VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[SearingFive]

Not gonna lie,Holly wearing all black,full of piercings and tattos would change the negative image i have about that geek.

Like this?

 

[Prince of Depression]

Not gonna lie,Holly wearing all black,full of piercings and tattos would change the negative image i have about that geek.

Cringe.
Imagine calling Holly a geek while posting on this site.

 

[bonerland]

Dude pills fuckup her health badly, Do you think any sane person without a kink will put herself through constant suffering instead of making their partner wear condom. She ain't taking them cause of health reasons and she got breeding kink too. You're understanding what I'm saying here?

Answer to your question is YES! If any character behaves a certain way than that character is like that on those paths.

They give her headaches and make her nauseous. Hardly wrecking her health. Getting that plus the other side effects of pregnancy is counterintuitive. Plus, Ian can tell her he likes her new look, something she takes into consideration. A human growing inside of her would wreck that (hair dye is very bad for a growing baby). The cons of a hypothetical baby trapping outweigh the pros.

And no, you don't actually think that, you full on think Alison is like that on any path where her and Ian aren't a committed couple.

 

[ffive]

Holly can also try to flirt with Ian later on in the story, if they don't get together initially. I can't recall if it's only with a high change variable, but my assumption is that they might have a sexual scene or two at some point, perhaps leading to a more casual relationship between them, depending on her relationship with Lena and such.

Yup, Holly will do that if her change variable is high enough. I imagine if this happens, player/Ian will get choice whether they want to (try to) "advance" this to a closer relationship or keep it casual. Perhaps how they go about it will influence the way things play out between Holly and Clark.

 

[BlandChili]

Holly would stick to barbells through the nips, but maybe she can have a cute charm to dangle from a belly button ring.
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Sure, though I'd hope for a choice. I've always seen BB piercings as incredibly dumb looking personally, so I always prefer to pick against it, given the option.

To me it reads more as placeholders in case EK wants to add more later, but doesn't necessarily mean it will be an option.

I think this is the best way to see them. Ian has variables for a beard as well, no sign of that so far. Code can always be added, so never say never just because any indicators is missing currently.

Yup, Holly will do that if her change variable is high enough. I imagine if this happens, player/Ian will get choice whether they want to (try to) "advance" this to a closer relationship or keep it casual. Perhaps how they go about it will influence the way things play out between Holly and Clark.

I guess time will tell if any romance comes of it. I could see two reads on how it might be pathed:
1. EvaKiss doesn't want to add too many branching options, therefore she'll steer Ian/Holly back towards the same romance path, if they get together at a later point in the story. She already consolidated the gym-Holly and non-gym-Holly paths, sadly, so I don't think it's unlikely we'll see more consolidation. Perhaps there would be some tonal differences between getting them together early or late and depending on Holly's change variable. This of course opens up a possible conflict between Cindy and Holly's paths, but I'd assume Eva might railroad Ian into a commitment before any arise.
2. If EvaKiss wants late-Holly to be distinct I would assume this version of Ian/Holly will have some different content and perhaps not even allow for any romantic exclusivity. The rationale for Holly here being "by changing I got Ian's attention, if I change more, like Ivy and Lena suggests, I will get more!" leading to more casual sex encounters, both with Ian and others, Lena and Ivy too depending on your specific choices here.

 

[mommysboiii]

nah i hope we get corruption options in releationships too this is still the GGGB author and there are still 6-8 chapters left (she porb dosent want to do it to early because game is more realistic and it would destroy the path so she does it in last 3-4 episodes )
I will not believe that there will be no kinky/real corruption options in the future

dosent matter if its lena,cindy,holly,alison

I will not believe than you can litterly turn alison into a bimbo and have a relationship with her that there wont be some kinky cheating or corruption scenes

or that the holly (corruption/holly wants to be like lena) will just be her changing clothing and getting tattoed up /doing a bit of pole dancing nahhh no way they will end on a yacht in porn shoot like in GGGB mark my words LADSSS

jess already warned about ivy that she reminds her of herself and that she plays a (dangerous game) if you play lena slutty you will probably drag holly with you down the line unless they completly break up friendship which I dont think will happen

same with cindy and alison

 

[BlandChili]

nah i hope we get corruption options in releationships too this is still the GGGB author and there are still 6-8 chapters left
I will not believe that there will be no kinky/real corruption options in the future

dosent matter if its lena,cindy,holly,alison

I will not believe than you can litterly turn alison into a bimbo and have a relationship with her that there wont be some kinky cheating or corruption scenes

or that the holly (corruption/holly wants to be like lena) will just be her changing clothing and getting tattoed up nahhh no way they will end on a yacht in porn shoot like in GGGB mark my words LADSSS

same with cindy and alison

I don't think you have to despair over the availability of corruption content, I just think it's going to come in specific forms from specific characters.

With Holly I just don't see her changing away from her empathetic and generally sweet personality, so while I won't write off the option to have content where her and Ian are sexually involved without romance, I just don't see Holly cheating on Ian deliberately. We see how she despairs over catching feelings for Lena on the romance route, I don't think that core to her character will ever not be there. So, sure, sexual openness and casual sex with her and Ian on a route like I suggested I think will be possible, but I don't think deliberate cheating, at least not where the kink is emphasised specifically, will happen with her, not unless Ian himself introduces it as a kink and is into it.

In a similar vein I think Cindy will have specific content depend on the route you pick and it won't really deviate from that. If you romance her correctly and don't cheat on her, she won't cheat on Ian either. If you emphasise the cheating kink with her and Wade, then sure it would come into play there and with Axel too. I'm still not sure Cindy would actually enjoy the humiliation, but I haven't actually played the route so I don't know if there is any tonal shifts to indicate that she herself thinks cheating on Wade is hot.
If you deliberately half-ass her route trying to get her with Axel, against either Ian or Wade, I'm not really convinced that a route will come that relates her to any specific humiliation kinks, I think Cindy would focus her attention on her new relationship and her new career. Axel might give Ian some heat depending on his relationship to Lena, but outside of that we don't really get any indication that he really gives a fuck what other men think of the women he fucks.

Alison very specifically is already involved with exhibitionism towards Ian from very early on, so there is no arguing some of her content will continue to head that way.

 

[mommysboiii]

I don't think you have to despair over the availability of corruption content, I just think it's going to come in specific forms from specific characters.

With Holly I just don't see her changing away from her empathetic and generally sweet personality, so while I won't write off the option to have content where her and Ian are sexually involved without romance, I just don't see Holly cheating on Ian deliberately. We see how she despairs over catching feelings for Lena on the romance route, I don't think that core to her character will ever not be there. So, sure, sexual openness and casual sex with her and Ian on a route like I suggested I think will be possible, but I don't think deliberate cheating, at least not where the kink is emphasised specifically, will happen with her, not unless Ian himself introduces it as a kink and is into it.

In a similar vein I think Cindy will have specific content depend on the route you pick and it won't really deviate from that. If you romance her correctly and don't cheat on her, she won't cheat on Ian either. If you emphasise the cheating kink with her and Wade, then sure it would come into play there and with Axel too. I'm still not sure Cindy would actually enjoy the humiliation, but I haven't actually played the route so I don't know if there is any tonal shifts to indicate that she herself thinks cheating on Wade is hot.
If you deliberately half-ass her route trying to get her with Axel, against either Ian or Wade, I'm not really convinced that a route will come that relates her to any specific humiliation kinks, I think Cindy would focus her attention on her new relationship and her new career. Axel might give Ian some heat depending on his relationship to Lena, but outside of that we don't really get any indication that he really gives a fuck what other men think of the women he fucks.

Alison very specifically is already involved with exhibitionism towards Ian from very early on, so there is no arguing some of her content will continue to head that way.

ok what do you think future ivy/ lena content will look like serious question???? becasue you know GGGB and I mean we can guess what will happen at later chapters or???


the problem that I have with your claim i mean Ikinda agree that AT THE MOMENT it dosent fit her character but what do you think will happen lena and ivy will stop haning out with holly in the later chapters???

my guess is depending on the path lena and ivy will go more down the corruption hole with billly ,partys,drugs,gangbangs,cheating,personalitie changing.... and holly will ofc accompany them so I am pretty sure because holly char is easy influanceable that this things will happen with a HIGH CHANGE viable


the point with holly that I dont understand is what will you think will happen in the future if lena and ivy go down deeper the corruption hole???



cindy is the same I am pretty sure she will be dragged down no idea if it will be ivy or axel or competition with lena no idea who will be resposible but I am sure there will be a way even in a relationship because she is naiv ,desperate and already has no rpoblem with cheating espaiclly if it gets her closer to her goal what she thinks she deserve


aliosn the same I will not believe that the bimbo alison path is just a loving gf thing she will prob also go depper and deeper


the more the chapters go foward the more the corruption will play out

again this is still GGGB author even if the game is more slowburn/realistic in the beginning the corruption/drama is still the endgoal on most path

 

[Andrea9999]

With Holly I just don't see her changing away from her empathetic and generally sweet personality....

While I agree here....I would prefer to see her in a protected relationship with Marcel who would do anything for her.

 

[SearingFive]

I will not believe that there will be no kinky/real corruption options in the future

dosent matter if its lena,cindy,holly,alison

I will not believe than you can litterly turn alison into a bimbo and have a relationship with her that there wont be some kinky cheating or corruption scenes

or that the holly (corruption/holly wants to be like lena) will just be her changing clothing and getting tattoed up /doing a bit of pole dancing nahhh no way they will end on a yacht in porn shoot like in GGGB mark my words LADSSS

jess already warned about ivy that she reminds her of herself and that she plays a (dangerous game) if you play lena slutty you will probably drag holly with you down the line unless they completly break up friendship which I dont think will happen

same with cindy and alison

What kind of real kinks are we talking about? We do have some in the current update or are you looking for Arthur's fart kink?

 

[SearingFive]

While I agree here....I would prefer to see her in a protected relationship with Marcel who would do anything for her.

When somebody messes with Holly. Marcel be like.

 

[lucadiadis]

Yes,later you can cheat on Ian with Jeremy,
but if you did it in ch 8,
she doesn't want a relationship,
so cheat on him afterwards,but not before with Jeremy ..

When on earth can Lena cheat on Ian with Jeremy please ?

I have just replayed my Lena cheating path, and the option is nowhere to be seen. If you mean at the club on the Friday, I am only given Marcel as an option, not Jeremy.

 

[Blurpee69]

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View attachment 3342768 When somebody messes with Holly. Marcel be like.

I liked Marcel a whole lot more when this might have been the case. The scene wwith Lena... Kind of changes my opinion.

 

[mommysboiii]

What kind of real kinks are we talking about? We do have some in the current update or are you looking for Arthur's fart kink?

I am talking more about the our red string endgame like billy partys, drugs ,cheating, body changing, personalitie changing,gangbangs,porn like the jess videos BBC ganbangs...

like in GGGB the last chapters

 

[SearingFive]

I liked Marcel a whole lot more when this might have been the case. The scene wwith Lena... Kind of changes my opinion.

Well, that took a 180 for BBC pandering. RIP loving Marcel.

I am talking more about the our red string endgame like billy partys, drugs ,cheating, body changing, personalitie changing,gangbangs,porn like the jess videos BBC ganbangs...

like in GGGB the last chapters

 

[Andrea9999]

View attachment 3342768 When somebody messes with Holly. Marcel be like.

Yes! That is it! That would be Marcel just after Axel makes Holly give him her lunch money.

 

[BlandChili]

ok what do you think future ivy/ lena content will look like serious question???? becasue you know GGGB and I mean we can guess what will happen at later chapters or???

To be honest I haven't given Ivy/Lena as a pairing a lot of thought I'm not so much into Ivy myself.

I think there are some open questions that needs to be answered before I could really begin to predict where they might go. Does she harbour romantic feelings for Lena? If so then we might even be able to get Lena to rein in her sexual bravado somewhat. If not then I think it's quite possible to get a "sexy roomies" kinda outcome like with Ash and bad Jess in GGGB, perhaps even including Holly on her Ivy route, where they live together, have sex with each other and have sex with others. Who knows. Ivy is kind of a weird character because her content has the appearance of of being 100% omegawhore, but she doesn't actually have a lot of content.

the problem that I have with your claim i mean Ikinda agree that AT THE MOMENT it dosent fit her character but what do you think will happen lena and ivy will stop haning out with holly in the later chapters???

No, but why should a lack of further sexual escalation stop them from being friends? So far Ivy has encouraged Holly to have sex with more men, but beyond that and showing off her body there isn't actually anything super radical to her supposed corruption.

my guess is depending on the path lena and ivy will go more down the corruption hole with billly ,partys,drugs .... and holly will ofc accompany them so I am pretty sure because holly char is easy influanceable that this things will happen with a HIGH CHANGE viable

I won't deny it's a possibility, but so far all of "Billy's content" is a hypothetical, I think we have to see where it actually leads and get an indication that anyone wants to include Holly in it, before we can really say if it will determine anything for her. Given Eva's recent trend to consolidate some routes I am not yet convinced she'll add even more branching to Holly by putting her in touch with whatever comes with Billy. We'll see soon enough I suppose.

the point with holly that I dont understand is what will you think will happen in the future if lena and ivy go down deeper the corruption hole???

That depends on how deep that hole is. Teehee.
Like I said, I'd prefer to actually know what comes of Billy and his content before I start predicting how Holly or anyone else fits into it.

cindy is the same I am pretty sure she will be dragged down no idea if it will be ivy or axel or competition with lena no idea who will be resposible but I am sure there will be a way even in a relationship because she is naiv ,desperate and already has no rpoblem with cheating espaiclly if it gets her clother to her goal what she thinks she deserve

Well, I suppose this boating trip of hers will reveal to us what barriers she will break or not.

aliosn the same I will not believe that the bimbo alison path is just a loving gf thing she will prob also go depper and deeper

I think that is entirely up to Ian. If he ignores her and she goes bimbo-route that way, then sure, she will probably escalate. I'm kinda curious to see if she gets to interact with Lean and Ivy through Billy somehow.

again this is still GGGB author even if the game is more slowburn/realistic in the beginning the corruption is still the endgoal on most path

Its also very different game with two protagonists with different genders. I don't think anything can be declared so simply.

While I agree here....I would prefer to see her in a protected relationship with Marcel who would do anything for her.

Well, good luck with that I suppose. I don't think Eva herself really knows what to do with Marcel yet.

I liked Marcel a whole lot more when this might have been the case. The scene wwith Lena... Kind of changes my opinion.

Yeah, his tone shifted somewhat. I didn't mind it a whole lot personally, I thought people were reading too much into Marcel as it was.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Well, that took a 180 for BBC pandering. RIP loving Marcel.

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Meh. She should've just kept Billy black and made his dick thicker. Learned after the latest poll that's what the people wanted, so did a quick change to Marcel that was completely out of character for him.

 

[Blurpee69]

I am talking more about the our red string endgame like billy partys, drugs ,cheating, body changing, personalitie changing,gangbangs,porn like the jess videos BBC ganbangs...

like in GGGB the last chapters

Hopefully not as rushed. For some storylines it felt like we went from a nice cruising speed to "Oh shit, the banks about to close" levels of speed.

Well, that took a 180 for BBC pandering. RIP loving Marcel.

I don't mind BBC, but Jeremy already filled that role (kind of). Hell Marcel could have even still filled that role by simply being a black dude with a big dick. But I liked the idea of him being a gentle giant with a soft spot for Holly rather than "Heyo, I heard you like the dark meat!" that he was with Lena.

 

[BlandChili]

Hopefully not as rushed. For some storylines it felt like we went from a nice cruising speed to "Oh shit, the banks about to close" levels of speed.

Heh, first time bimbo Alison showed up for the Ian I thought was gently easing her into enjoying threesomes with him I was wondering if she was already a lost cause. I just wanted some hot group sex.

I don't mind BBC, but Jeremy already filled that role (kind of).

Jeremy is cheater though and very pathetic in expression when you want to emphasise masculinity. I'm not specifically into BBC myself, but if I was I'd find the kink still unfulfilled because you have to aid him in cheating on your friend.

Hell Marcel could have even still filled that role by simply being a black dude with a big dick. But I liked the idea of him being a gentle giant with a soft spot for Holly rather than "Heyo, I heard you like the dark meat!" that he was with Lena.

I agree at least that it was a very unsubtle way to include Marcel. I kinda wish Lena could be the one to come onto him first. Also annoying that you have to already be into Jeremy or Axel, I think, to get with Marcel.