed since GGGB? Like a decade perhaps? Both Jess and Natalie seem more like 30-35 year olds now, but then Mike looks the exact same.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

-Hawkes, sitting in the corning, drinking whiskey and smoking a cig, waiting 3+ years, 3 bullshit reworks, all for Ian-Ivy-

Clearly your new here...

You can do it man! Just couple more years.

 

[soprano31]

Lena needs to fuck Cindy. Axel needs to fuck Cindy. Cindy needs to fuck Cindy. <insert name> needs to fuck Cindy. Your point being?

Cindy has to be fucked for hours in all holes in the most exhausting orgies,
her eyes have to roll back from the wildest ecstasies,
the cum has to flow everywhere on her body,
while she licks it off like a horny little lap dog that just wants more and more.

she came to this earth for one thing only,
to serve as the horniest,wildest cum demanding slut she was born to be.

Her life motto that she always contributes:"I was a whore,I am a whore,And i will always remain a whore."

 

[vgbestly]

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Put this in the fan art page too if you can.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Cindy has to be fucked for hours in all holes in the most exhausting orgies,
her eyes have to roll back from the wildest ecstasies,
the cum has to flow everywhere on her body,
while she licks it off like a horny little lap dog that just wants more and more.

she came to this earth for one thing only,
to serve as the horniest,wildest cum demanding slut she was born to be.

Her life motto that she always contributes:"I was a whore,I am a whore,And i will always remain a whore."
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This but with that boring nerd Holly.

 

[| Vee |]

-Hawkes, sitting in the corning, drinking whiskey and smoking a cig, waiting 3+ years, 3 bullshit reworks, all for Ian-Ivy-

Clearly your new here...

This too shall pass my friend!

I do agree to some extent, I don't see Robert beating him cuz that guy ain't better than Axel and his fighting style is just swinging, while someone like Jeremy would probably beat Axel, hell, Ian can too if he was really experienced in Jujutsu cuz I think Axel would try and throw a few punches then body slam Ian or smth, if Ian was experienced in Jujutsu then he can reverse that into a submission move.

Only reason I like Jeremy is the fact he's the only friend of Ian that has a personality with decent interactions, Perry is good too. Other than that he's just a guy chasing any pussy he can get.

I don't want to be the one who jinxed BUT Axel is giving me Drago Ivan vibes from Rocky(at least Drago lost and Ian still can get upperhand with jiujutsu)