VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Xupuzulla]

I did say on most of the posts about Axel's photography and the advantage he got out of it. He still has ill intent with the girls working for him. He just comes off as a less shady character because he has photography skills to back it up with.

So.........im right and Cindy is falling for it hook,line and sinker?
I dont understand why are we arguing you guys literally agree the photography is important which it was my original point what the fuck

 

[SearingFive]

As you said earlier, part of the audience for this game is IRL Stans, for them this type of writing makes them horny. It’s not surprising that Eva follows the lead of this audience, but how little they need to be happy. "Alpha male cock", LMAO.

The only good cameo mechanic is Natasha, so far all we have is teasing for two episodes. Nothing is rushed, the writing is quite realistic and believable in what is happening. Ian can flirt with her for now, but no "jump on my dick right now, Ian" bullshit. It would kill all the interest.

Bruh, who even gets horny with those lines. I'd reevaluate my life if I got hard from "Alpha male cock".
Yup, Natasha is the perfect study on how a cameo should be done in ORS. Meanwhile "Alpha male cock"

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Futhermore, it was well noted above about Axel and the description matches exactly. Axel is a very unprofessional photographer in his behavior with models, he simply uses his skills to get into girls' panties. As is the case with Cindy. Such photographers exist, there are even those who fuck their models, but among photographers this is generally considered unacceptable, since they cast a shadow on the profession. In general, Axel is the same creepy guy as Stan, only with good looks and the charisma of pick-up girls. Just like Stan, with a set of psychological complexes, but unlike Stan, he is in good physical shape and his narcissism allows for direct aggression.

 

[SearingFive]

So.........im right and Cindy is falling for it hook,line and sinker?
I dont understand why are we arguing you guys literally agree the photography is important which it was my original point what the fuck

 

[ffive]

Ian can flirt with her for now, but no "jump on my dick right now, Ian" bullshit. It would kill all the interest.

Pfff as if. I don't see people decrying Alison or Cherry as "killing all interest" because they can jump on Ian's dick right off the bat. No one would complain if Nat was the same, it's apparently only a problem if Lena does it.

 

[lorkdubo]

Futhermore, it was well noted above about Axel and the description matches exactly. Axel is a very unprofessional photographer in his behavior with models, he simply uses his skills to get into girls' panties. As is the case with Cindy. Such photographers exist, there are even those who fuck their models, but among photographers this is generally considered unacceptable, since they cast a shadow on the profession. In general, Axel is the same creepy guy as Stan, only with good looks and the charisma of pick-up girls. Just like Stan, with a set of psychological complexes, but unlike Stan, he is in good physical shape and his narcissism allows for direct aggression.

It's quite obvious that if Cindy goes the Axel way, she is going to feature quite a few blacked videos. So, a Jessica 2.0.
Unprofessional photographers tend to introduce or sway the girls to the porn/escort industry. Cindy is naive enough that think she is going to be a supermodel. Well, it is what it is I guess. You either strike a god-tier professional photographer that shields you from everything and you're genuine talent (which we know Axel is not) or you are spoon feed by having peak connections in the industry that get you immunity from the infinity of people that want to have you as a stool and fuck you in the ass.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Bruh, who even gets horny with those lines. I'd reevaluate my life if I got hard from "Alpha male cock".
Yup, Natasha is the perfect study on how a cameo should be done in ORS. Meanwhile "Alpha male cock"

Meahwhile, some brigade here from "alpha male cock":

 

[lorkdubo]

Pfff as if. I don't see people decrying Alison or Cherry as "killing all interest" because they can jump on Ian's dick right off the bat. No one would complain if Nat was the same, it's apparently only a problem if Lena does it.

It's more of a spiral of degradation. I recently watched Forrest Gump again and Jenny is such a prime example. She learned her lesson and did everything to set her life straight and wanted redemption when she was on the brink of death.
Either way, she is a good example of moral degradation and Cindy is going in that direction. The same as Jessica in GGGB.

 

[yuvce]

The only good cameo mechanic is Natasha, so far all we have is teasing for two episodes. Nothing is rushed, the writing is quite realistic and believable in what is happening. Ian can flirt with her for now, but no "jump on my dick right now, Ian" bullshit. It would kill all the interest.

Yup, Natasha is the perfect study on how a cameo should be done in ORS. Meanwhile "Alpha male cock"

I rather liked how Jessica's cameo was handled. In the sense that the player's choices determine how she turned out in her life.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Pfff as if. I don't see people decrying Alison or Cherry as "killing all interest" because they can jump on Ian's dick right off the bat. No one would complain if Nat was the same, it's apparently only a problem if Lena does it.

On the contrary, dragging out the scene with Nat makes her more desirable.
Overall, Alison and Cherry is hook-up content for the early game to give the player something. But at the same time, Cherry is an interesting character who doesn't cause rejection and her storyline is well written. A lot of people also like Alison because it's well written, although there are people who don't like a lot of things about her personality (like those yandere vibes that annoys).

I don't mind Lena do things. I have several paths, one of which is Lena is a complete whore and a trash person, I explore the game, and let the world burn. But let it be done good.

 

[SearingFive]

It's quite obvious that if Cindy goes the Axel way, she is going to feature quite a few blacked videos. So, a Jessica 2.0.
Unprofessional photographers tend to introduce or sway the girls to the porn/escort industry. Cindy is naive enough that think she is going to be a supermodel. Well, it is what it is I guess. You either strike a god-tier professional photographer that shields you from everything and you're genuine talent (which we know Axel is not) or you are spoon feed by having peak connections in the industry that get you immunity from the infinity of people that want to have you as a stool and fuck you in the ass.

For me it's the opposite, Axel is legit in his profession but has shady morals against his working models and he did help Cindy get the contract with the Wildcats. Billy; for me, is the guy who will introduce the porno path to the girls.

I rather liked how Jessica's cameo was handled. In the sense that the player's choices determine how she turned out in her life.

Oh shit, I forgot about Jess. Yup, she is written well as a good cameo.

 

[SpectralRaptor]

On the contrary, dragging out the scene with Nat makes her more desirable.
Overall, Alison and Cherry is hook-up content for the early game to give the player something. But at the same time, Cherry is an interesting character who doesn't cause rejection and her storyline is well written. A lot of people also like Alison because it's well written, although there are people who don't like a lot of things about her personality (like those yandere vibes that annoys).

I don't mind Lena do things. I have several paths, one of which is Lena is a complete whore and a trash person, I explore the game, and let the world burn. But let it be done good.

Who is that character in your avatar?

 

[SearingFive]

Who is that character in your avatar?

Custom Sage render from BADIK.

 

[SpectralRaptor]

Custom Sage render from BADIK.

Oh wow that's her?Completely different

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

It's quite obvious that if Cindy goes the Axel way, she is going to feature quite a few blacked videos. So, a Jessica 2.0.
Unprofessional photographers tend to introduce or sway the girls to the porn/escort industry. Cindy is naive enough that think she is going to be a supermodel. Well, it is what it is I guess. You either strike a god-tier professional photographer that shields you from everything and you're genuine talent (which we know Axel is not) or you are spoon feed by having peak connections in the industry that get you immunity from the infinity of people that want to have you as a stool and fuck you in the ass.

Out of Ian's path, it is possible that Cindy will end up in Blacked, she is very sensitive and hostile to any criticism when she is told that Axel does shit. I don't see any way to change Cindy's story here. She doesn't listen to anyone.

Or she will end up with Axel in the same toxic relationship as Lena once did, repeating this cycle.

I rather liked how Jessica's cameo was handled. In the sense that the player's choices determine how she turned out in her life.

Jess is the second cameo for me, but I prefer the Good Jess option. It's interesting that Jess variants are different from Lena's decisions. The most mysterious mechanic.

 

[Solomon Grundy]

Futhermore, it was well noted above about Axel and the description matches exactly. Axel is a very unprofessional photographer in his behavior with models, he simply uses his skills to get into girls' panties. As is the case with Cindy. Such photographers exist, there are even those who fuck their models, but among photographers this is generally considered unacceptable, since they cast a shadow on the profession. In general, Axel is the same creepy guy as Stan, only with good looks and the charisma of pick-up girls. Just like Stan, with a set of psychological complexes, but unlike Stan, he is in good physical shape and his narcissism allows for direct aggression.

Well...

 

[Gicoo]

Billy; for me, is the guy who will introduce the porno path to the girls.

Going from his attitude and behavior, he strikes me just as Jeremy: Too stupid to be malicious.

 

[BlandChili]

Yeah maybe its just how jeliouse ian acts??but I would appreciate abit more drama maybe axel will taunt ian??

I doubt he'd interact with Ian directly. Presumably Axel would only taunt Ian eventually if Ian is or has been with Lena.

Doesn't she still indirectly implies that she misses Axel or something along the these lines? IIIRC, I read someone's post can't remember whom.

Feelings don't automatically go away just because you realise the person you're into is toxic.

 

[Xupuzulla]

For me it's the opposite, Axel is legit in his profession but has shady morals against his working models and he did help Cindy get the contract with the Wildcats.

Yep,wildcats is sold by EK as a huge agency,i doubt he would be working for them if he was a shitty photographer.
Does Axel uses his photography to fuck girls?yes.
Does Cindy is falling for all his tricks just like Lena?yes.
Will Cindy suck him off in the yatch?YOU BETTER BELIEVE SHE WILL!

 

[| Vee |]

Pfff as if. I don't see people decrying Alison or Cherry as "killing all interest" because they can jump on Ian's dick right off the bat. No one would complain if Nat was the same, it's apparently only a problem if Lena does it.

I don't complain for Lena hooking up with someone(except Robert or Stan, than I will judge you) whether it's one night stand or anything else. The complain is about including worthless character over and over, again and again, despite saying There won't be anymore new characters as I want to not overwhelm branching's(EK's post regarding Ed), when that time could be used on main cast so we don't have to wait for 3 more fucking years.